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The crop is excellent. I would recommend everyone to have a look in full view.
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Thanks, it is not the most convenient crop when viewed on what almost 90% of people use though (phones), so it actually goes under the radar very often, and no, turning the phone isn't something that everybody does, trust me I've done quite a lot of research for that, ranting aside, I do love the format, it just screams storytelling
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Thank you, how would you have done it?
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It's hard for me to say because it is a beautiful work as is. At first I thought the space on either side of the focal point could be reduced by using an 8 by 10 crop or even a square. However, being able to see the back and shoulder adds to the composition.
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Thank you for the feedback
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Let me join here, I would try another crop, too, even though this is my top favourite of your works. The face and the orb makes it too centered and this gives the impression that the sides are not really important. Either moving the main theme to the right or to the left would give more balance (indeed) but the direction would slightly modify the additional meanings of the image. For this centered version I slightly miss the lower bits down beyond her elbow or so but perhaps I just don't understand the reason of this cinematic framing
Anyway, this is one of your best works here that I saw up to now
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