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Published: 2018-01-21 05:24:15 +0000 UTC; Views: 1343; Favourites: 81; Downloads: 0
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More practice. I still feel like something is wrong with how I do humans. XP
I got a lot of good advice from drawing AJ, like how to give more life to the eyes and curving the face more.
I tried doing more with the hands too but it still looks off. :/
Once more the face looks weird to me. Plus I feel her body isn't long enough? Like I should have had more....er..Belly? before the hips started...
Edit 1: Stretched the belly a bit.
Edit 2: Fixed the cloth over the breasts
Edit 3: Lengthened the left forearm
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This artwork is great, but the skirt on her looks a little to big. You also forgot to put eyelashes on her eyes. the tangtop on her is a little to small. I can start to see part of her breasts. On the right, the elbow is a little to pointy. the chin andd the fight cheek is to pointy. her eyes look to weird on that spot. You forgot her butterfly clip for her hair. And her skin is to is to shiny. Her belly is to thin. But still, good job on that art work keep it up e.deviantart.net/emoticons/b/b… " width="15" height="15" alt="
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"eyelashes"
Never a requirement
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How did you put the critiques about your art?
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Tysm for the honest critique!
I've never really been good at drawing humans. I can't seem to decide between drawing anime looking or cartoony so the entire thing becomes a hash of both in the end.
I'll keep this in mind for my next attempt!
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That's alright, its good! Guess what!? I have a yt channel named Wolfy Tube.
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There is one that has a pink background and a tanish, blackis, grayish wolf, and there is some white letters that say, "Wolfy Tube." That's my channel.
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Which one is it? I see two channels called Wolfy Tube. X3
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The icon with a pink background.
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Well, the proportions are somewhat good. The breasts are on a good height. But I don't think clothes work like that when they go over the breasts. When the fabric of the top goes over them, it covers them. That way the lines you drew that go around the breasts shouldn't be visible. Also I think you drew the collarbones a little too low. You should draw them a little higher, so that they are on the same lever as the shoulders. But try not to make them collide with the neck, because that would look awful. You could also try to make the right arm (not counting the humerus) thicker and longer. Right now Fluttershy's right elbow looks too small and sharp. Otherwise it's a good drawing overall. Good job!
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Tysm for the advice!
I've recently decided to practice with humans and the anatomy has be stumped. I'll make sure to put your advice to use!
Ah yes, I wasn't sure what to do with the fabric over her breasts. No matter what I did I couldn't get it to look right for some reason. XP
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you're welcome! happy to help <3
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Dude, this is actually rly greatly made!!*0*
You got the majority right, the only mistakes I see is the clothing wrinkles around the breasts, like the others pointed out!
I don't see much else which you did wrong, tho!
So wonderful work, you're anatomy is very gr8^^
I love the shading too, btw
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Awe thanks so much!
I'm learning how to draw humans, but I want to develop my own style as well.
Somehow I started off with an anime look. Hopefully that'll wear off in time and they'll look more unique.
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You're definitely welcome!^^
Yeah, I do see! Tho I do think you have a unique and recognizable style:>
And I'm sure it'll turn more unique, when time flies by
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I think that the head should be slightly smaller, and when you draw the arm, make sure both parts of the arm are the same size, because you made the first part of the arm bigger than the second part. Hopefully this helps!
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I kept thinking her head was too small while I was sketching her and ended up making it a bit too big in the end. That I definately agree with.
Arms are difficult, I keep getting the lengths of the forearm wrong when compared to the rest, not to mention my hands are either too big or too small. X3
I'll definitely try to fix that on the next one though!
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The face actually looks a lot better, nicely done. As the body goes, yeah probably little bit more belly before the hips but besides that, nicely done C:
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Just fixed it and added more belly before the hips.
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Good, good. The waist does seem a little too small but you're doing great
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Awe thanks! I feel a little better about this one. X3
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XD I thought the skirt was hiding it. lol
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Lol, I am the Thicc police. no one can hide it from me.
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