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Character Name: Lukari of the Black Tiger TribeOriginally Featured: [link]
This is my submission to Jessica Elwood's "Sword and Sorcery" contest. I revamped this character for a visual upgrade and adapted her for the contest.
Age: Human equivalent of young adult
Gender: Female
Birth place: Mwene
Skills and talents: Barbarian + Shaman
Uneducated in reading, writing or the "civilized" world.
She is training as a shaman and has a knowledge of medicines and nature greater than the others in her pride of the same age.
Her greatest ability is the capability to transform into a black tiger beast.
Has great strength typical of her race, as a result of their physiology and lifestyle.
Her senses of sight, hearing and balance are higher than the average human.
She is trained to survive in the jungles and savanna of her home as a hunter and gatherer.
Character History:
Lukari is a member of the Black Tiger Tribe, a band of hunters who live in the stoney areas of the Mwene savannah. She is the daughter of the tribe shaman and is considered by her tribe to be slightly excentric, just like her family. She takes great delight in life and in the curisoity of youth. She loves gold and collects what little trinkets and coins she can carry. After her first big hunt (her rite to adulthood) she was given four blue jewels that match her eyes. The have no magical quality, but she always wears on her person, set in gold. She left her tribe to travel with her companion Rix. As a result her shamanic studies have been put on hold, and her skills and spells have become slightly limited. But her curiosity and youthful exuberance keeps her traveling with him.
Weapon: Large heavy spear
The blade of her spear was an old ornamental short sword she found. She couldn't handle it as a sword with her large paws, so she set it in a wooden pole and uses it as a spear. Not made for long flight and throwing like most spears, this one is heavy and strong and is used to kill larger game. It's large size and thick shaft is common among her people, who's large paws make using smaller weapons more difficult.
The text on her charm used to mean something, but the design progressed into triangular shapes similar to PREDATOR or KLINGON font, so the original meaning is gone.
I'm not so sure about the textures on this one, but it does look better with them than without them.
Mary Sue score: 20
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Comments: 19
Bragosonetruelove [2008-02-21 21:26:18 +0000 UTC]
WHOA!! I thought I made up the name Lukari! Sweet! It's a real name! Nice art, btw ^_^
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MasterOkiAkai In reply to Bragosonetruelove [2008-02-21 21:33:49 +0000 UTC]
Heh, nope. It's one of those names everyone thinks of. Just like Rix, Torna, or Shiro.
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Mune-Squared [2008-01-23 20:37:46 +0000 UTC]
Everything except her waist is XBAWKS HUEG. Just thought I'd let you know.
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MasterOkiAkai In reply to Mune-Squared [2008-01-23 21:44:02 +0000 UTC]
Yeah, I kinda know that since that was the whole point.
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Nebelstern [2008-01-05 12:27:50 +0000 UTC]
pretty cool - this has style.
awesome work on the weapon! thats an impressive and cool metal effect ^^
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Mr-Mushrooms [2007-12-16 13:48:01 +0000 UTC]
Reminds me of Aisha Clan-Clan. Normally I don't like furries or anthropomorphic creatures, but the Ctarl-Ctarl were badass so I'll let it slide. The best part of the whole piece may be the texture you created for the spearhead and the bracelets/anklets. There's a reason you see a lot of pictures of fantasy characters with light sabers and swords with energy effects around them. Metal is just one more thing thats hard to get 'right' but you managed to not only produce a realistic looking material (bronze) but to also throw in some dirt on the tip of the spear to make it look like its seen some use. Excellent work.
P.S. I'd add more of your pieces to my favorites collection, but this one is 'safe' to fave, if you know what I mean-
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Caffeinated-Creator [2007-12-09 10:42:08 +0000 UTC]
Hmm..
word of critizim: I think the character hangs a little loose in the picture, like theres too little interaction between her and the background...
Word of praise and admiration: Eg'Hadz that's some sweet design work and shading the background rocks too *giggle giggle; pun* and the textures are great!!!
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MasterOkiAkai In reply to Caffeinated-Creator [2007-12-09 20:19:10 +0000 UTC]
Yeah the background is windblown sandstone, which I have been on before. Painting it was a nightmare, and I agree, she doesn't feel to firmly attatched to it at all. But I never really feel or look firmly attatched to it when I stand on it in my photos either.
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Caffeinated-Creator In reply to MasterOkiAkai [2007-12-09 22:12:47 +0000 UTC]
wish that would be enough to make it worth to go back in time and take back my criticizm
*oh well...*
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MasterOkiAkai In reply to Caffeinated-Creator [2007-12-09 22:48:47 +0000 UTC]
Nah nah, it's fine.
But I find that when someone wants to GIVE criticism, it's usually from a gut reaction they haven't thought ab9out at length.
What people really need to do is just ASK question s about the parts of the piece that have gotten their attention and THEN, after an explanation has been given, they can go ahead with their "i thinks". I find people tend to be a lot happier that way on both sides, and there's a lot less "Oh, sorry, neremind then".
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Caffeinated-Creator In reply to MasterOkiAkai [2007-12-09 23:14:37 +0000 UTC]
hah, I don't give criticism often and when I do, I usually regret it. The reason I said something here is cause I know you can do better, master.
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steelemary [2007-12-09 10:22:42 +0000 UTC]
this is a fan of any and all art .sometimes i feel the game character artist have their own communty and lately ive been unnoticed anyway.But I wanted to say I love the way you told her backgrd on the blue stones and her eyeyes cause when i looked hard I saw her tail encircled around her giving her an effect like the blue stones. she looks like a amulet.
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MasterOkiAkai In reply to steelemary [2007-12-09 20:21:44 +0000 UTC]
Does she? How do you mean? I'm not seeing it.
Her tail circles around like that simply because of limited space on the page (i had to do this on 2 pages) so it wasn't like a deliberate design element like that.
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MasterOkiAkai In reply to LlXlE [2007-12-09 05:35:29 +0000 UTC]
Yeah that was my attempt at wind swept sandstone. Not something I want to try again soon...
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LlXlE In reply to MasterOkiAkai [2007-12-09 06:14:00 +0000 UTC]
I think it looks nice ^_^ better then I could have done o.o;; (duuuuh)
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