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YagiMatsu [2012-12-24 02:43:41 +0000 UTC]

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Okay. Since I haven't done a critique in a long time, I've decided to do one~ a.deviantart.net/avatars/r/i/r… " alt=" " title="rightneplz" />
And I'm afraid this might not be good as well.
But anyways, to start this off, I really like this drawing you did. It's so cute! >u<
You did a good job on the hair,clothing and bow,including the bunny eeeeee a.deviantart.net/avatars/s/o/s… " alt=" " title="sokyutplz" /> I also see that your eye style is changing a bit, the shading is good. e.deviantart.net/emoticons/b/b… " width="15" height="15" alt="" title=" (Big Grin)"/>

And for the cons, I think you should fix her arms a little bit. The left one looks a little smaller than the right, so for advice, you can make her hand hugging the bunny owo

Overall, I think this is one of your best pictures! I love the pose and again, the bunny ^^
I hope this critique is okay, Mocha-chan a.deviantart.net/avatars/i/n/i… " alt=" " title="inamithinkplz" />

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Terrterr [2012-12-26 16:57:12 +0000 UTC]

This is just super adorable! I'll forever love the simplicity of your art, it makes it flow so nicely!

But as for critique all I can really say to help, just sketch a ton and practice, but looks like you do plenty of that already x3 I just think how you draw currently goes really well with your style!

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sirMIDNIGHTEA [2012-12-24 14:21:26 +0000 UTC]

cuuuuute > w< o) thanks

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Cherrixy [2012-12-24 09:57:42 +0000 UTC]

D'aaaaw so cute~~!
I really love the simplicity on your art. Shading is so smooth and colors are so nice to watch. Keep up the good work sweetheart~~<3

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Sunnimi [2012-12-24 02:46:20 +0000 UTC]

Adhdhhgihuihtihifhifdhadljkdjaldjslaj
MOCHA!
Why you so pro?
Why must your commissions be too much points for me?
Whyyyy

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nibblesonnails [2012-12-24 02:42:43 +0000 UTC]

cute

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TorticaPika [2012-12-24 02:37:03 +0000 UTC]

she is really cute, I love the way you drew the pose ♥
and the bunny is so cute

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PrinceKissu [2012-12-24 02:35:24 +0000 UTC]

Adorable~!

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AnemoneInTheSky [2012-12-24 02:34:20 +0000 UTC]

That bunny is the most adorable thing ever!

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