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malignancy — I'm Weak. I'm Not Weak
Published: 2004-03-03 19:35:19 +0000 UTC; Views: 53; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 4
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Description This is just one of those spiritual poem...You just have those days I guess.
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evcfenix [2004-03-10 08:23:31 +0000 UTC]

could change the last line of the first stanza to 'mine' instead of 'my one' though. enjoyed it

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malignancy In reply to evcfenix [2004-03-10 16:31:43 +0000 UTC]

hmm, that's true, although I wasn't sure if everyone would get that I meant my 3rd eye instead of just my normal eyes. Would you have gotten it? Now I'm curious. I'm glad that you liked it though.

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evcfenix In reply to malignancy [2004-03-11 05:00:56 +0000 UTC]

oh. since u put it thata way, its better to use 'my one' i didnt noe it was referring to ur third eye

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malignancy In reply to evcfenix [2004-03-11 18:37:34 +0000 UTC]

crap, but see...u didn't see it that way either....so there's something wrong with the poem now. poop on a stick! Maybe I should switch the wording around.

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champignon [2004-03-03 19:55:35 +0000 UTC]

hey great idea- v original
-I'm not ready to use the gift you've given me.- i like this a lot : )

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malignancy In reply to champignon [2004-03-03 20:25:19 +0000 UTC]

Thanx...I still feel that way as well. I'll have to check out your gallery now, it is a definate must.

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