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Published: 2012-08-16 22:37:40 +0000 UTC; Views: 79; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 1
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sketch of my new drawingi tried a different perspective and i would prefer feedback b4 i start coloring.
i think i may cell shade this one. yeehhhhh!
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Comments: 4
I like this sketch! She looks very vital :3
But I think you should change some things.
Like her arms, they are really thin, according to her body.
The knee bend is also to heavy, the line should be shorter (Do you know what I mean? QQ)
The area right behind her breasts looks really weird, I know there is still some "body", but not so bold and intense.
I think her mouth should be a little more left and the ear is too big for her head. It should be between her eyes and the beginning of the nose.
Also I think you overexaggerated her.. crotch a little bit, but that's just my thoughts.
Sorry if I've been harsh. :<
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thanks for the feedback!
im trying a different method because all of my drawing have the same pose which is the "stand straight forward" pose. the area of body beneath her breast is really hard and the japanese guide im following isn't rlly going into detail but yeah.
i agree with the rest of your post but i fixed her mouth and eyes. thx
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By the way, I'm almost finished with coloring, just gotta take a break from it since I am now in holidays for a week. After that I'll quickly finish it! ♥
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ok i was just about to message you about that because i wasn't sure if you started or were waiting for me to send another reply.
buuuutttttt..... take your time! don't rush it because it will turn out weird if u do!
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