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AngelY2Knight [2004-04-09 17:35:07 +0000 UTC]
~rockisdeaddclxvi is right, you have to post what you feel like, happy or not
it's what you feel in the moment, if you wanna sumit it, just do it..... is your poetry, or not? you have the right to do with it what you want, if you wanna put it here, and you feel like doing it, do it!
AND!!!!!!! i like this piece, i can identify with it, almost in all the lines! it's just so pure, I can tell that it's from your heart.
good work! (
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malignancy In reply to AngelY2Knight [2004-04-09 17:41:49 +0000 UTC]
thanks again...but I do worry about what all of you think as well...I mean, yes, I love doing it all for me, but sometimes I get bored with repedativeness, and when I see something new and fresh, I like to grab onto that as well....but still and so, I will do it for me, cause in the end...that is how I feel as well. Thanx again.
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rockisdeaddclxvi [2004-04-09 13:40:50 +0000 UTC]
I'm now set free I suppose,
i really like this line...and this piece...
dw
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malignancy In reply to rockisdeaddclxvi [2004-04-09 14:09:22 +0000 UTC]
thanx...I like it too...tell me, do ya think I should put some more happy poems on here?
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rockisdeaddclxvi In reply to malignancy [2004-04-09 14:14:33 +0000 UTC]
hmm....well...if you want some sort of balance...maybe...but i think what you post, emotion wise, feels fine enough...i say just post what you feel like...whether it's happy or not...that's what i say...
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malignancy In reply to rockisdeaddclxvi [2004-04-09 17:26:52 +0000 UTC]
good advice...thanx. I shall keep my lovely, insane poetry about then...although, I do have some happy shite as well, so you'll obviously know when I post it.
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evcfenix [2004-04-09 10:25:39 +0000 UTC]
i dont quite understand who this is directed too but nvm. i dont have a right to noe anyways. very well written. the anger shows. and yeah, lies piss me off too! i cant stand facades and two faced backstabbers. they piss me off too. grrrr....
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malignancy In reply to evcfenix [2004-04-09 13:29:02 +0000 UTC]
well..it's not really directed at any one person...This is really for all the people who don't believe in me...you know? It's just one of those liberating poems I guess...
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evcfenix In reply to malignancy [2004-04-09 17:00:37 +0000 UTC]
oh.... now i understand better
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