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MentalCrash β Is It Summer Yet? - 018
Published: 2014-02-23 00:30:12 +0000 UTC; Views: 82501; Favourites: 163; Downloads: 352
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Pageeee 18, I've been really really really busy with classes lately, and well, I can't really promise that's going to changeAbout the comic, like I said in the last page, things are kinda getting interesting now, since you can see more depth about the characters and Valentina is simply more simpathetic.
And this also raises a very good question, what if you woke up tomorrow to find out your genitalia changed to the opposite gender, what if it was contagious? Also something we'll see later on in the comic, which I also touched in Mirror's Cycle, would you just hide from everyone? Attempt at passing off as a SRS's transexual? Try changing every single birth register? Although I try not to be too harsh on my characters in these stories they will have to come up with an idea.
Oh, and about Charlie's relationship with his family, that's something I want to explain in small pieces of information, but you can get some ideas from what Valentina just said, doing a long exposition about the topic wouldn't have worked if it came out of nowhere, but you'll know more eventually, of course.
Regarding what I'll do next, I have to discuss certain details with a possible customer, and there was something I wanted to draw for the Transformation Repository before april, as well as a contest entry, the deadline is the 25th of March so I can take some time with that, so, I'll have to decide what I'll do next, I don't really know :T Once these things are out of the way I should be able to just do IISY and Commissions for a while.
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Oh, please tell me you're not going down the path of stereotypically making a guy-now-girl suddenly use "like" half the time? It's such an amazing work so far.
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Of course, but it's really often used in TG comics when turning the character into a stupid bimbo.
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oooh, don't worry, he won't go dumb, right now he is still a lil' bit shocked, so it's natural he uses the word 'like' that much if he's making examples of the topic
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Ahhhh...you don't need school.
www.youtube.com/watch?v=vz-6-Mβ¦
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GAH! If only this comic had a voiceover so I know what he sounds like at this point! Does he sound all girly already, or did it crack a little?
I'm also starting to likeΒ Valentina(?) more and more. I wouldn't mind a friend like her
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Ooh, that's kind of the mystery here, they live together, so Valentina would notice a small change, but it could also be a big one :V
Heheheeeeeeh, and if you're liking her then I'm succeeding, having her looking selfish and dominative at first was what I was aiming for :>
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I think that this is their first real peer-to-peer conversation. Previously, she was dominant, or they were working WTF.
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Oh, you could already see some development in the last two pages, she's going to keep the dominant role, but won't be as selfish as she first looked like
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Is Charlie getting smaller or is Valentina walking farther ahead of him making him appear smaller?
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Mind the legs movement, Valentina's postures and the background looking smaller, he just stopped for a brief moment.
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If I had my gender reversed They'd notice it because I'd lose my beard and mustache. Oh the Horror! I'd look like Rosie O'Donnel, and I loathe the bitch!
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If I had my gender reversed...I doubt anyone would notice (aside from the fact I'd appear to be remembering to shave more often).
And I hope things work out for you (also: yay, commissions!).
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Heeeeeh, well, I've heard people say the best cooks are always male, wouldn't a gender reversal be negative for you then? :3
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That just comes from professional culinary fields being more male dominated. My buns would have no bearing on my buns!
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We'll see about that Mrs. Seb :V
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That would be Ms. (prove me and you'll get punched down D=<).
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Uuuuuuuuh, I thought our marriage was forever, you evil wench!
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I'm really enjoying this so far. Pretty entertaining.
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Nice page. I understand if things are right for us to get more. Life happens and your posting this for free (at least I am viewing it for free.)
^^ I like that last 2 panels. Funny.
As for waking up with reversed genitalia... I dunno.
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Heheh, thanks
Yeah, TG might be a fetish, but the perspective of it happening IRL sounds... difficult, I mean it would make things difficult
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It's a fun thing to think about and even fantasize.. but real life it would complicate so much. I mean, I'd probably have fun with it. But do I try to go to work? Do I just quit and start again?
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It's not a bad thing to wake up a woman... but it'd be trouble for sure.
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I guess it's just about having someone competent to take care of you maybe?
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lol, well sadly in my case I take care of my wife who has trouble holding down jobs for various reasons.
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Mmm, that's troublesome, yes, but you do have someone who would support you, in a situation like that I believe things would be a lot easier with some support.
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Oh definitely! We've actually talk about this kind of stuff and she would be behind me 100%
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This is great. While it seems to be going a bit slow (no offense!), I do love your art style and the character development, as well as the theme and the anticipation for how Charlie finally blossoms, and seeing how he takes it. Maybe I'm just finding this a bit slow since I'm reading this on a gradual-single-page-upload-basis, and I DON'T quite know where you're going with this. Either way you've raised some interesting questions in your description, sounds like this could be quite fascinating indeed. Can't wait!
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Yeah, this year it's being kinda harsh on me, having barely any time to work on these, can't promise I'll speed up either .3.
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Oh I wasn't trying to infer that you should speed it up (certainly not for you to take the time to post more), just my thoughts. I want you to do it how you're planning it. For all I know you speeding it up could damage your mental image of how this series could go, and I wouldn't want that.
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Yay new page! Also whoot more choices, bet he's gonna eventually have a like sultry and sexy voice.
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He's gonna end up more like the cute type of girl, similar to what happened to Danielle
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Did he just shrink a little, or did he stop walking while she kept walking?
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He stopped, mind the background and the movement of the legs, as well as Valentina changing postures.
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also in the first fram its clear their about the same height any way.
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side note in my story gokaiger plus i had the new character going though a slow change into a girl though everyone else always saw him as a girl from the start, he was getting in sync with how he was supose to be inthe reality, kida similar to issy
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