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Published: 2004-07-14 20:35:06 +0000 UTC; Views: 53; Favourites: 1; Downloads: 1
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When you criedI'd wipe away your tears
When in fear and you screamed
I'd try to kill all those fears
When you claimed no one cared
yet why have I been caring for years
When I cried
You'd look away
When Scared and I screamed
You'd disappear for another day
When I asked if you cared
You just walked away
When I looked for a way to end my life
You helped me for once
You helped me fall upon your knife
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Comments: 2
newfoundlander66 [2004-08-09 16:36:37 +0000 UTC]
i like it, it does remind me of My Immortal, but its very very good
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monocot In reply to newfoundlander66 [2004-08-09 16:39:27 +0000 UTC]
a couple of my poems go off of songs. i try to mold them today. with my form! thanks for the comment
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