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MyDyingRose — POAT 5 page submission

Published: 2005-07-02 02:25:05 +0000 UTC; Views: 2987; Favourites: 31; Downloads: 272
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Description Here it is! One of the many reasons i've been quiet for the last couple weeks. It would've been done alot sooner, had it not been for an incredibly busy schedule.... i think i may have bitten off more than i can chew.

But as the title suggests, this is a 5 page submission that i will be sending out to companies in hopes that one of them will pick it up. So yes.... hopefully.

Pictures of a Tragedy (including characters) is my property until further notice

:edit: obviously, it would be a good idea to full view this one as it is tiny in thumbnail mode
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Comments: 42

BazookoidBen [2008-06-03 23:13:14 +0000 UTC]

Such a sad story. But fantastic artwork the lack of colours gives it almost a film noir look or perhaps a 'It's a wonderful life,' feel. As well as that there is the beutifuly stylealised character design. A good read.

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MyDyingRose In reply to BazookoidBen [2008-06-05 17:00:19 +0000 UTC]

Thank you kindly... It's sad to think that this was done two years ago. I gotta get their big story finished for the masses. It's much better than this little outdated teaser. Originally Amaya (black haired girl) was from England, but I've left that thought behind. Now she's 'just' your average small town american goth girl

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TheDramaticMonarch [2007-02-02 19:56:47 +0000 UTC]

Wow...what a heartbreaking but beautiful little story. You have a way of giving your characters fantastic facial expressions that get across how they're feeling.

Awesome work! Keep it up!

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MyDyingRose In reply to TheDramaticMonarch [2007-02-04 02:11:15 +0000 UTC]

Thanks! I gotta get this story rollin' again. I've been meaning to for 3 or 4 years now. Somehow, i always manage to find something else to do haha.

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dark-elf-girl [2006-04-11 17:19:25 +0000 UTC]

wow! AMAZING! love it! so sad..................but still beautifull!

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MyDyingRose In reply to dark-elf-girl [2006-04-16 17:19:17 +0000 UTC]

Thankya

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dark-elf-girl In reply to MyDyingRose [2006-04-16 17:34:38 +0000 UTC]

welkomies! ^^

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CHOSENBLOOD [2005-08-22 18:08:02 +0000 UTC]

You have the skill to do it your self. And I am sure you have anofe people to support your work. I do not know where you submited you work, but if you don't here back from them, thats their lost.
even if you go complet independent, it is bound to go some where.

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MyDyingRose In reply to CHOSENBLOOD [2005-08-24 02:04:49 +0000 UTC]

I appreciate your comment. But yes, i've heard back and basically they weren't too trribly interested. So i'm gonna go ahead and do a self publish deal on this

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CHOSENBLOOD In reply to MyDyingRose [2005-08-24 14:57:05 +0000 UTC]

Well, you have my suport, and I belive many others.

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theCHAMBA [2005-08-13 18:03:51 +0000 UTC]

any word back for ya proposal mate... it's prolly been asked already so sorry if i'm repeating

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MyDyingRose In reply to theCHAMBA [2005-08-13 18:26:05 +0000 UTC]

proposal?

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theCHAMBA In reply to MyDyingRose [2005-08-13 18:32:47 +0000 UTC]

ye kno..
this submission....

sometimes known as a comic proposal..

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MyDyingRose In reply to theCHAMBA [2005-08-13 18:41:50 +0000 UTC]

forgive me for not figuring that one out sooner lol.

I sent it off to Neko Press, but the owner claimed they were booked solid for 2 years. I found out by an artist he "let go" that there's some weird stuff happening there right now.

Oh well, there's other companies, and other projects to play with. This is just a minor hic-up. I figured what i'm going to do is self publish this one. I've appointed an official script editor and an art editor. Fresh eyes are invaluable.

Thanks for your interest!

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heyyouinthebushes [2005-07-04 11:05:14 +0000 UTC]

I give more praise here. Because I CAN!!!!!!!!! Oh, and soon there will be cooperative princely vibration. yes, that's right, the moving and the shaking.

Yo.

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MyDyingRose In reply to heyyouinthebushes [2005-07-10 15:59:03 +0000 UTC]

See Jeff, don't you feel special now? You now can comment on the stuff that you sometimes see on real paper.

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ton-dieu-noir [2005-07-04 04:00:37 +0000 UTC]

dmn, you make me wish i could draw comics, this is so well done, the only complaint i have is between page two and three it just doesn't seem to flow... i'm not sure, i know you have limited space, it's the only thing i can find to be wrong with this, fabulous work as always

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MyDyingRose In reply to ton-dieu-noir [2005-07-10 15:59:53 +0000 UTC]

Perhaps change the wording a bit? That's one thing i was thinking about. Thanks for the suggestion

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Lady-Vanity [2005-07-03 04:31:33 +0000 UTC]

insanely good man

luff it

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MyDyingRose In reply to Lady-Vanity [2005-07-10 16:00:30 +0000 UTC]

Thanks Em

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Buzla [2005-07-02 19:37:20 +0000 UTC]

This is stunning, breath taking, beautiful... I don't know what to say. Love it

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MyDyingRose In reply to Buzla [2005-07-10 16:01:07 +0000 UTC]

thanks

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Insignificant-Other [2005-07-02 18:50:58 +0000 UTC]

This looks really brilliant. I just love how much work and detail is packed into these 5 pages, the whole of Amaya's background layed out.
The drawing work is all excellent, I don't think there's anything I can pick fault with. The shading is awesome aswell, really effective. You've definitely got the hang of that, considering it's one of the more "recent" developments in your style. I especially love the sense of atmosphere in the cemetary in the first and last pages, and the texture of those trees.

Just a minor little thing. I see you've already noticed "nkock", and also "well be safe.." should have an apostrophe.
Besides that, great work as usual. I really do hope someone take this on, it's going to be a brilliant book.

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MyDyingRose In reply to Insignificant-Other [2005-07-10 16:02:26 +0000 UTC]

I didn't notice that well be safe thing... thanks

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wardy360 [2005-07-02 15:13:30 +0000 UTC]

Bud, everytime u put up some POAT stuff it usually kicks my Ass to the point where im in awe.
great suff J, awesome tones, the story is excellent, great piece of Flashback as it were.

Absolutely amazing!

*coughs* typo top of page 3! *coughs*

shhh noone else seems to have noticed!

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MyDyingRose In reply to wardy360 [2005-07-02 17:29:20 +0000 UTC]

hehe, was it the "nkock"?
Yeah, i'll be fixing a few things here and there. minor things, but still need to fix them before mailing them.

thanks Mark

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wardy360 In reply to MyDyingRose [2005-07-02 22:30:17 +0000 UTC]

yup!
Respect to ya bro! its all good!

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childofthekorn666 [2005-07-02 11:16:54 +0000 UTC]

Wonderfully done.

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MyDyingRose In reply to childofthekorn666 [2005-07-10 16:02:44 +0000 UTC]

thanks

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jellyfishman [2005-07-02 08:49:59 +0000 UTC]

beautiful man

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the-destroyer-awaknd [2005-07-02 08:03:49 +0000 UTC]

looks rockin' justin, i hope you get some work outta this, because i'd hire you on the spot...if i had my company back...

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MyDyingRose In reply to the-destroyer-awaknd [2005-07-10 16:03:07 +0000 UTC]

I appreciate the idea then

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the-destroyer-awaknd In reply to MyDyingRose [2005-07-13 01:51:20 +0000 UTC]

np. its true.

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David-the-North [2005-07-02 07:16:33 +0000 UTC]

nice

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MyDyingRose In reply to David-the-North [2005-07-10 16:03:16 +0000 UTC]

thanks

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ShitB [2005-07-02 04:04:33 +0000 UTC]

This is very good work. Your characters have great depth and you draw very well... Glad to be watching you.

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MyDyingRose In reply to ShitB [2005-07-02 04:54:04 +0000 UTC]

I'm happy you're glad to be watching me! It's a very high compliment methinks

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nwootters [2005-07-02 02:59:19 +0000 UTC]

This is great. It's amazing what you're able to convey with only five pages. You can really sympathize for the girl. So sad...

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MyDyingRose In reply to nwootters [2005-07-02 04:53:26 +0000 UTC]

Thanks!
I wish i could've done a few more pages, but eh... publishers are too busy to read novels lol

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HPfreak [2005-07-02 02:41:57 +0000 UTC]

I loves it, such a sad tale behind her life...... The drawing is perfect as always lol

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MyDyingRose In reply to HPfreak [2005-07-02 04:52:37 +0000 UTC]

thanks!

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HPfreak In reply to MyDyingRose [2005-07-02 11:19:36 +0000 UTC]

Welcome Wow......I got first comment that like never happens lol

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