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MartianSketchPones β Chrysalis 2
Published: 2013-06-10 06:32:29 +0000 UTC; Views: 3713; Favourites: 126; Downloads: 57
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Playing with expressions, also cleaning up and establishing how I do her eyes. I rather like what I have going on, if I do say so myself~Also gave her a less masculine jawline, which works much, much better than the first version.
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Chrysalis: *blushes* Y-you really think I'm, cute?
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Scene:
- I am busy playing with my Displacer Cannon . Due to a mishap, I end up in Chrysalis's throne room. Considering my comically dismal luck, where else would I end up?
- Chrysalis: Show yourself, intruder!
- I hide very carefully, trying not to give my position away. The Queen finds me anyway.
- Me: Aw, flying feather.
- Chrysalis: Well, well, well. An Earth Pony ended up in my throne room. How did this happen?
- She uses her magic to attach me to a wall.
- Me: Let me go, you bitch! I came here by accident!
- Chrysalis: Watch your edible device intake hole! Drone, frisk him!
- A female changeling drone sticks her hooves in my pockets, finding a pistol, a carbine, a grappling hook gun, a crowbar, a machete, a trench knife, an umbrella, some dynamite packs, some C-4 charges, a Portal Gun, the Holy Book of Armaments, a fez, 2 wallets, & various technological devices
- Drone: Does he have hyperspace pockets or something?
- Chrysalis: Drone, leave. Your job is done. Now, I've always wanted an Earth Pony to myself. Poor little Writing Brain. Needs his fillyfriend to protect him. Well, she's not here.
- Chrysalis approaches me in a seductive manner while licking her hoof
- Me: NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Wait, how do you know my name?
- Chrysalis: I'm a telepath. Now, you're mine!
- She positions herself over me
- I scream at the top of my lungs: HELP! I'M ABOUT TO GET VIOLATED BY THE CHANGELING QUEEN!!!
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Me: Long live the hive. Down with the intruder.
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Queen Chrysalis: Never. You're the one who was tinkering around with that machine of yours. You're the one who invaded us. So in turn you're the true villain this time. I'm only protecting my dear sweet hive.
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My arrival here was an accident.
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Queen Chrysalis: That is the truth, I know that much. If you did not want this, then you should learn not to tinker with technology.
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It was a friend of mine who fixed the thing. I just didnβt expect her to fix it too well.
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Queen Chrysalis: Oh. Maybe I'll leave just enough love left in you to lure that friend of yours. For don't forget who's domain you're in now because of him and her. Feeding on that raw emotion of love and respect to get you back, will be delicious.
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[fortunately, they searched all over my fur, but not beyond it.] what are ya gonna do? Violate me?
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Yes. By Violate you, I mean to cut a small hole in your head with your very own trench knife and then stick my favorite drinking straw into that small hole. With my magic I will locate the source of the love within you and send it towards the straw, that's in the small hole. Like I said before, hahaha, I will leave just enough love within you to sway you to serve me to get your dear friend to rescue you from my preteen, but from your crocked point of view evil cliches. Hahaha Hahaha Hahaha Hahaha Hahaha Hahaha Hahaha hahaha Hahaha hahaha Hahaha Hahaha Hahaha Hahaha.
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Thatβs worse than rape.
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Queen Chrysalis: Haha haha haha. You're too funny. Maybe I will use you as my hive comedian, a.k.a. my court jester after I lure your friend. I promise this will hurt you worst than it will hurt me. Let's begin before any more time is wasted. (Chrysalis starts cutting a small hole in your character's head).
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No! No! [I struggle helplessly]
(Isnβt the love eating meant to be psychic?)
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Queen Chrysalis: Well, yes but you get the special treatment cents you violated this sacred hive of mine. Besides your the one who sarcastically asked if I was going to violate you.
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Iβm sorry! Iβll do anything!
(Stuff in Parentheses is OOC author notes. The gun was specifically made for my character. You ever play Half-Life &/or Portal?)
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Queen Chrysalis: Fine then. Bring your friend to me, then I drain you both at the same time.
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I would if I had a way of getting her here.
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Queen Chrysalis: Maybe I will use my magic to locate her once I get a taste your love and know the pony that I am looking for. Then I will put in trance like state to bring her back here.
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Sheβs not a pony. Sheβs a rusalka.
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Queen Chrysalis: Thanks that helps bring the search for all the more easier. You are already falling under my control.
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I will not be your slave!
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Queen Chrysalis: Did we not just go through this whole dance already. [She face hoofs herself]. Just give in already and I promise to be a benevolent queen once you get to know me properly. You only believe the propaganda that the two royal sisters and the other ponies say about us and me.
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No, I just know from my Changeling friends that your hive has done a lot to give your species a bad name. How do I know youβre not just SAYING youβll be benevolent so Iβll get lured in?
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Queen Chrysalis: Maybe those weren't real changelings. Those could have been the royal sisters in disguise. Or maybe those royal brains forced a few of my members of the hive to befriend you and tell those lies. For I treat my children with the up most respect. Why do you think that they still follow my orders?
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They werenβt from your hive. I live on the other side of this country, 6 hours from Canterlot, & grew up during the last 19 years before the return of She of Eternal Night. So it couldnβt have been them. Luna was inactive until the summer after I started College, & Celestia was too busy raising the Princess of Magic to do such things. She may be God, but she still has limits. & if it was them, they wouldnβt have been able to copy abilities. Besides, I have enough experience that I can see through disguises.
(My character dated a huli jing, a kitsune, an Earth Pony/Nekomata hybrid, a kelpie, an Earth Pony/Naiad hybrid, & a Tsuchigumo at this point. He knows what heβs talking about)
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Queen Chrysalis: Why wouldn't you say the princess of the night's darker person's name? Afraid she might give you Nightmares from the Moon? Well anyway you leave me with no choice but transform you completely into one of my hive. For some ponies and creatures are strong, but you all have a breaking point somewhere. I will just twist you until you give in completely.
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I feel like you were gonna do that anyway. & no, Iβm not afraid of Nightmare Moon. I just wanted to be dramatic by using an epithet, as my distant ancestors would when speaking of their gods. I never said we didnβt have a deal, Iβm merely pointing out holes in your logic.
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Queen Chrysalis: Holes, hun? Like the holes that you ponies like to make fun of and create cheese jokes about me? That's why I can't show my true form. That's why I steal the love from you. Just because I look deformed doesn't give you the right to create those mean joke about me.
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The special joke was accidental, I assure you. I actually intended that word as a synonym for a flaw. That wasnβt meant as an insult either.
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Queen Chrysalis: Ok. To show you how benevolent, caring, and loving that I truly am, I will apologize. I didn't mean to have this form. It's just whenever ever I hear some creature taking about holes near me I just get so angry. Sorry I lost my temper there.
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Itβs okay. Iβm autistic, so I have trouble with people getting the wrong idea. Iβll mean something as a figure of speech & theyβll get a racist joke directed at them out of it.
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Queen Chrysalis: See how about a tour of the hive before I transform you into another one of its and my members. I say that as a way of showing you more of my loving, caring, benevolence towards my hive.
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[Queen Chrysalis takes your character on a tour of the whole hive. ]
Queen Chrysalis: So what did you think of the hive? Just remember that without me or another member of it, you'll be lost in forever. Lastly are you ready to become it's latest member?
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Iβm not sure an Earth Pony will be able to handle the transformation.
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Queen Chrysalis: We'll just have to see about with a test then. Luckily I have the perfect test subject. Don't worry. If everything goes well you can always return to your original form to hide the fact that your now one with the hive.
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Will I at least be able to still think for myself? Iβd rather not be reduced to a mindless bug.
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Queen Chrysalis: If it makes you a more willing contributor to the hive, then yes. You will remain a small slice of your soon to be former life. Just remember to bring back some love to the rest of the hive from time to time.
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I will need help with flying. Bear in mind I lived on the other side of the country.
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Queen Chrysalis: Don't worry so much. You don't want the last few moments of your freedom to of you wording so much. Besides I send word to get you the absolute best flyer we have in the hive to get you home and after awhile teach you how to fly.
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Queen Chrysalis: Your welcome my child. Just remember that this all your friends fault and yours for messing around with that machine of yours.
[The transformation begins]
(Thanks for letting me be part of this story. If you ever want to do another by me earning your trust, just let me know).
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[I clench my teeth, trying to stay conscious in spite of the pain]
(The machine was a handheld teleportation device. His friend built it for him, & screwed up a bit when she needed to fix it.)
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( I remember. This is just a lesson about not messing around technology that messes up the space time continue by way of teleportation)
Queen Chrysalis: Laughing while the transformation continues. Another member of the hive. Oh I can't wait to see how this lovely brain and soul will contribute to the hive, while still enjoying some of his former freedoms.
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(Can he keep his full individuality & all that? He'll still follow any orders that are within his capability of following)
It hurts. Is this what radiation poisoning feels like?
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(Ok)
Queen Chrysalis: I don't know about radiation poisoning. Now just sleep my newest Changeling. Sleep. That's it. Everything will be better, now that not only can fly from place to place, but you can teleport as well. Now sleep. Everything will be better in the future, right?
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I hope. [I black out as the horn starts forming]
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[You wake back up several hours later and find that nothing feels different. You can still think to yourself.
Queen Chrysalis: How does it feel to be reborn my baby?
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