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Published: 2012-04-12 02:39:01 +0000 UTC; Views: 1213; Favourites: 4; Downloads: 23
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Description Sometimes I really hate school X_X. It wasn't school though that made me feel like crap today though...*sigh* Lesson learned (I hope) if you are going to do something, do it before you waste time on the Internet. I said to myself: I am GOING to do this...going to do thi...well looking at one website before I do it couldn't hurt...that one website turned into about 7...

Anyway, sorry this took longer than I said it would . SECOND PAGE! First time ever I have multiple parts to something. This is part two of the gift comic I'm making to Hope you enjoy this part! (By the way, the description is a RP he and I did together. He is himself and I am Melody. Sneezydragon, HOLY CRAP! I didn't have to change anything! No spelling errors in this part, you made it flow very well. Great job with this RP! It was incredibly easy to make it into something like this.

I smell an intruder A powerful mind thought. Her ocean-blue scales shone brightly in the sunlight, but her eyes were as cold as night and they bore in the direction of Melody. I told her I'd come...let's see how she likes how fast I can be. If the human is gone by the time I get there, at least I'll be able to see what 'emotion' she has. I'll have to keep a close eye on her no matter what...still, there is nowhere the human can hide from me. I'll smell him no matter where he runs to. And with that she took off, flying towards them with fast speed. Meanwhile, Melody was still giving her kiss to Liam when she thought of the dragoness. "Liam! You need to go! You don't know how dangerous it is here now."

Liam was still stuck to Melody's wet nose, he physically felt like he was melting as the cold flesh caressed his own "I er.." he peeled himself off with his arms, feeling abit faint from all the attention "W-what do you mean?" he asked confused about why she was so upset and obviously why he had to go? the worst thing that ever happened here was when that horse came over and tries to steal his love away...bastard...

Melody shivered with worry, knowing that the dragoness would get here at any time. "There's someone after you. If you don't go back soon, she'll kill you...oh you can't outrun her now...um...where could a hiding place be? Somewhere where she wouldn't know where you were.

"What!? oh shi- ok well umm...where do I hide!? he paniced and ran his fingers through his hair "fuuuuuu- why do they want to?-you can tell me about this later if I manage to live...please just hide me somewhere!...except up your butt cause I have my limits" he managed to squeeze in some comedy after all laughter is the best medicine...don't know if it's as good as a pair of defibulators though...

Melody stopped to think. If that nose could smell better can her own nose, then Liam's smell must've stuck out like a sore thumb. There wasn't anything she could do to mask the smell...smell! Her own nostrils twitched in protest as an idea formed in her mind...it was the only way she could think of. "Liam, a place you could hide is...in my nose. If you get deep enough, there is no way she can find you as long as you don't make a sound. She will still smell you, but you'll be out of her sight..." *she can smell the dragoness coming closer. She's about 10 miles away*

"Well...I don't know...what if you snee-" he was interupted by a distant roar which filled him with worry "what was that!? right fine I'll go in!" peer pressured by the noise of the ever nearing bbeing that threatened to snuff out his life, he was willing to go once again up Melody's nose...this time he hoped that he wouldn't make her sneeze.

Melody was praying with herself that she wouldn't sneeze as well. Quickly she leaned against the ground as flat as she could and she put her nose against Liam again, both as an entrance way and as another kiss. "Please don't reveal yourself, no matter what she does to me." She said before purposely flaring her nostrils. "You ready?"

"No! but I guess I'm going to have to be..." he grumbled, he normally would beg to go up Melody's nose but now that this experience has been put into a life and death situation it was alot less enjoyable...He quickly climbed into one of the macro's flared nostrils, carefully but speedily navigating his way through nose hairs into deeper and moister areas of her snout. Liam found a good enough place deep inside Melody's nose near to where it connected to her throat, it was alot less hairy but alot more slippery too, he sat down and leaned again the wall of her nostril, not wanting to obstruct her breathing or risk getting sucking in or snorted out of her nose.

Melody could feel Liam going deep into her nose, and she could feel her nostrils quivering not just by the odd sensations he was causing, but by the chill in the air again. The dragoness had arrived and she had the look of a killer in her eyes. Where is he? She mentally told Melody.
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MICO-G [2012-04-16 07:27:02 +0000 UTC]

nice! ^^

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mysterysneeze In reply to MICO-G [2012-04-17 05:25:37 +0000 UTC]

Thank you

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SketchySnoot [2012-04-13 01:25:29 +0000 UTC]

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mysterysneeze In reply to SketchySnoot [2012-04-13 05:02:26 +0000 UTC]

Thank you! I'm trying to improve

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