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Published: 2011-01-19 13:41:14 +0000 UTC; Views: 3073; Favourites: 34; Downloads: 26
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My entry for 's contest - [link]Lines by
Butterfly brush by
Background by
Rose texture of dress and hat:
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Comments: 29
Lunix17 [2011-02-16 12:53:18 +0000 UTC]
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I like how her hair isn't falling all together, it gives it depth. and the dress actually seems to flow, and the pattern seems to move with her, rather than remain flat.
The artist really made her eyes sparkle, and she has a really nice glow to her. The artist also seemed to make a very good effort at making a sparkle really shine, which is very good.
Unfortunately the breasts look fake and uneven. It really looks like she had a bad boob job. I believe if the artist made the curve a little more smooth on the breast farthest in depth from the viewer, then the shading of the first would fit better, and she wouldn't seem as fake.
The palm of the hand seems to be a little flat, when trying to do hands, it might be a little better to make the same position in the mirror and really look at the way the hand is positioned.
The feet are really nice, however, the shoes, with the way the rest of the picture is shaded, seem a little flat, but not quite as flat as the ribbons that go up her legs. I believe if the ribbons had a bit more shading they would really pop.
Overall I really like this piece, the artist had a great technique and chose a beautiful pattern, and really pulled the piece together to make it great, with a few minor changes I'm sure the artist could make this piece AMAZING.
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childrenoftherosx [2011-03-12 16:38:32 +0000 UTC]
how cute, the pose and coloring everything <3
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Noire-Ighaan [2011-03-12 11:27:17 +0000 UTC]
Aww, she looks so cute! I like her outfit and her eyes
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Memorii-Chan [2011-02-26 17:22:34 +0000 UTC]
Her pose is really nice^^ The colorful flowers on the swing is really pretty I love it!
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puzzl3-box [2011-02-25 03:03:12 +0000 UTC]
the shadows give this picture a 3d quality its realy nice
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Animegirl300 [2011-02-25 02:50:35 +0000 UTC]
Very nice job!
Lovely textures, nice pose, nice friendly expression
I also LOVE the shine effects~
Well done
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PrincessEtoile2109 In reply to Mally-Pepper [2011-01-20 16:34:48 +0000 UTC]
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