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Description Yay realism! Yeah I cán do that X3
A lovely super shiny new horse for the racing barn.

Art: fav.me/d3ellpu fav.me/d16popd fav.me/d2kwq5y mustang-girl.deviantart.com/ar…

Official name: Fly where others die
Show/barn name: Raven, demon
Breed: Utrechtertje Hot-type
Gender: Stallion
Color: Black with red points (this is known to happen in real horses, cause unknown)
Birth Date: January 5, 2007
Height: 17.4 hands
Discipline: Race, Show
Records: First year: 1/1/2 out of 8
Build: Slender, but véry musculair. Typical racehorse, but slightly better proportioned. Rectangulair conformation, strongly diagonal shoulder, refined face. Straight back, high set tail, small hard hooves.
Personality:
Raven is very dominant. He isn't actually mean, it's just that he isn't the type to run from dangers, he fights. Luckilly he does run on the track. Raven just can't be ruled by anyone or anything, and nobody should try. He's a born leader, hard on the outside, but soft on the inside. He's all in for the mares to. At his young age he has 3 foals, all three from 1 escape. He can be very charming if he wants to be.
Story:
Horses aren't born evil, everyone knows that, and it's true. However, horse are born dominant, and Raven was clearly one of those. If such a horse is born, who he will be only depends on the trainer. The one may try to force them to subdue. Sometimes that's the right method. But not for Raven. He kept fighting, kept bossing the humans arround. They got him under saddle, and one the race track, but it didn't work. He was too bussy fighting with his rider to concentrade on the race. He ended last in his first 2 races and was sold.
He got some more training at the new place, here the people were mellow and didn't care what raven did, as long as he would run.
At first it was okay, but not great. Raven wasn't really ridden... There was just a human on his back while he did what he wanted. He entered in 2 more races. He was better, but still... Not what they had espected. The stallion didn't quite get the point of running, and the humans weren't giving him any directions of what he was suposed to do either. He always rushed out of the gate, bucking and rearing, then sprinting for a while before he went on to the actual race. His third race he ended 5th, behind some horses he should have beaten with ease. His fourth race had a little harder competition, more stallions. Raven ended 3rd, only half a lenght behind #1.
Obviously his owners were convinced now they had bought a good horse. But they put him back on the market anyway, because he was a handfull and they had other good horses. And offcourse, he is now worth 3 times his previous prize.

He wasn't sold for a while and ran 2 more races. A 1st place, and a 4th place.

At this point we saw him, he was racing on the same terain as our stallion, Puppet. Raven ended 3rd in his race, not too bad considering the competition. Howeverm we weren't convinced yet. This black Devil was really expencive after all, we needed to be sure. So we went to see his next race, the last of this year. We looked at how he was handled, and warmed up. What we saw was that he basically entered the tracks cold, and the ridder did nothing but sitting on his back while Raven was just biting inmobile objects and kicking everything close enough.

And then the race, It was breathtaking to watch. It was a long race and the first round was terribly slow, so raven took the lead without a second thought. The other horses were just falling behind farther and farther, when suddely some Rose grey horse breaks out and leaps forward. Clearly a much better trained horse. But Raven Noticed the horse on time and it was a neck to neck race over the last quarter mile. Raven lost with less then a noselenght, and he wouldn't stop running until he had gotten in front of the other. When finally he did stop, he looked as if he had been running in the rain, he was soo wet... But he had come in second, while entering cold. We needed to have this guy. Sure the Rose grey was amazing too, but he wasn't for sale.
But while we went down, looking to find Raven's owner it was pretty obvious why Raven hadn't been sold till now, the way he had by now thrown of his rider and is prancing around over the racetrack, continiously kicking out at people trying to catch him, and avoiding all hands.



Breeding: Open
Price: colored breeding or training picture, minimally 1/4th body.
Coat Color: Ee aa

offspring:
CFS Nothing less and CFS Soldier for life mustang-girl.deviantart.com/ar… by None the less


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Comments: 54

MiraeChaos In reply to ??? [2011-07-18 07:41:16 +0000 UTC]

Raven: Rises his head high in pride and prances around.

I think he means to say thank you ^^

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DakotaTheGSD In reply to MiraeChaos [2011-07-18 17:40:05 +0000 UTC]

Haha your very welcome X3

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EscyKane [2010-08-09 23:49:32 +0000 UTC]

Acceptable as a breeding stock for HSWA only if the started at least in one olympic discipline (Dressage, Cross or Show Jumping), or is a long distance racehorse (stayer).

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MiraeChaos In reply to EscyKane [2010-08-10 09:03:34 +0000 UTC]

raven is a stayer ^^ and a sprinter.. well he runs whenever he wants to really.. does that count?

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EscyKane In reply to MiraeChaos [2010-08-10 13:36:02 +0000 UTC]

It's quite unrealistic that he's both

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MiraeChaos In reply to EscyKane [2010-08-10 13:39:50 +0000 UTC]

well he's not both.. he's kinda in the middle. He has days that he just won't hold back and goes at full speed from the start, ending tired and bathing in sweat and days that he can't be bothered to actually try his best untill the third round. SO... that's how it is XD

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WoozleT [2010-06-30 05:08:03 +0000 UTC]

whoa....

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MiraeChaos In reply to WoozleT [2010-06-30 08:31:41 +0000 UTC]

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WoozleT In reply to MiraeChaos [2010-07-01 02:59:39 +0000 UTC]

I would love to save a spot for him with my TB mare Smokescreen... Oh my God. He is too hot!

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MiraeChaos In reply to WoozleT [2010-07-01 08:11:14 +0000 UTC]

Hm.. I like her record, and looks, maybe. And I adore Zenyatta... But Raven still has 2 racing years to go before he's open to public breedings, so You'll have to be patient, I don't reserve.

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WoozleT In reply to MiraeChaos [2010-07-01 13:52:56 +0000 UTC]

Alright I shall be hounding this guy!

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MiraeChaos In reply to WoozleT [2010-07-01 14:19:09 +0000 UTC]

haha, I'll be looking forward to that ^^

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Remi149 [2010-05-25 15:41:33 +0000 UTC]

ooooh! he is so handsome!

wanna rp him with me? XD

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MiraeChaos In reply to Remi149 [2010-05-25 16:04:11 +0000 UTC]

oh sure! start anyway you want , and he'll be there for you

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Remi149 In reply to MiraeChaos [2010-05-25 16:10:14 +0000 UTC]

Yay! so do we wanna rp in comments or in notes?

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MiraeChaos In reply to Remi149 [2010-05-25 16:45:46 +0000 UTC]

I don't mind either way ^^ Just start

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Remi149 In reply to MiraeChaos [2010-05-25 16:46:23 +0000 UTC]

okie dokie

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MiraeChaos In reply to Remi149 [2010-05-25 16:47:17 +0000 UTC]

do you want to play in a "wild" setting, or a stable setting? cuz raven is a little different in the wild..

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Remi149 In reply to MiraeChaos [2010-05-25 16:49:37 +0000 UTC]

wild i guess

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MiraeChaos In reply to Remi149 [2010-05-25 16:57:01 +0000 UTC]

okay

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CTMTF [2010-03-11 22:33:30 +0000 UTC]

I love his colors and the furisity in his pose. His story and personality are really something too.

I may have to request a breeding when he becomes available.

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MiraeChaos In reply to CTMTF [2010-03-12 07:23:27 +0000 UTC]

Thank you I kinda love him too, cuz raven is such a little devil
He will be soon enough, just a breed pic and a season pic and he'll be availible

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CTMTF In reply to MiraeChaos [2010-03-13 00:29:27 +0000 UTC]

You're welcome. I'll keep my eyes open for when they're up.

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jouroo [2010-01-18 04:10:26 +0000 UTC]

So pretty! A lot of emotion too, I like it. The bit looks almost like it's choking him in a sense that really adds to the energy. Nice work

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MiraeChaos In reply to jouroo [2010-01-18 08:17:02 +0000 UTC]

It does? Ohw...
Well thank yuu! I'm qite proud of it, so i'm really happy other people thing it's pretty too

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Rebelisch [2010-01-08 19:00:09 +0000 UTC]

He looks like the Raven from the RPG world

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MiraeChaos In reply to Rebelisch [2010-01-08 19:48:11 +0000 UTC]

yeah, that was my intention, only this is a thoroughbred, and his personality is far worse X3

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Rebelisch In reply to MiraeChaos [2010-01-10 11:42:14 +0000 UTC]

Yeah raven was an arabian. I liked him very much I think he was in the same game as Schim.

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MiraeChaos In reply to Rebelisch [2010-01-10 11:50:58 +0000 UTC]

could be, I still have that raven. But I didn't want my dear useless playboy in my stables, so I made a new raven X3

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meihua [2010-01-06 23:23:14 +0000 UTC]

Beautiful and intense!

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MiraeChaos In reply to meihua [2010-01-07 07:01:22 +0000 UTC]

thank you! I'm so glad people like this, I was perrty proud it actually worked out

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KittyNoLikeYou [2010-01-06 04:33:00 +0000 UTC]

Beautiful, I like your realism!!!!!

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MiraeChaos In reply to KittyNoLikeYou [2010-01-06 15:28:30 +0000 UTC]

haha, you would, he's shiny after all X3
Thank you!

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KittyNoLikeYou In reply to MiraeChaos [2010-01-10 07:45:54 +0000 UTC]

yes well...... shiny does help
lol, sorry I'm like a little kid who is easily distracted by shiny things XD

your more then welcome ^w^

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MiraeChaos In reply to KittyNoLikeYou [2010-01-10 11:32:47 +0000 UTC]

Yeah I know aht it's like.. shiny is just... I love shiny things too X3

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runninghorsespirit [2010-01-06 01:17:10 +0000 UTC]

i thought it was a real photo, amazing work ^^

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MiraeChaos In reply to runninghorsespirit [2010-01-06 15:34:24 +0000 UTC]

wow, really?! Thank yuu!

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runninghorsespirit In reply to MiraeChaos [2010-01-06 23:49:02 +0000 UTC]

your welcome ^^

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NerezzaNZ [2010-01-05 18:56:14 +0000 UTC]

HE'S AWSUM!!!
I luv him., (l)
(but not as much as Rikke ofcourse )

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MiraeChaos In reply to NerezzaNZ [2010-01-06 15:27:34 +0000 UTC]

awsum? cool.. Thank you! And he's way better then rikki
Welll, I think so anyway ^^

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NerezzaNZ In reply to MiraeChaos [2010-01-06 18:14:52 +0000 UTC]

No there's nobudy better then my Rikkie (L) xD

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Nynke-FmnF [2010-01-05 14:53:48 +0000 UTC]

wow he's just beautiful!!

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MiraeChaos In reply to Nynke-FmnF [2010-01-05 16:43:01 +0000 UTC]

Hell yeah he is! Meet Raven Destroyer of all racing tracks! (thát and a bunch of brindles, saddles, stable doors...)

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Nynke-FmnF In reply to MiraeChaos [2010-01-05 19:04:32 +0000 UTC]

Sounds like Ruby Bite XD

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MiraeChaos In reply to Nynke-FmnF [2010-01-06 11:10:32 +0000 UTC]

really? ohw well, we're used to terrible horses, neh?

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Nynke-FmnF In reply to MiraeChaos [2010-01-06 11:40:19 +0000 UTC]

yea unfortunatly... XD however, Kira is probobly still the worst of them XD

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MiraeChaos In reply to Nynke-FmnF [2010-01-06 15:34:42 +0000 UTC]

no doubt X3

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ProjectWicca [2010-01-05 14:00:03 +0000 UTC]


Excellent! He's so pretty!

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MiraeChaos In reply to ProjectWicca [2010-01-05 16:45:13 +0000 UTC]

Thank you! I do love him XD

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ProjectWicca In reply to MiraeChaos [2010-01-05 17:18:07 +0000 UTC]

Are you posting his HArpg information later?

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