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Published: 2014-09-21 17:46:28 +0000 UTC; Views: 1126; Favourites: 16; Downloads: 0
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robin belongs to ExplosionKittenalexia and art belongs to StarDaFluffyEevee
LEZBIAN LOVE...DEAL WITH IT
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THIS IS SO OLD, HOW DID U GET HERE???
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Ok, I don't critique others' drawings often, so I'll try my hardest to tell you what you need to improve on.
When I first saw this, I felt a bit jumbled and confused. I know that it's supposed to be two adorable characters loving each other, but the colors and the anatomy kinda threw me off.
I'm not sure if how you draw the characters in this artwork is your style, but I think the anatomy could be better. First off, I think you can add a few more details to the body parts. For example, the feet can have toes, instead of just being cylinders. Also, the head could be more than just circles with large eyes. Maybe you can a muzzle, whiskers, tuffs of hair, etc...
Again, like the anatomy, I'm unsure whether the coloring is part of your style, but I think it could've been better. First off, the large eyes. I know that they are large to make the characters look more adorable, but they are somewhat uncomfortable to look at. I think it would look better if you add some more colors, like light pink, cardinal, etc... Also, the forms of the characters look completely flat. Add some shading and light to give the characters shape.
If it weren't for the characters being in front of the grass, I would've thought that they were floating in space. Like adding shading and light to the characters, put some shadows just for visual clarity.
Last but not least, is the time and effort you put in this drawing. Judging by this drawing and your other works in your gallery, you seemed to have around an hour to finish this and not take any suggestions from other artists who critiqued your works. When you start on another drawing, why don't you take your time and take other artists' suggestions? I'm sure if you do that, your drawings will improve!
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Let me start off this critique by saying your art has a certain cute charm to it. It's not at all bright but very gentle on the eyes. Yet something bugs me.
Let's start with the anatomy. You basically used a circle for the head. It can be cute for chibis, but if you're drawing animals, you should try to add onto the head. Other shapes make up the head of an animal. For example, squares or similar shapes for certain muzzles, and ovals for certain types of ears. You should look up tutorials on how to draw certain animals to see what I mean.
Now for the bodies. I suppose the cylinder tube could in theory work. But their necks are too thick and they look like the head is just attached to the body with no neck at all. A thin neck makes it look much better. And the hind legs are almost too small. It looks as if these two characters were to stand up, they'd not be able to walk properly. If the hind legs were slightly larger in comparison with their fore legs it would be great.
Over all, you should branch out and try to add on more shapes to build up your characters to give them a more third dimensional feel to them. I can see you're serious about trying to get better as an artist and for every artist they must branch out and try new things. And as always, practice, practice, practice. Pretty soon you'll be able to do more things if you keep a strict regiment of practice and experimenting with techniques.
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I don't know where to begin honestly, but let's start with the main thing in this drawing, the characters.
So, first off, the heads are just circles. Where are the muzzles? You need to draw their muzzles sticking out, animals do not have a flat face.
The eyes, oh my gosh. Those eyes are freakin' huge. [I mean I use huge eyes too but oh my...] I know you're going for the 'kawaii desu' eyes, but don't overdo it. Try looking up some references for some kawaii/manga eyes if you're looking for that look.
Then anatomy..... I have no idea where to start on anatomy. Their paws are stubs. Just little stubs, yeah it looks cute, if you're looking for cute. THOSE HIND LEGS OH DEAR LORD. FIX THEM. Look up references on anatomy, it's not hard. Those hind legs do NOT match your front legs. Make them the same size please, WITHOUT COPYING AND PASTING. Your ears just look like you stuck them in, please no. They need to smoothly meet the line of the head. Don't stick the ears in. And going back to copying and pasting... You made it obvious you copied and pasted the other character and put a different design. MY FRIEND, PLEASE DON'T COPY AND PASTE IT. DRAW A NEW SKETCH FOR A NEW CHARACTER, you can copy and paste the same measurements when doing a group/couple picture.
And lastly, the background. You just scribbed grass at the bottom, and used bucket fill, please don't. At least add some crappy clouds or a sun at the corner. Don't bucket fill please...
One last piece of advice, I went through your gallery. Your art is all the same. You have all these critiques helping you out, USE THEM!! Don't let these critiques go to waste, my friend!! Don't waste these artists' time who want to help you improve!
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Way to wimp out. I'm sorry that you can't handle the truth. If you're going to do a critique actually help her not hurt her. I'd appreciate it if you put my comment back up.
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It is as if you only read the parts that seem 'mean' instead of some tips.
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You didn't give any tips. The only tip you gave was to look up references. The rest was you picking out the bad parts which is okay but you also have to say the nice things too.
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Actually, saying nice things in a critique is a personal choice. I've had professors tear me a new asshole in critiques. Being "Nice" doesn't help many people.
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Not sure whether to think that sounds kinky or I should just pity you... D:
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Tear you a new asshole? Jesus. I understand.
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Tear you a new asshole? Jesus. I understand.
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As well as look at OTHER critiques at the end, and to not copy and paste. If you don't like my critique, there's a unfair button right over there.
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Wow butthurt much? Is that all you can do to defend yourself?
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I'm sorry I didn't know you wanted to fight over a critique. Just a critique.
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I'm not picking a fight; I'm just telling you the flaws in your critique.
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Well just accept that my critique has flaws and get over it.
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Just accept that you sound ridiculous and say it.
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This is a helpful critique but I think it could do without the "oh gosh don't" and obvious insults. This girl has feelings too.
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She has the choice to remove this critique, and if she doesn't appreciate it, then she can remove it.
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And you have the choice not to bully others but I can see that you didn't choose it. And why would she appretiate it? You're being completely rude.
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Did you not see the artist rated that critique as 'fair'? Meaning she was okay with it??
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No I didn't see that.
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Then look before bitching.
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Why don't you stop being an asshole?
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You're the asshole, love.
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"I'm not in anyway affiliated with the deviant who posted this/asked for a critique, and I didn't take the time to notice that s/he was fine with the critique in question, but I'm going to butt in and start insulting the critique-giver anyway!"
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"I'm also not affiliated with the person who made this critique or this conversation and yet I insist that it's not butting in when I do it. I'm a complete hypocrite who also needs to mind their own business. Also, there's a reason why theres a comment section on the critique."
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I never in any of my comments mentioned the critiquer, holy shit.
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But the conversation that the critiquer and I were having is being interrupted by you. So what does it matter if you mention them or not? You're still butting in.
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See my other comment.
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I did and you're making even worse comments that don't make sense.
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That wasn't even remotely aggressive and I just read her critique. I liked it. It was indeed very helpful and you should stop accusing everything as being an eBully. The word has been slung around by children so many times on the internet that it's lost its meaning in as little as one generation.
The best choice word you could have chosen to use was 'bother' as opposed to the "B" word. Because accusing people trying to be helpful as kind as possible without sounding hurtful as bullies makes one sound childish and that they can't handle reality.
Critiques are meant to help you improve your art skills, not be an asspat.
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Yeah I know someone just told me about this. I understand why she deserves this now too. I apologize.
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Ah. Honest mistake. But you should apologize to her, not me c:
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It's an honest mistake, that's what makes us humans. 
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Aw thanks that makes me feel a lot better. I'll try not to make assumptions so quickly from now on.
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Your welcome. 
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define the meaning of 'bully'
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A bully is someone who purposely says hurtful things to others.
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How is giving crit bullying?
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Giving a critique isn't bullying. It's the mean comments she said throughout the critique that's bullying.
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They were pithy; not "bullying". I seen worse things than what the person said.
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Oh so just because people have said worse its alright? That makes perfect sense.
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You're acting like the words are so harsh and "ebil", though.
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They are. How would you feel if someone said this stuff about your writing?
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Iam pretty sure those words aren't harmful.
Now if they said. "THIS FUCKIN' SUCKS! STOP FUCKINGDRAWING!!!!!11!1" Then that would be terrible.
Also...
One thing.
One Teeny Tiny thing.
Never... EVER.. I MEAN EVER use guilt tactics on me. That is the oldest trick in the book and it does NOT work with me.
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So saying "oh lord those eyes" isn't harmful? Or how about "please no"?
One thing.
One teeny tiny thing
I...don't...care! OMGEE UR SU SCARI DESU!!!111!!11 GILT DUSNT WURK ON U??!!!111!!!11! SO KEWL!!11!!1
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