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Published: 2017-03-15 06:38:37 +0000 UTC; Views: 1014; Favourites: 16; Downloads: 3
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Description "ANDROMEDA N-"
This was the last thing that could be heard before a large gust of magical wind swept everything away and cast the two young ponies into darkness.
He couldn't see... His back and head hurt so badly, Bright Future had no idea what was going on... Next thing he knew he could hear Andromeda whimpering and nudging him, trying to get him to his feet.
"Brighty..." he heard her whimper. "Brighty wake up! Oh dear Celestia... this is wrong... Something went wrong!" she yelled in fear.
Finally the colt managed opened his eyes to see Andromeda fluffed up and looking around wildly. They were in a alley between two houses.. The houses looked okay and there was no smell of smoke, so there was no fire, no screaming so what...
"You're awake!" Andromeda gasped, nuzzling the larger colt before looking around again, "Brighty, this place looks like Ponyville, but it's not. I don't know what it is... But I don't recognize barely anypony... I think I transported us somewhere we aren't supposed to be!" she explained in a rush of words, everything running together to the point Bright Future had to struggle to keep up.
"Andi.. Princess, calm down. Take a breath. It's okay. I'm su-"

"Come on Crumble! Uncle Mac told me to have you home before now!" came a voice, cutting Bright Future off
"Oh chill Swirl, you know Big Mac won't freak. He's chill." came another. A filly's voice.
"As if, Breezie! You know that Uncle Mac is strict when it comes to having Apple Crumble home after school!" the first voice argued.
"Big Mac? As in Applejack's brother? Maybe if we can find you mom, she can explain something. Come o.. Wait who are they?" Bright stopped as the herd of three ponies walked past them. They didn't look like anyone that the pair knew.
"Pa'll be okay. He and Ma know that I walk home with you, we don't always make it home fast." the tiny colt of the group spoke up.
"Aww Crumbie, you're so understanding~" the seafoam green pegasus cooed, swooping down and snuggling the dull red colt.

"Uhm. Excuse me!" Bright spoke up, walking towards them, "You were talking about Big Mac... where is he? You see, my friend and I.. She was practicing magic and transported us here.. But we know Big Mac! The one that helps run Sweet Apple Acres, right?" he asked, trotting up the the group.

The three stopped and looked at him in confusion. "Uhm yeah... He's my uncle and his dad.." the unicorn said, their brows furrowed as they gestured to the dull red colt.
"Wh- really? I- we've never met you before! have you two been around long? How is he your uncle?" Bright asked, looking to Andromeda who was still huddled behind him, freaking out.
"My... Mom's sister married him? My mom is Pinkie Pie, sister to Marble Pie who is married to Big Macintosh.. If you knew him, you should know that." the purple unicorn said, a little wierded out by the sandy Pegasus talking to them.

"Wait, what!?" Bright exclaimed, "But... Big Mac is married to Fluttershy! and I've never seen you before! you don't look like any of Pinkie Pie's kids!" he said, taking a step back.

At this, the greenish blue pegasus snorted and rushed forwards at him, "What on earth has gotten into your head!? Fluttershy is my mother! Married to Rainbow Dash, not Big Mac!" she insisted, only making Bright reel. What...? What was going on?

Seeing the pair obviously freaking out, the unicorn stepped forwards and examined them, their brows furrowed as they looked over Bright, then Andromeda before gasping and stepping back, "Princess!" they gasped, "What are you doing out here!?" they asked in a rush, obviously recognizing Andromeda which only confused her further.

"Who... Who are you?" the alicorn questioned, hiding under her wings a little.

"Wh- Princess, it's Blueberry Swirl! Ya know, your friend?" the unicorn, Blueberry swirl, tilted his head, "And.. Who in Equestria is this?" they asked in return, looking at Bright Future.

"I... Think I transported us somewhere we aren't supposed to be.." Andi mumbled, her head dropping, "I don't know any of you. I want my mother.. M-maybe she can explain."

"Your... Mother? Princess, your mother died... Remember?"

hearing those words, Andromeda stumbled back and gasped harshly, "Wh-What!? My mother isn't dead! I just saw her this morining@ we had magic practice! We are in the wrong place Brighty! This is a different dimention! Timeline, SOMETHING!" Andromeda began to panic.

"Whoa, whoa there Princess.. Calm down.. Now explain what the hay is going on.."

"Seabreeze, look at her flank. This isn't our Princess Andromeda. I think she's telling the truth. Look at her cutie mark. It's different."

"Wait, CUTIE MARK??" Andromeda looked to her flank quickly and gasped again, feeling faint now, "I-I got my cutie mark!" she looked at Bright Future, "What in Equestria is going on!?"

"We should get you to Sketcher..."




And we're finally back with this frikin story! Direct continuation of this fav.me/d9ty4ll and a reveal of Andi's cutie mark! Kinda. here is full view.

basically her talent is dimension/timeline crossing! She has delved into another universe where not everything worked out the same as the universe that you all know from me! For example, these three ponies! Meet Seabreeze! Daughter of Fluttershy and Rainbow Dash, Apple Crumble, son of Marble Pie and Big Mac and Blueberry Swirl, foal of Pinkie Pie and Pokey Pierce! four of the Mane Six have different partners which has drastically changed a lot of things beleive it or not! Haha I'll get back to this story soon, but now you see more into the story of Andromeda!
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Comments: 8

Cindybelle [2017-03-15 16:37:17 +0000 UTC]

Wow it's really nice I like how drew the ponies in the background, I can't do that X3

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MapleMapache In reply to Cindybelle [2017-03-15 18:14:33 +0000 UTC]

Hahaha I just drew them like normal and put a blur filter on it is all! But thanks!!

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Cindybelle In reply to MapleMapache [2017-03-15 23:01:38 +0000 UTC]

NP X3, btw when are you doing your part of the scene we were doing?
If you can't do it then that's ok I don't mind X)

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MapleMapache In reply to Cindybelle [2017-03-15 23:09:36 +0000 UTC]

Crap, I completely forgot. I'll work on it soon lol

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Cindybelle In reply to MapleMapache [2017-03-16 03:10:59 +0000 UTC]

Oh don't worry it's ok
Sorry to bother you

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Aubtnations [2017-03-15 12:53:30 +0000 UTC]

Oh I love the story and her talent! 

(it's interesting cause my twi kid has the same talent xD )


I can't wait to read more

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MapleMapache In reply to Aubtnations [2017-03-15 14:17:24 +0000 UTC]

Oh gosh really?? XD that is awesome! And thanks!

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Aubtnations In reply to MapleMapache [2017-03-15 14:40:42 +0000 UTC]

Yeah XD
Maybe ill draw them together XD

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