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Published: 2013-08-25 12:04:11 +0000 UTC; Views: 21511; Favourites: 649; Downloads: 386
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I missed them so much, so i decided to draw them this time.Character is my original characters, Falsha and Kailani, they're siblings
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Tool : SAI paint tool
Pixiv Link : www.pixiv.net/member_illust.ph…
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The proportions are off - but I like the scene and character setup.
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could you tell me which one is off ? i appreciate your critique :3
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Since you asked - character to the right has poor muscle tone in the lower legs compared to the rest of the character, hips are too far apart, foot to the lower right is small compared to viewpoint, for that matter the viewpoint on many of the body parts is strange - I don't think the left side of the character should look like that, but that is preference. There is clearly an angle and viewpoint (camera) going on here, but what I'm noticing a lack of observance towards depth. I'll admit that most DeviantArt images are often at an angle and depth is taken into account, but many images look 'flat'. This image doesn't look flat, which makes the proportions all the more noticeable; for that matter, there is a lot going on here that says something about the characters. Wish I could say the same for 'stock' looking images that are otherwise generic.
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there's so rare someone want to give deep critique like you, i mostly appreciated it (again) XD
now i know where's should i fix, i hope not gonna repeat the same mistake for my next art.
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That fish has me laughing. Not only can I see "X"'s for eyes, but it appears that it's skewered and being munched upon. Hahahahha!
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Thank you, be gentle to them XD
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Welcome~<3 Hahahah I won't promise anything xDD <3<3
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Wonderful job on the coloring and character designs!~
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I liked the extra care to draw foliage shadows onto the dark-haired girl's hair and shoulders. Good stuff.
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thanks for the feeback ^^
Glad u notice it
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I can just imagine her thinking, "mmmmm yummy fishie...nom nom nom"
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Thanks for visiting my deviation again
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gak pertamax gak asik .. numpang masuk ke gambarnya aja ah :v
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Wkwk telaat, sudah ada pemborong pertamax di dA lol
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This is awesome, I love the whole scene o_o" Nice one >w<
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Thank you wolfie :'D
Im not confident enough with my BG, glad u like it
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Yaaay! <3 I missed these two! <3
You do awesome backgrounds ;A;
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Sameee heree <3
Thank you Myet .. ah i missed the bears tribe too lol
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