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Published: 2013-07-22 02:03:25 +0000 UTC; Views: 164; Favourites: 2; Downloads: 0
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My mind has a tendencyto wander
and
my mouth uses words like
gallivanting
and
concupiscence
in an effort to impress, although-
I had to look them up
and I'm still not sure if I've said what I meant to.
I wonder
each second
if someone else has already said what I meant,
and if they've said it better.
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Comments: 3
Hi, Sean here, stopping by for a long overdue critique from #We-Poets .
I love this, Kelly, and I actually have zero edits to the poem itself. The only edit I'd suggest--and feel free to ignore this--is to the title. Have you considered changing the title to: Said It Better
? [not specifically capped that way, however you like]
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Thanks for the feedback! I am admittedly terrible at titling. I think I will take your advice!
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