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MimzytheBat β€” My OC vs Pain

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Published: 2014-11-15 18:01:23 +0000 UTC; Views: 945; Favourites: 20; Downloads: 0
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Description Here are leader and my OC ^_^ Hope you like it! ^_^
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MimzytheBat In reply to ??? [2014-11-17 13:01:45 +0000 UTC]

Well at first I called it by my account name(Mimzy),but later I started thinking that this name is not ok,but everybody knew her as Mimzy so it remained like this...I'm still working on her personality so I might change it ^_^

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TheIllusiveMan90 In reply to MimzytheBat [2014-11-17 13:17:52 +0000 UTC]

oh, ok.

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Cromatose [2014-11-15 22:31:33 +0000 UTC]

This is really awesome! Nice job XP

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MimzytheBat In reply to Cromatose [2014-11-15 23:35:45 +0000 UTC]

thank you so much ^_^ glad you think so :3Β 

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Cromatose In reply to MimzytheBat [2014-11-15 23:37:05 +0000 UTC]

No prob ^^

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funnytime77 [2014-11-15 18:45:03 +0000 UTC]

awesome!

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MimzytheBat In reply to funnytime77 [2014-11-15 18:54:27 +0000 UTC]

thank you so much ^_^ glad you like it!

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funnytime77 In reply to MimzytheBat [2014-11-15 18:58:31 +0000 UTC]

yep. also do you care to roleplay? or you don't feel like it?

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MimzytheBat In reply to funnytime77 [2014-11-15 21:16:54 +0000 UTC]

oh,sure I'd like to ^_^

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funnytime77 In reply to MimzytheBat [2014-11-15 22:25:54 +0000 UTC]

your akatsuki oc vs me! Β  funnytime77.deviantart.com/art…
so jonathan the wizard vs mimzy and the akatsuki!

jonathan: *relaxing and then sense the akatsuki coming this way* it's the akatsuki! and they're here to catch me! 0_0 well i won't let them.

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MimzytheBat In reply to funnytime77 [2014-11-15 23:37:31 +0000 UTC]

*She walks slowly,passing the dark trees when she senses someone watching her and she turns around,but sees nothing.She continues to walk,but she still hears something...*

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funnytime77 In reply to MimzytheBat [2014-11-15 23:39:05 +0000 UTC]

jonathan: 0_0 mimzy! *points at mimzy* you! your here to capture me right?

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MimzytheBat In reply to funnytime77 [2014-11-15 23:44:17 +0000 UTC]

*she turns fast to face jonathan*
Mimzy : You...I can feel something strange...You are that wizard! I can feel it!Β 
*she continues to stare at him then she pulls out a kunai and takes position getting ready for a battle*

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funnytime77 In reply to MimzytheBat [2014-11-15 23:55:59 +0000 UTC]

*inside of my mind*

shinju: she's one of the akatsuki's members.... but we don't know about her.... but let us help you...

black mass: lend us your power.......

jonathan: ok..

*outside of my mind*

jonathan: it's show time! *black arua surrowns me that is the power of the ten tailed beast and the black mass*

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MimzytheBat In reply to funnytime77 [2014-11-16 13:44:09 +0000 UTC]

*Mimzy starts the hand signs* Great fireball technique! *she starts breathing fire and concentrates on enemy's position*Β 

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funnytime77 In reply to MimzytheBat [2014-11-16 14:41:05 +0000 UTC]

jonathan: *dodges it* water style! water shark bomb jutsu! *summons a water shark and it attacked mimzy*

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MimzytheBat In reply to funnytime77 [2014-11-16 15:54:43 +0000 UTC]

*she looks up,the water shark didn't hit her...why?....the susanoo protected her.She stares at the wizard activating mangekyo...she starts whispering* I won't let u get away....

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funnytime77 In reply to MimzytheBat [2014-11-16 19:58:26 +0000 UTC]

jonathan: I won't let you hurt anyone.... *transforms into a giant ten tailed beast that is more powerful then the susanoo and now the black mass is now appeared and went into the shinju and now the black mass aura around the shinju and now I'm black mass shinju jonathan* let's ride!

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MimzytheBat In reply to funnytime77 [2014-11-16 20:11:41 +0000 UTC]

Oy,Mimzy! *she turns back to see the whole Akatsuki coming to her,hearing about the battle. Pain comes in front of Jonathan and makes shinra tensei. He pushes him brutally into the mountain which starts cracking. Then Deidara,watching from the sky,throws clay to jonathan and says "katsu!!!" Then,the mountain explodes and big stones start falling on jonathan,being catched under them. The smoke starts disappearing and Pain lets his hand down.
Itachi still looks at the mountain with his sharingan activated and says to the other uchiha "Mimzy...." and she quickly replies "I know...It's not over"

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funnytime77 In reply to MimzytheBat [2014-11-16 20:15:52 +0000 UTC]

jonathan:........ *then opens my eyes and the shinju comes out and blasts all the akatsukis exept mimzy and changes back and standing on a boulder* I won't lose... I have the true heart of love and piece to protect my friends....

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MimzytheBat In reply to funnytime77 [2014-11-16 20:19:01 +0000 UTC]

*Mimzy startes at him....eye to eye...."protect....your friends....from what?....from peace?"
She waits for an answer and doesn't lose eye contact.Her emotionless face keeps unmoved,waiting for a response from jonathan.*

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funnytime77 In reply to MimzytheBat [2014-11-16 20:20:40 +0000 UTC]

jonathan: no.... to protect the world and my friends from the akatsuki..... cause I'm the hero for everyone.... and I won't let you get killer bee or naruto.....

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MimzytheBat In reply to funnytime77 [2014-11-16 20:41:57 +0000 UTC]

Sasori looks at him with disgust and Kisame starts laughing saying "someone's pretty late,huh?"
Mimzy looks at him and with the same emotionless face starts speaking".....how can you protect naruto and killer bee....if their monsters are already ours..?..." Hidan smiles at jonathan knowing it's news for him and says "uuh,oops I guess...".Kisame starts laughing again.Β 

Mimzy still stares at jonathan "I will ask you again......who do you want to protect from who?..."

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funnytime77 In reply to MimzytheBat [2014-11-16 20:45:54 +0000 UTC]

jonathan:....... you.... *jumps real high* megaΒ rayquaza rainboom punch! * my fist has the aura shadow of this media-cerulean.cursecdn.com/at… and punches mimzy in the face that caused a rainbow explosion that pushed kisame and hidan and zetsu and konan and the akatsuki away from them* few..... *getting up* that was close.... *walks away*

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MimzytheBat In reply to funnytime77 [2014-11-16 21:03:44 +0000 UTC]

Mimzy is still there...The whole Akatsuki is still there....Nothing happened?....But the rainboom punch...it never happened!
Mimzy,with the same emotionless face says to jonathan"stop punching yourself...."
Jonathan made that furious attack on himself....
Pain asked jonathan "confused?"
Itachi starts smiling at Mimzy and whispers "....sharingan..."
Deidara,surprised just like jonathan,asked loud "G-genjutsu??un....."
....here it goes....Mimzy "now we can play,NOW is the real START" and she starts similing.

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funnytime77 In reply to MimzytheBat [2014-11-16 23:00:49 +0000 UTC]

jonathan: *getting up* I don't want to hurt my friends.... and I won't let you all get my tailed beast....

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MimzytheBat In reply to funnytime77 [2014-11-17 13:00:06 +0000 UTC]

Pain stares with his eyes wide open
Deidara: "his...what?Did he just say...."
Sasori interrupts Deidara: "Let's get over with it..."
Mimzy: "No hurry,Danna....It's already over..."
Itachi looks at Mimzy with a smile,he knew everything that was going on.Being an Uchiha means you understand the power of genjutsu...The Sharingan has something special...And "that" special thing is what made Itachi smile.He didn't smile,because he saw that power...he smiled because of the person who was using it...That weak girl who wasn't able to beat Sabaku no Gaara...Now was here,handling the situation very well....

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funnytime77 In reply to MimzytheBat [2014-11-17 14:20:49 +0000 UTC]

jonathan: *teleports away that i escAPED*

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MimzytheBat In reply to funnytime77 [2014-11-18 13:53:43 +0000 UTC]

Sasori: "Nanii?"
DeidaraL "Damn that-"
Pain "shut up!.......He's still here.....I can feel his chakra...."
Kisame: "he's right,it's too much chakra to not be observed."
Itachi: We should be careful...
Everybody stays guarded with a kunai or a sword adn wait for Jonathan to reappear.Β 

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funnytime77 In reply to MimzytheBat [2014-11-18 15:36:08 +0000 UTC]

jonathan: *standing on the tree* ok..... here we go.... shadow possesion jutsu. *the shadow went into the akatsuki's shadow so now they can't move. they only move when my move and now they only move when i move at the same time.* yes!

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MimzytheBat In reply to funnytime77 [2014-11-18 19:16:28 +0000 UTC]

Jonathan hears a laugh.It's Deidara :"I like his imagination!"
Mimzy stares,silence,at the source of chakra,right a the tree.Her mind: ........You shouldn't mess with others.....Now punishment!"Β 
Jonathan stays in the tree,and in one move a sword goes through his chest.Fool of blood,it stands fixed.

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funnytime77 In reply to MimzytheBat [2014-11-18 20:52:03 +0000 UTC]

jonathan: gah!!! *falling on the ground* grr.... *getting up* I can't lose to you.... I.... need to protect... my.... FRRRRIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEENDDSSSS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! *transforms into a giant shinju and the aura of black mass fused in the shinju and now I'm black mass shinju jonathan and I'm fully healed by the form* i won't let you get away with this!

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MimzytheBat In reply to funnytime77 [2014-11-18 20:56:15 +0000 UTC]

Pain,immediately after the tranformation,makes shinra tensei and pushes Jonathan with a huge force into the lake. There,Deidara,who is on his bird,throws explosive in the lake and says "katsu".After the explosion,Kisame starts using his water style,making sharks to attack Jonathan.

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funnytime77 In reply to MimzytheBat [2014-11-18 20:59:31 +0000 UTC]

black mass shinju jonathan: *blocks the water sharks* tail beast spirit bomb!!!!!!! *charges the tail beast spirit bomb that is now the size of a huge bolder and building that is massive and blast the tail beast spirit bomb that it hits the akatsukis that it caused a giant explosion that really almost destroyed the half of the forest and now he saw the akatsuki laying down that they got knocked out and dead and now i changed back and falls helplessly* i did it......... *then suddenly i saw mimzy alive and mizy is about to use the tsukinomi on me* oh no.....

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MimzytheBat In reply to funnytime77 [2014-11-18 23:18:01 +0000 UTC]

Jonathan looks at the sky and then back...Akatsuki are there...The forest is there...The lake is there....The mountain isn't destroyed...Akatsuki members are all okay,with the same emotionless faces....What happened there?
Pain: "I can see you're confused."Β 
Itachi: "It's a normal thing to be confused...The jutsus,the attacks,everything....It never happened..."
Mimzy comes slowly in front of Jonathan: "Welcome to my world,Jonathan...."

Jonathan stares at Mimzy then rises his hand,but it's caught by Sasori
Sasori: "I advise you to think before do."
Itachi: "No matter what you are trying to do...You are caught in Mimzy's sharingan.Remember when you two were staring in each other eyes?That was the moment..."
Mimzy was still staring at Jonathan...

*****FLASHΒ 
Deidara:"D-did he just say-"
Sasori: "Let's get over with it."
Mimzy: ...No hurry...It's already OVER"
*****END OF FLASH

Jonathan remembers...He analyses everything and understands.
Pain: "Let me ask you something.....What are you searching for?You told us you won't let us harm your friends...But how do you know that what we do is for the best?Maybe if we don't do this,you will have to pay yourself. If you try using the logic,you will see that continuing the fight is useless,since you are in the unbreakable illusion.No matter how hard you try,you are just consuming your own chakra. You are in damage here,not us...So how about negociate..."

Sasori: "Nanii?Negociate??But we can easily-"
Pain rises his hand to stop Sasori from speaking: "Jonathan,we are going to negociate...If you refuse,everything ends here and now."

Hidan starts grabing his scythe and Kisame prepares Samehada.

Pain: "So....What's your choose?"

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funnytime77 In reply to MimzytheBat [2014-11-19 00:49:57 +0000 UTC]

jonathan:..... I don't want anything to end here and now......

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MimzytheBat In reply to funnytime77 [2014-11-19 20:00:51 +0000 UTC]

Pain looks at Jonathan.He didn't get a response,so he had to wait.
Mimzy keeps staring at Jonathan.
Sasori is waiting for any moment to attack,so are Hidan and Kisame.
Deidara is slightly confused about this guy...Why did Pain need to negociate with him when he could easily kill him while he's under genjutsu?
Konan feels pretty sorry for Jonathan,she rememberd the day she wanted with all her heart and soul to protect Yahiko and Nagato...They were everything to her.
Pain sees Jonathan's mind is messed up,all he thinks about is Naruto and Killer B,forgetting about himself.
This guy....

Pain: ....So?Choose.Β 
Everybody looks at Pain,waiting for Jonathan.
Pain:...........NOW.
Konanain....he already chose.
Everybody looks confused at Konan's argument.
Konan: He chose Naruto...Long before fighting with us.
Pain stares back at Jonathan who looks at the ground and says "I want to hear him first."

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funnytime77 In reply to MimzytheBat [2014-11-19 21:05:04 +0000 UTC]

jonathan:....... i'll join you, konan and nagato...... cause I can feel kona's heart that she would protect.... so I don't want her to be upset......

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MimzytheBat In reply to funnytime77 [2014-11-19 22:16:09 +0000 UTC]

Pain looks at Konan.She closes her eyes and approves.He comes and tells Jonathan: "Then we are going to extract the beast from you,and you wil get Naruto.Let's call it a.......trade.Accept?"
Mimzy,Sasori and Itachi stare one at another.

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funnytime77 In reply to MimzytheBat [2014-11-19 22:59:11 +0000 UTC]

jonathan: ............. i accept......... i'm sorry shinju and black mass...... i just wanted you all to help get stronger...... without you guys, i'm weak........

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MimzytheBat In reply to funnytime77 [2014-11-20 16:32:45 +0000 UTC]

Deidara and Kisame,hearing Jonathan's accept,trap him in 1 move and bring him to Akatsuki,where he gets locked in a room.

******AFTER 3 DAYS...

*click* the door suddenly opened.Jonathan looked up to see whose shadow was that.
Kakuzu: It's time to come.Pain is ready for bijuu's extracting.
Jonthan opens his eyes wide and sees in feels pain and sorrow.He knows what's going to happen...
They bring him to the statue,all the Akatsuki,except Pain are waiting for the ritual.
Sasori: "Where the heck is Pain?I hate waiting..."
Deidara: "Shut up Danna,un.There he is!"
Pain was approaching,while Konan looked at Jonathan.
Mimzy looked at her.She knew Konan had something to say.They were best friends.She knew her too well to not recognize her worry for Jonathan.Mimzy looked back at Jonathan...He was ready to die.For his friends.For the sake of his damn friends.He was leaving everything to Pain,just to rescue Naruto.
Mimzy's mind: ""Wh-what's this feeling...?Do I feel sorry for him?I should shut up,I start saying stupid things...""
Jonathan didn't even try to run...He was accepting his death...As Pain approached the statue more and more Mimzy started to think to herself :"Do I really want to do this? Does he really deserve it? Do we really deserve it?".Konan closed her eyes.Β 
Pain: Okay Akatsuki.Let's-
Mimzy :STOP!

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funnytime77 In reply to MimzytheBat [2014-11-20 17:13:52 +0000 UTC]

jonathan: hm? 030

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MimzytheBat In reply to funnytime77 [2014-11-20 17:30:13 +0000 UTC]

Pain stares at Mimzy waiting for an explanation for her sudden word.Konan looks at Mimzy with hope.
Mimzy: "I...-I just..."
Pain :You what? We don't have time for this.We must take the bijuu.
Mimzy :It's just that....
Deidara looks at Mimzy with a questionable face.
Mimzy changes her face from worried to careles. "It's too early.We can use him to capture the others who may come for him...I mean,some from Konoha already know he is a bijuu and that he is gone.So they might become suspicious. We can trap him and get more information before trying to steal the bijuu.We must be careful.
Pain stared at Jonathan. "Okay..."
Mimzy gave a sigh of relief.
Pain: "ONLY 2 DAYS!Lock him back!"
And so,Deidara and Sasori bring Jonathan back to his room"

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funnytime77 In reply to MimzytheBat [2014-11-20 17:39:07 +0000 UTC]

jonathan: few... e3e

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MimzytheBat In reply to funnytime77 [2014-11-20 18:57:45 +0000 UTC]

Mimzy enters Jonathan's room at night,while all the Akatsuki's members are asleep:
Mimzy:.....How do you.....feel?

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funnytime77 In reply to MimzytheBat [2014-11-20 20:54:34 +0000 UTC]

jonathan: I feel bad that the shinju and the black mass has to go in 2 days. but I need to get out of here. but I think konan is up to something. I think she cares about me. I just wanted the shinju and the black mass stay in me.....

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MimzytheBat In reply to funnytime77 [2014-11-21 21:40:37 +0000 UTC]

Mimzy loosk at Jonathan...
Mimzy:...Get up.
Jonathan looks at MImzy with a cofnused face.
Mimzy:Come'on,I said get up.
Jonathan gets up and looks at her.She comes to him and whispers,but she hears steps outside so she hurries up:
"Pain can hear everything,so be careful...Every night,Pain stays awake till 3:30 am.Right after you hear his door,you wait for me,here.I will take to you then,and bring you to someone..."

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funnytime77 In reply to MimzytheBat [2014-11-22 00:34:08 +0000 UTC]

jonathan: ok.... thanks....

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MimzytheBat In reply to funnytime77 [2014-11-22 00:37:05 +0000 UTC]

Later,after Pain went to sleep,Mimzy took Jonathan to "someone".That someone was Naruto who was preparing to have his bijuu extracted and lose his life.They 2 comploted to find the way out,and when they did,they got away to Konoha.

***at AKATSUKI BASE:
Pain: WHERE ARE THEY?!?!?!!?!?!?!??!!?!??!?!

XD

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funnytime77 In reply to MimzytheBat [2014-11-22 00:56:51 +0000 UTC]

*at the hidden leaf village*

jonathan: it's good to be back. *runs to killer bee and hugs him* I miss you bro!

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