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MentalCrash β Is It Summer Yet? - 016
Published: 2014-02-09 23:27:57 +0000 UTC; Views: 80176; Favourites: 148; Downloads: 369
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JUST ONE PAGE TODAYBut don't worry, I'll be working on two more in the next couple days, I just have to take of some lil' single page thing in between, and I think these work better separated
So not much to add in this page, remember you can read the comic in Spanish at TGComics.com
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In the second panel it like the eyes of an anime person who's lost all hope
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If only it were that easy in real life. Unless you know them it is harder to tell.
Ps. Love your work
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Dwaaa thats so sweet. She's so nice. Its good he has help for this thing.
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Yeah, well, Valentina can sound kinda rude sometimes but she's nice and caring .3.
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Shes a seme from a fairytale! <3<3<3
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Quite, I don't think Charlie will initially agree to be Uke, but she'll come around.
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And more to come soon I hope .3.
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I really like this comic but the wait between pages is really killing me.
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Eh, sorry, real life getting in the way -3-
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Great to see IISY back. Personally I think she relates Β better to girls she was so upset when the other one left, so only a boy was around. So is happy now there is a new girl around. From reading mirror cycle one might even think she is responsible and the girl who just left used to be a boy too.
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Oh, not at all, it's just that she's a brat and likes to have control of things, and well, I've mentioned it before, there won't be special causes for the transformation in this one, it will just sort of happen .3.
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I just wonder how far she is going to "take care" of him.
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>:T
No sex... Yet
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I guess we will see then hehe.
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With a vagina, I'd say he already IS a girl 100%. Puberty just needs to take its course to make his female body match his age.
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puberty changes might start soon
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What's he gonna do when he loses the twins.
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www.youtube.com/watch?v=kjwA01β¦
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His genitalia already changed .3.
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Indeed, I'm counting on it.
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[Awwwness Intensifies]
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this is what I thought I saw in the previous panel. She is not just a raving mega-bitch. She is a caring supporter of the needy.Β And boy is the "boy" needy.
I want to endorse your expansion of this character.Β The genre is overrun with flat as cardboard characters. Actually overrun with characters with the dimensionality of a taunt string.Β Goes in only one direction.Β
Keep it up. You make it look simple, and I know better.
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Yeps, that's something people will see growing in the character, she will grow from posesive to supportive, and he from shy and worried to joyful and open. But they were, before the transformation, already fitting the roles of dominant and submissive.
I just think it's stupid to have a normal boy turn into a slutty girl and that being the whole story, I mean it works fine for single page or shot (3 pages or so) comics, but if it's going to be long enough to develop the characters, let them be real .3.
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Yeah I agree. Would almost be like Mirror cycle. Even though that had no words you could definately see how Dani was feeling.
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Yes, in certain ways Valentina is the one going through a bigger change here, The sister of Daniel was supportive and wouldn't want her brother to suffer, but she was also manipulative and tricky, Valentina is kind of a brat at the start of the comic, and even when you can guess she'll grow more mature it's something interesting to see happening.
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Hey, the new one's out!
Technically isn't s/he already a girl, given "Little Charlie" escaped the jungle?
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Yessss, and it's not quite visible yet but the rest of his body is already changing, you'll see it soon, and no, I'm not talking about breasts :T
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You mean legs right?
I hope it's legs. =3
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well, first it was going to be arms, but, mmm... I should show the legs as well, yes :V
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This only just started... lets totally jump to conclusions!
^^ She is such a good friend.
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Yeps
I think the next page is when things finally start getting kinda interesting, dialogue-wise, but I've just started linearting, unfortunately
I need to take care of a b-day gift before finishing that.
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Go gift giving!
^^ Take your time. Good stories are worth the wait.
Unless the author dies and leaves us hanging.... I'M LOOKING AT YOU GEORGE R.R. MARTIN!
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Yessssh!, Well it's been a while to get to a point in the story I could even consider midly interesting :V who knows, I might be dying of old by the time it's over C:
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Shh! don't say stuff like that. Β When Stephen King starting thinking like that he got hit by a car!
I like it. I see much potential in this story. The best stories don't always start interesting!
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The best stories don't always start interesting.
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Hah, that was parodied on a cartoon once I think
Haaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaah, we'll see, I think it will develop like that, nice but in time, but who knows, I might end up making something people dislikes ^3^
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Screw them then! I'll love in to spite them! ^^
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