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gogeta408 [2008-07-26 00:03:22 +0000 UTC]
hay just to let you know. The fic way of the dragon. (The fic these guy's in the picture are in) Will be up tomorrow or sunday. Since I've done 11 of the 18 chapter's spell checked. If you want to read it. Look on fanfiction.net.
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gogeta408 In reply to mattwilson83 [2008-07-27 21:18:19 +0000 UTC]
So how was the fic? I have noticed some mistakes on my word's. and am rechecking it all as if I was reading from some else to change the mistake's.
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mattwilson83 In reply to gogeta408 [2008-07-27 21:25:25 +0000 UTC]
I never had chance to read it. Sorry. I'll comment on your profile when I do
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gogeta408 In reply to mattwilson83 [2008-07-28 22:35:23 +0000 UTC]
I want to moan. And I need somne to listen.
Right. I spent 1 month and 22 day's. (Less thatn that since I worked and did very little 0n week end's.) On my way of the dragon fic. And hardly anyone is readin through it. I have 17people read on chapter 17 and 43 fucking people on the last chapter. Hell i had 4 on the last chapter and 0 on chap 17. And that's pissed me off greatly.
What's bloody pissed me off is that I wanted people to comment. And tell me what I could do better for next toime. And they don't! And I really wanted it to be better for the shippudden saga. But all I got was three out of 90,00 word's, 18 chapter's and a month's hard work. 18 review's I would of been hapy with since that;s one per chapter. But not even that... That's put me on a real low.
So I need something to get me on the new high. And japaness music and anime may just do it. But like you. Review's are everything.
Sigh well I'm spent. Could do with any advice if you got any.
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mattwilson83 In reply to gogeta408 [2008-07-28 22:51:01 +0000 UTC]
Honestly, I haven't read it either, but that's just because I'm so busy, and my PC time is limited (and most of that is spent chatting to people and working on projects) BUt as soon as i read it, I will give an opinion.
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gogeta408 In reply to mattwilson83 [2008-07-26 09:28:53 +0000 UTC]
the link to my fanfiction site is on my deviantart page.
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Fu-reiji [2008-07-22 14:16:35 +0000 UTC]
OOHH, i just entered geekdom. naruto is wearing ichigos bankai outfit along with tensa zangetsu. i wonder if he knows.
Ichigo: Hey that's my outfit and zanpakto you're using!
Naruto: too bad. i'll be replacing you now.
Hollow Ichigo: Then i hope you don't mind if i absorb you instead.
Naruto: GAH! Never mind I'll stick with my show i rather just have one of me thank you.
Hollow Naruto: Too late.
Naruto: Crap.
Ichigo, Ishida, Sasuke, & Sakura: Baka.
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Dawn-of-Energies [2008-07-21 08:56:12 +0000 UTC]
Naruto as Ichigo? =-D
*cheer*
GO NARUTO KURASAKI GO!
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ThenAgain [2008-07-21 08:34:47 +0000 UTC]
Great work! With this you really brought down the house!
Apart from obviously liking Naruto I particularly apreciate the stance of the central character (Two handed combat really rocks in my opinion and it is hard to make it look natural, but you managed it )
After all, as an old man that once used to play RPGs told me "What other reasons there would have been for god to give us two hands if not for carrying two melee wepons at a time?"
Hi hi hi... Only kidding, good job here!
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mattwilson83 In reply to ThenAgain [2008-07-21 20:56:29 +0000 UTC]
thanx. I was worried how it would turn out.
And lol at the quote.
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rageofkyubii [2008-07-21 04:34:57 +0000 UTC]
One on the left looks like Naruto in Ichigo's Bankai form.
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fan-fictionfantasy In reply to mattwilson83 [2008-07-21 21:00:36 +0000 UTC]
That's all I've got to say.
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Hiyume-chan [2008-07-20 22:38:04 +0000 UTC]
EL-OH-EL. Naruto in Ichigo's Bankai xDDD
Awesome drawing ^w^
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mattwilson83 In reply to Hiyume-chan [2008-07-21 07:15:52 +0000 UTC]
THanx. Just wait until it's finished
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gogeta408 [2008-07-20 22:28:11 +0000 UTC]
Oh man i'm getting the chirstmas excitement feeling. (Which I haven't felt in age's.) I'm all giddy!
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gogeta408 In reply to gogeta408 [2008-07-20 22:30:03 +0000 UTC]
so this draft... Meaning that the proper one will look different to this one....hm? Look forward to the finishing work
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mattwilson83 In reply to gogeta408 [2008-07-20 22:33:24 +0000 UTC]
Slightly.
THis was just to show what I had in mind.
Naruto is too tall in this one for instance, as I basically used Ichigo as a reference for it.
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gogeta408 In reply to mattwilson83 [2008-07-20 22:37:24 +0000 UTC]
I can tell. But I'm so keeping this picture cuz of how good it look's. (Mainly with what you did with Naruto.)
Also. Ryuunosuke's mask. you used the ichigo mask as a template right?
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gogeta408 In reply to gogeta408 [2008-07-20 22:39:33 +0000 UTC]
oh yeah I'm also at chapter 17 on the fic for this. Getting good. And should be finsihed by the end of this week Yay!
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mattwilson83 In reply to gogeta408 [2008-07-20 22:39:13 +0000 UTC]
Ok.
And yeah, from what I could remeber of it. I didn't use reference for that.
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gogeta408 In reply to mattwilson83 [2008-07-20 22:42:13 +0000 UTC]
I just look forward nto how you do this fox mask. God it give me the chills of how it 's gonna look.
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mattwilson83 In reply to gogeta408 [2008-07-20 22:29:52 +0000 UTC]
I'll get around to inking it at some point.
I'm gonna draw each character individually and the put them all together in photoshop.
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