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missingnumbers β€” snowglobe
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Published: 2018-12-23 02:42:33 +0000 UTC; Views: 3591; Favourites: 57; Downloads: 0
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Description we hoped it would get bad enough to break glass

that one of our voices
would find the note
to split the window
make a neighbour call the cops
that the dishes would shatter
into too many pieces
to be picked off the floor

we wanted glass in our heels
a trickle of heat
a flicker of colour
in the sun-blank snow

the pines leaned on our doorframe
we waited for them
to pressure in and unfurl
shower our stunned faces
in a rain of needles

knock the teapot off the table
in a blossom of shards

but the trees stood by

evergreen and identical
the same dream of pine repeating
behind yellowing plastic

we painted shut the door
with smiles moulded to our faces
let our legs melt to the floor

and stood waiting
for the plastic weather
to throw us the same storm
again. again. again.
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i-Kirhi-O [2023-01-06 16:43:26 +0000 UTC]

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silvernium [2020-11-20 23:26:39 +0000 UTC]

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missingnumbers In reply to silvernium [2021-01-15 02:49:00 +0000 UTC]

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adelechapline [2019-07-29 04:21:46 +0000 UTC]

Beautifully written and much deserving of the DD

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missingnumbers In reply to adelechapline [2019-07-29 22:58:51 +0000 UTC]

Thank you! <3

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always-mep [2019-07-12 05:33:43 +0000 UTC]

Congrats on your well deserved DD!Β 

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missingnumbers In reply to always-mep [2019-07-16 20:26:37 +0000 UTC]

Thank you!

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ObsydianDreamer [2019-07-12 01:42:35 +0000 UTC]

Ooft. This hits home.

Amazing piece though, and worth the DD. Congratulations.Β  Β 

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missingnumbers In reply to ObsydianDreamer [2019-07-16 20:26:50 +0000 UTC]

Thank you so much

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ObsydianDreamer In reply to missingnumbers [2019-07-19 02:53:00 +0000 UTC]

You're welcome

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YouInventedMe [2019-07-11 17:10:44 +0000 UTC]

Congrats on the DD! Moving this from my favorites to my DD collection.

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missingnumbers In reply to YouInventedMe [2019-07-16 20:27:04 +0000 UTC]

Thank you!

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GhangUhs [2019-07-11 15:42:58 +0000 UTC]

damn lovely, cheers.

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missingnumbers In reply to GhangUhs [2019-07-16 20:27:13 +0000 UTC]

Thank you

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GameUniverso [2019-07-11 13:39:43 +0000 UTC]

Why do they want glass on their feet?Β  Sounds painful.

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missingnumbers In reply to GameUniverso [2019-07-16 20:27:42 +0000 UTC]

They're not the most well-adjusted people.

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NotWithoutHonor [2019-07-11 07:06:27 +0000 UTC]

Well done. Congratulations on the DD.

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missingnumbers In reply to NotWithoutHonor [2019-07-16 20:27:22 +0000 UTC]

Thank you!

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Tiger--eyes [2019-06-24 20:12:17 +0000 UTC]

we wanted glass in our heels
a trickle of heat
a flicker of colour
in the sun-blank snow

the pines leaned on our doorframe

Just incredible.

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missingnumbers In reply to Tiger--eyes [2019-06-26 03:46:12 +0000 UTC]

thank you

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