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Request forI don't like this... >n>;
Oh well, as long as you like it........?
Aura (c) =Nathan-Xylar
Thorntail&Art (c) Me
By the way, requests are closed. >w>
CREEPY WEIRD BACKROUND BECAUSE I'M STUPID.
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Comments: 8
Ginks [2011-07-09 09:24:02 +0000 UTC]
Overall
Vision
Originality
Technique
Impact
Alright, I'm going to try and critique this in a slightly different way this time. If it doesn't work out well, I'll go back to my more sloppy review method.
Vision: The colors are too bright and kind of an eyesore. The purple and yellow outlines aren't very appealing either. The expressions are alright, and everything else is just meh.
Originality: Nothing too interesting. Just two furries slapped in front of a neony rainbow background
Technique: The lineart isn't too bad, well except for the cookie. Coloring also seems pretty smooth. It's okay, but again, nothing too interesting.
Impact: The pic in general seems pretty generic. As I said before, nothing too interesting, and the background is quite blinding.
Try being less bold with the colors, and try adding more depth to your drawings also. That might help some.
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MischiefCatOfDoom In reply to Ginks [2011-07-09 09:27:32 +0000 UTC]
Haha, I know, this fails. xD
It's past 4am right now.
But thanks for the critique!
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Ginks In reply to MischiefCatOfDoom [2011-07-09 09:29:03 +0000 UTC]
I understand⦠the stuff I make during late night sessions are also questionable at times o:
You're welcome.
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9tailsfoxyfoxy [2011-07-10 20:04:36 +0000 UTC]
uh ohhh that kitty eez soo deaddd ladeeeeeeyyyyy xDDDD hohohohohoh
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