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malignancy — Inferno
Published: 2004-03-13 01:17:18 +0000 UTC; Views: 47; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 13
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These are still my younger crappy poems, so stick with me here. I'll tell you when the new stuff starts rolling again. Anyway, this title totally sux for this kind of poem....this is nothing even fucking close to "Inferno"...Jesus, what was I thinking? Young and dumb. This poem sux and it isn't about anyone. I was just day dreaming on day.Related content
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I allow you to change my life.
I've been waiting an eternity, someone who can finally see,
But when I turn there's no one there.
I reach out my hand in the deafening air.
This poem totally suggests bits from Dante's Inferno, and I can draw parallels between it at least (if you haven't read it and its a coincidence) This really isnt terrible, I like reading the recognition of Dante's situations in this more abstract, modern setting. It makes you think, good work 
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awesome, I've always heard about Dante's Inferno, but was never bored enough to read it. I have so many books...eventually I will get to that one. Thanks for the comment.
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No problem, it's awesome! I was reading it earlier today, actually. It's just such a cool idea
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