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CHAPTER ONE:


THE LADY BUG 

(UNFINISHED)


HENRY EYED THE SMALL INSECT.It's beady, little eyes stared back. Henry blew a steady breath at the beetle, But it didn't even move one leg, let alone flinch, on his grubby, little hand.


It's glossy, red back dotted with seven, perfect 

spots gleamed in the evening light.


SLAP! A stinging sensation ran through Henry's

 cheek, willing him to cry, but he held both his 

physical and emotional feelings steady.


“Henry! Don't be a fool to dirty your hands with

 such a disgustinginsect! Men of the Lemaine

 family did not waste their time on such things!

 Come along to the car when you are cleaned 

up and ready, Do not take up any more of my

 precious time!” A tall woman sneered, with a

 highly irritated expression.


“Yes Aunt Marian”Henry replied quietly.


He heard her mumble about gardeners,

 bug killers and repellants as she trotted 

away, off towards the car.


Henry had flinched when Aunt Marian had 

used past tense: ' did not'as she had talked about 

the Lemaine men. It hurt to think of his father, 

as he had passed away along with Henry's mother

 two long years ago in a terrible kidnapping accident.


Henry was only five then, but still, the memory was 

like a glass pane, cleaned,wiped,scrubbed, and 

dried so many times and so carefully, it was so 

clean it was like pure light or energy itself.


The smile on Henry's mother's face as she told

 him 'It'll only be a minute' as she left him out

 in the gardens, the forest around him had been

 bursting with life. Toads croaked, Birds sang, 

ducks dove underneath the very surface of 

the water. He could still smell the scent of the

 pine trees drifting in the wind, and the ecstasy

 in the rose bushes as they vibrantly presented 

their scarlet hue on their soft, delicate petals.


Henry let the delightful memory pass by, 

he didn't want to remember what had happened after....Those gigantic, sweaty hands, pressed tightly

 around his skin, the man's breath as 

he told Henry to keep qui-

STOP IT! He told himself, shivering despite of the

 warmth of the the afternoon sun on his back.


Henry was just about to wipe tears on the 

verge of falling down his cheeks when he 

remembered the lady bug on his finger.


He was reminded of what Aunt Marian had said

 about the insect and the lecture and his 

hidden anger was unleashed.


He screamed at the lady bug.


“LOOK AT WHAT YOU'VE DONE! YOU'LL

 SUFFER FOR HAVING ME GET SCOLDED AT!” 

Henry raged at the creature.


He was well aware that it had not been the

bug's fault at all, but honestly his'. But from

 the fear of even just the memory of the kidnapping

 and his parent's death, he still could 

not cope enough to even just spare a life 

of an innocent. However how small it may be.


He grabbed the insect between his two fingers, 

barely holding onto it, and brought it to a very,

very shallow, and muddy puddle of non purified , 

rain water. He let his grasp go from the lady bug 

above the puddle, and there was not even the 

slightest noise to identify that the bug had dropped.


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Comments: 11

cyimang [2012-08-24 19:15:02 +0000 UTC]

Nice Its very interesting Um, I can't think of the right one right now..
But I'll look for you

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MTMAL13 In reply to cyimang [2012-08-24 20:28:28 +0000 UTC]

ok thanks, and is it interesting in a good way??

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cyimang In reply to MTMAL13 [2012-08-24 20:33:17 +0000 UTC]

You are very welcome Yes it is! Now, is this fiction??

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MTMAL13 In reply to cyimang [2012-08-24 20:38:50 +0000 UTC]

Well no sci-fi but it isn't non-fiction so i guess fiction.

-__- wow i'm confused about this stuff already. all those times studying in school and i manage to forget everything!

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cyimang In reply to MTMAL13 [2012-08-24 20:42:59 +0000 UTC]

Aww.. I think its Fantasy


I understand. It happens to me too. But I'm sure you be
ok

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MTMAL13 In reply to cyimang [2012-08-24 20:43:54 +0000 UTC]

hopefully. i want to do good this year. I'm going into junior high too. :/

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cyimang In reply to MTMAL13 [2012-08-24 20:45:47 +0000 UTC]

You will, just have faith in your abilities
I do

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MTMAL13 In reply to cyimang [2012-08-24 20:52:39 +0000 UTC]

thank you so much!

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cyimang In reply to MTMAL13 [2012-08-24 21:00:19 +0000 UTC]

Hehe.. Aww You are very welcome!

And for your story: Literature > Prose > Fiction > Fantasy > Introductions & Chapters

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MTMAL13 In reply to cyimang [2012-08-24 21:04:46 +0000 UTC]

thank you!

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cyimang In reply to MTMAL13 [2012-08-24 21:10:46 +0000 UTC]

You are very welcome!

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