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Published: 2010-01-11 04:30:36 +0000 UTC; Views: 443; Favourites: 17; Downloads: 14
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This is Midnight and Starlight running down a hill going hunting. Either this was a Art Trade or a request.I was drawing this while watching Harry Potter and the Prisoner of Azkaban.
This drawing took me at least 5 hours.
Starlight (c) ~star-bot381
Midnight (c) me
Drawing (c) Me
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Comments: 11
ghostwolfen [2010-01-11 20:29:37 +0000 UTC]
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First I would love to say a job well done. I love how you have composed this peice and the hard work and stlye you have put into this ^^.
However I would like to add a few hints,tips and pointers that will help you on your way e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s… " width="15" height="15" alt="
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(Smile)" />. Ok for example you haven't quite fully grasped the wolf anatomy quite yet but don't panic for example from looking at this the bodies look a bit too short and the legs to me don't seem long or thin enough. What may help you if looking at real life wolf photographs and picking out shapes within that image (what also helps is draw those shapes onto the photograph practice drawing those shapes out over and over again). Also looking through other artists work deos help a lot so those two options will help you improve on the antomy of your wolves.
Secondly the prospective/pose of the wolves you have chosen is very unique e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s… " width="15" height="15" alt="
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(Big Grin)" /> however the right hind leg of the green-ish wolf may need to be visually there -as I think it looks a bit too short atm- but other then that the prospective is good
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Ok now onto the last bit ogf critique try to make the fur detail stand out a bit more -again by looking at referances and photographs this shall help you- and by adding light castings and shadows this will bring this out forward and stand out more clearly.
Thank you for reading -this rather long and tedious critque- you should be proud of this and keep up the good work, keep those pointers in mind and youll find youself progressing quicker e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s… " width="15" height="15" alt="
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(Smile)" />! goodluck with the rest of your work! and practice as much as you can. Remember pictorial referances help a lot -even to me- when your arn't certain of something ^^!
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MidnightAlleyCat [2010-01-11 21:51:06 +0000 UTC]
Thays so awsome! I love how you drew Midnight!C:
What did you make this with?=^^=
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Midnight101 In reply to MidnightAlleyCat [2010-01-11 22:16:40 +0000 UTC]
This was made on very cool looking Construction paper! ^^, I used Water Colored pencils, Colored pencils, and a Pen ^^
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MidnightAlleyCat In reply to Midnight101 [2010-01-11 22:20:26 +0000 UTC]
Awsome! Hehe I think I have paper tat looks sorta like that. XD
Woa, really? It looks relly good!
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snowy-huskywolf [2010-01-11 11:37:28 +0000 UTC]
This looks great! I love the fur pattern and how you shaded it :3
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star-bot381 [2010-01-11 07:58:57 +0000 UTC]
omg it awesome!!! thank you so much!!
theres no dout about it your getting realy good at drawing wolfs!! keep up the awesome work ^^
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