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Published: 2015-01-26 06:05:06 +0000 UTC; Views: 71078; Favourites: 142; Downloads: 337
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Paaage 26 at last, I wanted to try something... Well, just try something with this page, since Charlie got his hair cut, I wanted to make sure he'd still look femenine, actually even more than we he had long hair. Of course as you might have guessed he'll most definitely have to come back to get a haircut again soon :YAs I mentioned before, the character, named Christine, will have some protagonism later on, but as you know the main characters are Charlie and Valentina, Christine is supposed to be a character that'll both help you see more of Charlie's past and give a new perspective on the whole change he's going through, considering Valentina has more of a teasing tomboyish and dickish attitude towards him, while still acting protective, and Jessica, Valentina's friend, will have a more scientific point of view of the change.
So far, adding Donnie as well, these would be the characters I'll move this comic with, unless I want a new point of view.
Christine is kind of misterious, I know >3>
Reminder that you can find this comic both in english and español at TGComics.com
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Comments: 40
I don't know if the hairdresser knows Charlie, but if not then it's kind of rude to think a girl named Charlie is weird. It's kind of uncommon but girls named Charlie are out there.
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How is it that Charlie's new hairstyle looks more feminine then the old one?
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.. this blonde girl's just a dick 
.. but who's to blame,.. i think everyone would mock the other one in souch a situation^^
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Valentina is quite dickish, yeah, caring and helpful, but dickish.
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Everyone knows short haired tomboys are the best.
I can't help but imagine a scene where he's trying to act all super bro with some guys, thinking his haircut is working, but they see him as some pixie-cut girl.
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Really digging both the character designs but also your go at styling them color wise, too *7* it's p/great.
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Been enjoying your work and this comic so far, but a little bit of criticism for this page in particular. Mainly, I got lost on where the characters were in relation to each other and where the movement was going.
One of the reasons why was the window in the background and the (near)black bars, which made me think there were a lot more panels then there was. Especially in panel 2 & 5, where the bar is right through the center of the characters in the panel, splitting it like a panel line would. I see you try to brack that in panel 2 with the text box, but it just sort of comes off as a text box trying link the two character's conversation rather than breaking up the pseudo-line.
Second would be panel 4. First we see Charley pass Christine in panel 2, moving the viewers perspective to keep with the 180-degree rule for panel 3. Then, panel 4 breaks that 180-degree rule immediatley, throwing off the expected positioning of the characters. Christine in panel 4 also becomes instantly turned around, despite the fact she was tracking Charley from panel 2 to 3, being solidly facing him by panel 3. This could be fixed by either not having her turn all the way in panel 3 or showing us her back or over the shoulder in panel 4. I realize the latter would remove the surprised facial expression, but that could be perhaps shown with a stiff, surprised posture, and would more easily lead to her half following them out of the door.
Hopefully this ramble may be found constructive in nature.
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Mmm, I honestly don't see a problem with Christine positioning, but the fifth panel does indeed look divided, because the mirrored image of the front window makes it look like Valentina is in a different place, to fix this the easiest way would be to make the door frame a little more clear, but I also think it will be necessary to make the window more transparent, the problem with that is having to make some of the inside slightly faded, but this could also help showing exactly how is the inside shaped, or even better have a panel that shows the whole place, I'll make sure to have that for the next time they go there, but right now it'd feel like a waste of time to replace a whole panel just to have an overview.
EDIT: I've added some quick fixes in panels 2 and 5, thanks for your help.
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That does look better. The glass affect in panel 5 is lovely. You are, indeed, good at the art things.
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Wouldn't have been possible without your advice, thanks again.
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Mystery mystery, who could that hairdresser be? O:
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im saying an evil hair ninja :3
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ya what do i get :3 i hope its a cookie
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only if its a unicorn i wont eat earth poines
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Charlie's face is a lot more femenine than before. (S)He looks like a girl with short hair.
The effect is on with bigger eyes only?
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Also the way the eyelashes are made, his figure being more slender and his lips being slighty marked.
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There's probably a joke about cocaine to be made here.
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Charlie's slang for coke.
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This is honestly the first time I've ever heard that @_@
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do whe get too now soon
of how the have met
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Wouldn't it have been cheaper to just go to a barber?
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