champignon [2004-05-04 17:30:23 +0000 UTC]

oooh i love the raw quality that this poem has- the punctuation sets a pace that seems like the narrator is thinking.

We watch fish. It's nice.
I don't know you at all.
No questions. No answers. It's nice.
It's perfect. I like you.

-----> i particularly like these lines- we watch fish- ingenious !! yum yum lovely jubbly poem u have here

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rockisdeaddclxvi [2004-05-04 05:19:53 +0000 UTC]

i like this...the idea and the way it's written...
and i'm always shocked, and not in a good way, about the number of comments (or lack thereof) i normally see on your work...i hope you don't take that as a bad thing...your work is very very good...some people just don't understand great art...
dw

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