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MegaCrystalSwiftail — I'm telling you this for your own good

Published: 2015-04-03 12:47:28 +0000 UTC; Views: 1492; Favourites: 4; Downloads: 9
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Description Rocky searched franticly for her best pony friend sister Twilight Sparkle and the mysterious dragonness who has captured her. What could she possibliy want with her. After what seemed like hours of searching, she finally found them and the blue dragoness seemed to be have some sort of glowing device over Twilight Sparkle's back!

Dragoness: Hold still Twilight! This will be over in a minute! You'll soon be a unicorn pony again soon!

Twilgiht Sparkle: NO! Let me go please!

Rocky gasped at the fact her friend Twilight was about to be hurt. "Hang on Twilight, I'm coming!" Rocky shouted as she kicked the blue dragoness down, making her drop the device. "Get away from my friend you flying serpent!" Rocky glared at the blue dragoness.

The Blue Dragonness glared back. "Stand aside you! I'm simpily correcting a terrible mistake and preventing a great castasterpy from happening!"

As the blue Dragonness glared, Rocky suddenly felt a huge sense of fear, almost as if the power of fright was coming from her eyes. Twilgiht too felt this fear and she and rocky huged each other out of fright.

Then suddenly, The blue dragoness widened her eyes in shock, then shook her head and muttered something like "This is not how I wanted this to turn up.*

Twilgiht and Rocky then felt confused about the situation. Twilight approached the dragoness. "Uh....what's going on here?"

The Blue Dragoness turned to Twilight and her friend Rocky. "Listen, I'm sorry I had to kidnapp you like that."

Rocky and Twilight just stared at the dragonness. She then responded " I don't you guys don't trust me for what I did, but I really apologise for it. That was rude of me to do and I really should've known better then to do something like that.

Twilight and Rocky stared at each other, then they both noded and looked at the blue dragonness.

Twilight: Ok, we both forgive you, but why did you had to kidnap me like that?

???: Because I didn't want her to discover me here and I wanted to do my mission as fast as possible. Oh, allow me to introduce myself, my name is Crystal the dragonness, well I'm really a human being disguised as a dragon.

Rocky: Uh, Nice to meet you Crystal. But who's her? and what mission?

Twilight: And if you're really a human, how did you turn yourself into a dragon?

Crystal: Ok, first off, I used Starlight the swirled beard's magic to disguise myself. 2nd off, I'm talking about Numbuh Vine of the Galactic Kids Next Door and she's hunting after me.

Rocky: Galatic Kids Next Door?!

Twilight: Why would she be after you?!

Crystal: To capture me so I wouldn't change the future.

Rocky: What?!

Twilight: You mean, you came from the future?!

Crystal: Yes, I came from the future......a future of destruction and doom.

Twilight: How did the future became one of destruction and doom?


Crystal looked at Rocky and Twilight with sadness in her eyes, then she sighed and told them everything she knew about it.

Crystal: Well.....it all started when.....You, Twilight.....*points to Twilgiht Sparkle* one day as an Alicorn Princess......You turned mad out of nowhere and became the new nightmare moon.

Rocky and Twilight: WHAT?!?

Crystal: Yes, then Twilight, as the new Nightmare Moon, you created a permament void to Rocky's realm, traveled through the depths of the different galaxies and then teamed up with Numbuh Vine. Then the two of you conivnced Numbuh 1 to completely turn against the rules of Kids Next Door, vowing to destroy all adults both good and evil.

Rocky: N-Numbuh 1 vowed this?! and so did twilight and Numbuh Vine?!

Twilight: This is impossible!!

Rocky: I thought the whole destroying all adults was just a cover so the they real intent won't be exposed.

Crystal: No Rocky, that was theri real intent all this time. I....I hate to say this in front of you.....*puts her claw on Rocky's shoulder* But Rocky......Your aunt Cleo was killed by Numbuh Vine, Numbuh 1 and Twilght for treason against the Galactic Kids Next Door.

Rocky: NO!!!! *starts crying*

Twilight: Why would I do this?!

Crystal: It's true. They found out about Cleo's rebelion against the idea of killing all adults and turning teens back into kids and they did this to her. When Lou found out about his love's death, he in anger went back into being the Toiletnator to avenge her death. And unlike last time, he ended becoming one the best and feared known villians ever due to his unquentched vengance.

Rocky: It...can't....be....

Twilight: But...But....

Crystal: That's not all. Rocky......Out of sorrow for the death of Cleo and the return of the Toiletnator, your siblings.....with Father's help.....turned back into The Delgihtful Children from down the lane.

Rocky: NO! Oh dear heavens NO!

Twilgiht: What was my future self thinking?!

Crystal: I really wish I knew. And Rocky, out your sorrow and anger of your lost aunt, step uncle and your step slibling, you traveled to to space, contronted Numbuh 1, Numbuh Vine and Alicorn Twilgiht and in anger, tried to kill them all for vengence. But they all over powered you and greatly wounded you. They would've finished the job, but the Delightful Children steped in and saved you. Dispite their redelightfulization, they still had memories of you. They were able to conivnce Father to save you by delightfulizing you and making you into a cyborg so you won't die. Due to your great fomer wound and the fact you were delightfulized, You lost most of your memories of your former life Rocky and you assumed Father was your real dad and that you were part of the delightful children all this time.

The whole story was more then Rocky could bear. She hugged Twilight and cried out of sadness of what will happen in the future. Twilight hugged back, tears in her eyes too.

Crystal: All of us has been in war with the Galactic Kids Next Door ever since. Some of the kids, including myself, have abandoned the Earth Kids Next Door and have joined the teens and adults out of fear and protection for our families.

Twilight: You joined too? But why?

Rocky: *still crying*

Crystal: Eventhough I haven't completely abandoned the Kids Next Door, I didn't really trust most members out of fear they may actually support the Galactic Kids Next Door, trusting the teens and adults seemed a much safer option, We all formed a group called the Galatic resistance, Father, The delightful Children, Rocky and I are among the best of the fighters. But even with all of us, I fear that we will one day lose to the Galatic Kids Next Door and they will one day take over.

Twilight Sparkle then got a determined look in her eyes.

Twilgiht Sparkle: Is there anything we can do to prevent this from happening?

Crystal: Well, there is a way....Twilight, you can't become an Alicorn princess anymore.

Twilight: WHAT?! I CA'NT!

Rocky: NO! I don't want Twilight to no longer be a princess even if it means the future will be changed because of it! There must be another way to stop this future from passing!

Crystal: Twilight, Rocky, I'm sorry, but this is the only way. You became the new nightmare moon out of your own greed and thirst for power in the future Twilight, and since then, you have done nothing but terror and doom to both your world and Rocky's world. By turning back into a unicorn, your own dark desires will no longer have a hold on you. I'm telling you this for your own good and this is the only way. Trust me.

Rocky and Twilight both looked at each other with worried looks on their faces. Is what Crystal saying really true? Is Twilight turning back into a Unicorn really the only way to prevent the horrible future from comming to pass?




Ok, I just found some more news about that GKND series. I guess it won't some anytime soon, but it may eventually come to pass in the future. I'm reileved that it's not gonna happen, but I fear that if it does come that Numbuh 1 may eventually turn bad. And I'm also worried about my new friend 's stories may be affected by this, so I made this little what if fan art to her. I hope she'll like it, if not, I can always put it in storage.

Rocky is owned by , Crystal belongs to me and everyone else niether of us own.
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Comments: 55

MegaCrystalSwiftail In reply to ??? [2015-04-03 19:16:35 +0000 UTC]

Oh, btw. I think you must've sawn the latest trailer about the GKND. How did you react to it? (especially involving Lizzie?)

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gamewizard-2008 In reply to MegaCrystalSwiftail [2015-04-03 19:46:45 +0000 UTC]

I didn't see it yet, but wow, Lizzie's an alien? Makes sense.

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MegaCrystalSwiftail In reply to gamewizard-2008 [2015-04-03 19:48:11 +0000 UTC]

I was little disturbed by that fact to be honest. How come?

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gamewizard-2008 In reply to MegaCrystalSwiftail [2015-04-03 20:07:43 +0000 UTC]

I mean, the theories make sense because one of Nigel's tests to GKND was to choose his organization over Lizzie; which and of itself wasn't a good thing, but it was staged regardless 'cause Lizzie broke up.

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MegaCrystalSwiftail In reply to gamewizard-2008 [2015-04-03 20:12:20 +0000 UTC]

Oh. I see.

Personaly the fact Lizzie was really an alien does not make sense to me, she was introduced as a human for the most part, then all of a sudden she's now an alien who had a human disguise? Nope. Doesn't make sense to me.

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gamewizard-2008 In reply to MegaCrystalSwiftail [2015-04-03 20:14:18 +0000 UTC]

Yes, but she was also introduced as Nigel's girlfriend "for the most part", you don't have any idea how they met or the whole of Lizzie's general past. Honestly, I feel like you're acting kind of ignorant.

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MegaCrystalSwiftail In reply to gamewizard-2008 [2015-04-03 20:18:51 +0000 UTC]

Well, one can imagine how they met, can't they?

Well, my friend ArthurEngine agrees with me. Think my friend is ignorant too?

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gamewizard-2008 In reply to MegaCrystalSwiftail [2015-04-03 20:21:37 +0000 UTC]

Anyone really, depending how much they deny the GKND idea in general. Even if we have our own fanfic ideas, as far as the real thing goes, it's leaving little room for theories and ideas for concepts if you ignore it too much.

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MegaCrystalSwiftail In reply to gamewizard-2008 [2015-04-03 20:29:57 +0000 UTC]

I'm not going completely against the GKND idea. If Tom wants to make it in the future, it's fine by me since I can't make anyone change thier minds since a lot of people seem to like it. It's just that I don't want to accept it as canon in my stories.

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gamewizard-2008 In reply to MegaCrystalSwiftail [2015-04-03 20:33:08 +0000 UTC]

Okay, but still the more concepts or ideas you allow, the more expansive a world.

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MegaCrystalSwiftail In reply to gamewizard-2008 [2015-04-04 20:11:08 +0000 UTC]

You mean I have to accept at least some of it?

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gamewizard-2008 In reply to MegaCrystalSwiftail [2015-04-04 20:13:02 +0000 UTC]

Why not? Think about all the action and adventure that could happen if it came through, the "Nigel turning evil" thing would be an amazing conflict.

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MegaCrystalSwiftail In reply to gamewizard-2008 [2015-04-07 20:08:58 +0000 UTC]

Hmmmm.....Yeah.....I have to admit, it kind of would be a interesting plot twist if it did happen. (I'm still keeping my opnions but I do respect yours.)

Oh, I haven't seen or realised it the first time I read about this, but when I read the plot line again, I actually saw and realized that Nigel actually sheded a tear before activiating the device so I guess maybe he was just being forced to do it?

Do you think my friend Arthurengine should accept some of it too?

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gamewizard-2008 In reply to MegaCrystalSwiftail [2015-04-07 20:10:08 +0000 UTC]

Yes, totally.

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MegaCrystalSwiftail In reply to gamewizard-2008 [2015-04-07 20:21:28 +0000 UTC]

Oh, ok....... (This is for the arthurengine comment, right?)

Should I go and talk to him about this for you?

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gamewizard-2008 In reply to MegaCrystalSwiftail [2015-04-07 20:23:33 +0000 UTC]

I don't care.

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MegaCrystalSwiftail In reply to gamewizard-2008 [2015-04-07 20:28:38 +0000 UTC]

Ok then.

I'm really sorry, but while I do respect the GKND and I do hope it'll be a reality for the fans sake, I'm still not accepting it as canon. 

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gamewizard-2008 In reply to MegaCrystalSwiftail [2015-04-07 20:30:07 +0000 UTC]

You might change your mind, me and my friend sure did.

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MegaCrystalSwiftail In reply to gamewizard-2008 [2015-04-07 20:36:04 +0000 UTC]

Really? That's interesting. You might be right. I actually once hated Skylanders myself, but after seeing Cynder as among the playabe characters and toys, I gave it a chance and I ended up loving it.  

And maybe in the end of the first episode or something, Nigel will turn up good and possibily at least most the GKND as well. So if GKND ever does come, I may give it a chance. But until then, my opinons are still the same. Is that ok?

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gamewizard-2008 In reply to MegaCrystalSwiftail [2015-04-07 20:38:08 +0000 UTC]

I doubt he'll be good in the first episode; if it's a really big thing, they might drag it on awhile.

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MegaCrystalSwiftail In reply to gamewizard-2008 [2015-04-07 20:50:52 +0000 UTC]

Hmmmm....That is a possibility. *nods* Guess we'll just have to wait and see, huh?

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MegaCrystalSwiftail In reply to ??? [2015-04-03 19:10:42 +0000 UTC]

You know Rocky? Wow! I didn't think you would. ..........I gotta read her story sometime when I'm not too busy. Heh heh, yes. I kind of went crazy again. But don't worry, this is the last time. I know now for sure this will not affect her or any of her stories at all.

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gamewizard-2008 In reply to MegaCrystalSwiftail [2015-04-03 19:13:22 +0000 UTC]

Yes, she's one of the best OCs ever! And she's really popular! XD

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MegaCrystalSwiftail In reply to gamewizard-2008 [2015-04-03 19:15:37 +0000 UTC]

Sweet! ^^ I guess you must've read her story then. How did you like it? Yay! I always love the popular ones.

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gamewizard-2008 In reply to MegaCrystalSwiftail [2015-04-03 19:47:30 +0000 UTC]

It was a cool story, but I think she made it a bit too much for her personal liking, and I hated what she did with Fanny.

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MegaCrystalSwiftail In reply to gamewizard-2008 [2015-04-21 22:23:48 +0000 UTC]

Hey there. I got a question. What did you mean when you said, she made it a bit too much for her personal liking?

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gamewizard-2008 In reply to MegaCrystalSwiftail [2015-04-21 22:28:51 +0000 UTC]

I dunno what it is, but I feel like her story is a little too happy in areas, Sector Z being normal again and Father letting them go with barely a hassle, Tommy joining the KND again because of a "loophole", also Sector Z becomes her OC's adoptive siblings..... I mean, I like Rocky, but granted she has everything going for her at times. :/

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MegaCrystalSwiftail In reply to gamewizard-2008 [2015-04-21 22:44:42 +0000 UTC]

Oh, so you're the kind of reader who loves seriousness and drama? You know, to tell you the truth, I'm kind of a bit mixed in those areas. I love happy go lucky stories like that and I hate when characters I love get into fights and arguments with each other. But I also like some seriousness and some serious stories which is why I love some serious games like The Legend of Spyro and Fire Emblem awakening. Also one of the reasons why I love looking up spoilers is so that I won't be too upset if something bad happens to my favorite characters.

Now for Rocky herself. It's kind of neat that a lot of good stuff happens to her, but.....just out of the blue? That....doesn't really make much sense. I mean, in my opinon, an OC character needs to work hard and do some things in order to achive good things to come, not just out of the blue. Also I beileve their needs to be some sort of explaination of how stuff like this happens (like how did sector z turn back to normal, How did Tommy get recomissioned, etc.) and to not just throw in a bunch of unfillable plot holes and loopholes. And according to you, the writer didn't really do much to do that? That's sad. And Father lets them go with barely a hassle? Come on! The DC are very useful to him and you would think Father will give it all he has and bring up a huge fight to get them back. (which is why in my story father like turns into a dragon for the final fight to get his DC back) But barely a hassle? It just makes no sense!

I'll admit, I do love happy stories and I do love for mostly everyone to get along, but I also know in reality, you can almost never have that happen. Not everything will go your way and that's how life works. But I do want to be on everyone's side, I mean not everything good happens to Sector L1 and there are occional fights and stuff, but I'd rather have it be with a character I'm not that fond of instead of a character I love. (Sector V, Sector Z, etc.)

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gamewizard-2008 In reply to MegaCrystalSwiftail [2015-04-21 22:47:48 +0000 UTC]

Yeah, and even the most happy, kid-friendly universe, one way or another, faces an inevitable cataclysm where everyone's gonna die (wink wink)!

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MegaCrystalSwiftail In reply to gamewizard-2008 [2015-04-21 22:57:50 +0000 UTC]

Yep. A very proud and noble example here.

And another example of mine, Even though in my stories, all of Sector V loves Sector L1 since the day they saved them from Mr. Fibb and Mr. Wink (and Sector Z comes to love them too when they turn them back to normal.) not all of KND will love Sector L1 even after they become an offical team. *cough cough* Numbuh 86, Numbuh 60, etc. Yep, dispite having V and Z's full trust, not all of KND will truly love and trust sector L1 and L1 will fail in some missions.

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gamewizard-2008 In reply to MegaCrystalSwiftail [2015-04-21 23:07:27 +0000 UTC]

Yeah, but that's the same with everyone, that's not really SO unhappy. I like the stories that typically have happy endings, but have the handy amount of drama and tension to make it worth it.

Also, you should NEVER look up wiki spoilers for that reason!

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MegaCrystalSwiftail In reply to gamewizard-2008 [2015-04-21 23:15:38 +0000 UTC]

Yep. It's how life is and we all have to deal with it, like it or not. I love stories with happy endings too, they make it really enjoyable. ^^ Yep, a good amount of drama is defeintly what's needed to make the story exciting, even if fans don't like the sadness in them, it's helps the story to make it interesting. Even with Sector V (and later Z being great friends with L1 and having their full trust in them, that won't stop L1 from facing drama and tension from time to time.

Yeah, but I can't help it, no matter how much I try to avoid it, I always have a tendency to look up spoilers. But I do succesfully manage to avoid spoilers all together, so it's partly my fault I guess.  

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gamewizard-2008 In reply to MegaCrystalSwiftail [2015-04-21 23:18:46 +0000 UTC]

I don't want you looking at my pages while you're reading my series!

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MegaCrystalSwiftail In reply to gamewizard-2008 [2015-04-21 23:20:10 +0000 UTC]

Oh, so no looking up what happens in your GKND fanfic? Well.....Ok, I'll do my best not to look it up.

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gamewizard-2008 In reply to MegaCrystalSwiftail [2015-04-21 23:22:23 +0000 UTC]

Not just THAT, I have a whole fucking saga beyond GKND!! That story you're reading is only a teensy step, nothing that happens there matters at this point! Well, not true, but READ MORE!!

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MegaCrystalSwiftail In reply to gamewizard-2008 [2015-04-21 23:24:36 +0000 UTC]

Ok then, I'll read all of your series without looking up any spoilers. I promise!

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gamewizard-2008 In reply to MegaCrystalSwiftail [2015-04-21 23:24:58 +0000 UTC]

Continue now! ;O

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MegaCrystalSwiftail In reply to gamewizard-2008 [2015-04-03 19:53:27 +0000 UTC]

I see. I haven't really read her story yet, but I did take a peek at how Numbuh 4 was like doubting and questioning the Former Delightful Children if they're really the lost members of Sector Z. I mean come on! Everyone in KND really misses them! Don't you think even he'll be happy to see them back?!?

And....Yes, I have to agree with you on the Fanny part. I may not like fanny that much but not even she deserves that!

I made up a scen where piakchu tried to attack Fanny after she refuses to bend the rules of decomissioning, but Snivy defends her from him by slapping his face with her tail.

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gamewizard-2008 In reply to MegaCrystalSwiftail [2015-04-03 20:06:31 +0000 UTC]

No going against higher-ups!

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MegaCrystalSwiftail In reply to gamewizard-2008 [2015-04-03 20:10:50 +0000 UTC]

Nope.

Snivy: Numbuh 251! A Kids Next Door member like you must respect the head of decomissioning and her laws even if she or her laws do not make you happy!

Pikachu: But-

Snivy: No buts! Or do I have to slap you again?!

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gamewizard-2008 In reply to MegaCrystalSwiftail [2015-04-03 20:14:41 +0000 UTC]

I think she does. ;3

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MegaCrystalSwiftail In reply to gamewizard-2008 [2015-04-03 20:28:28 +0000 UTC]

Numbuh 86 then decides to aproach Pikachu.

Pikachu starts growling at Numbuh 86, then snivy slaps Pikachu again, causing Numbuh 86 to laugh.

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gamewizard-2008 In reply to MegaCrystalSwiftail [2015-04-03 20:28:56 +0000 UTC]

Pikachu: !!!! CHUUUUUUUUU! *shocks them both*

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MegaCrystalSwiftail In reply to gamewizard-2008 [2015-04-03 20:30:38 +0000 UTC]

Snivy: *gets up and runs to Numbuh 86* Are you ok Numbuh 86?!

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gamewizard-2008 In reply to MegaCrystalSwiftail [2015-04-03 20:34:32 +0000 UTC]

Fanny: *covered with soot and sparking* Oooooohhhhhh......

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MegaCrystalSwiftail In reply to gamewizard-2008 [2015-04-04 20:21:08 +0000 UTC]

Snivy then glares at Pikachu.

Snivy: Ok, now Fanny is hurt! I hope you're happy Pikachu!

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Leebo4 [2015-04-03 18:04:44 +0000 UTC]

Hope twiley says a princess, it's hr reward for the good she had done over the many seasons

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Cartuneslover16 [2015-04-03 16:01:51 +0000 UTC]

Wow, this is really something. Not to say I don't like GKND, but I'm not worried. Like I said, I can handle it and interpret MY way into my cartune universe. I did that with MLP, I can do it with other shows. But still, love this!

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MegaCrystalSwiftail In reply to Cartuneslover16 [2015-04-03 16:50:46 +0000 UTC]

Hee hee, Thank you. Sorry to go through all the trouble, but I was kind of concerned about how you would react with the future GKND spinoff. But now I know you'll be fine and you'll just reinterperit in your own stories, just like how you did it with MLP. ^^ I may like Pinkie PiexDiscord and you may like TwilightxDiscord but we both don't like Fluttercord and that's good enough for me. Me not beileving interviews is canon and you beileving it is canon is just the same way as the Discord issue We both have our own interpretations about things in order to cover up stuff we don't like. I think we're gonna get along great. (ugh! I should continue working on Kirby and the gang meeting sector V but I'm so busy with other stuff! DX)

But I'm still happy you liked my pic though, thanks ^^

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Cartuneslover16 In reply to MegaCrystalSwiftail [2015-04-03 16:55:23 +0000 UTC]

Welcome.

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