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NativeEmo87 β€” Our Dad
Published: 2011-12-09 21:09:11 +0000 UTC; Views: 103; Favourites: 3; Downloads: 4
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Description My dad,
the man we call pops,
the man that should have been by our side,
the man that made us cry harder than smile,
the man we can't refuse,
he is the man that we love,
he is the man we can't stand,
our dad,
I child five of seven,
paid my dues like the five of you,
our dad,
he crushed our youth,
and took what mattered most,
took a gap,
in the things we knew most,
our dad,
the man we had to show the way,
to watch him make a trade,
our dad who drank to sleep,
our dad who took a sniff,
our dad who is half blind,
our dad who can't drive,
our dad who would never think,
our dad a drop out with near no knowledge,
our dad who we had to carry,
our dad in a birds cage,
five years time,
our dad,
that man,
will always be our dad,
through his blames,
through his falls,
we are his crutch,
so we can hold a ton,
because of our dad.
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Comments: 27

Blasphemer88 [2011-12-30 06:26:04 +0000 UTC]

GREAT POEM KID! I can really relate.KEEP IT UP!

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NativeEmo87 In reply to Blasphemer88 [2011-12-30 06:26:22 +0000 UTC]

Thank you.

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Blasphemer88 In reply to NativeEmo87 [2011-12-30 06:34:07 +0000 UTC]

No probs!I used to write a little poetry back in the day(when I was a hippie.)So keep expressing what you feel through your art and it'll keep you from going nuts.Trust me on this!

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SimplePlanLove [2011-12-09 23:01:54 +0000 UTC]

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NativeEmo87 In reply to SimplePlanLove [2011-12-30 06:28:06 +0000 UTC]

Whyyyy?

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SimplePlanLove In reply to NativeEmo87 [2012-01-03 13:10:18 +0000 UTC]

LOL, perchè ogni cosa che scrivi, anche la più stupida, è magnifica.

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NativeEmo87 In reply to SimplePlanLove [2012-01-05 23:45:50 +0000 UTC]

Scrivo cose stupide. : P Grazie, significa molto .. : D

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SimplePlanLove In reply to NativeEmo87 [2012-01-06 23:56:08 +0000 UTC]

Prego!

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NativeEmo87 In reply to SimplePlanLove [2012-01-07 07:24:18 +0000 UTC]

??

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SimplePlanLove In reply to NativeEmo87 [2012-01-17 21:26:29 +0000 UTC]

Tu mi hai ringraziato e io ho risposto. Google translate?

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NativeEmo87 In reply to SimplePlanLove [2012-01-18 11:03:40 +0000 UTC]

Haha, mi dispiace.

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SimplePlanLove In reply to NativeEmo87 [2012-01-28 13:55:44 +0000 UTC]

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Lapapolnoch [2011-12-09 21:17:44 +0000 UTC]

No happy smiles...my error

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Lapapolnoch [2011-12-09 21:16:47 +0000 UTC]

OOOOOOOOOOOOOHHH! I'm Crying T_T..... It's so touching

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NativeEmo87 In reply to Lapapolnoch [2011-12-09 21:17:27 +0000 UTC]

It's not that touching? Don't cry.

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Lapapolnoch In reply to NativeEmo87 [2011-12-09 21:24:25 +0000 UTC]

I mean it's touching...I can't stop. Family-it's so difficult and sad, especially if your parents divorced....

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NativeEmo87 In reply to Lapapolnoch [2011-12-09 21:25:50 +0000 UTC]

They split when I was six.

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Lapapolnoch In reply to NativeEmo87 [2011-12-10 07:59:48 +0000 UTC]

I have same situations, but I see my dad every week and we love each other.

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NativeEmo87 In reply to Lapapolnoch [2011-12-10 11:12:50 +0000 UTC]

That's good you see him.

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Lapapolnoch In reply to NativeEmo87 [2011-12-10 14:06:14 +0000 UTC]

Yeah.

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gobbygabby1997 [2011-12-09 21:11:31 +0000 UTC]

Awwww, this is so moving

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NativeEmo87 In reply to gobbygabby1997 [2011-12-09 21:12:31 +0000 UTC]

Thanks.

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gobbygabby1997 In reply to NativeEmo87 [2011-12-09 21:16:59 +0000 UTC]

Its alright

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NativeEmo87 In reply to gobbygabby1997 [2011-12-09 21:17:55 +0000 UTC]

I liked yours though, it was happier.

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gobbygabby1997 In reply to NativeEmo87 [2011-12-09 21:58:19 +0000 UTC]

Mine was happier because my father is mostly happy, but yours shows true emotion and moved me, yours was by far the best!!

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NativeEmo87 In reply to gobbygabby1997 [2011-12-10 11:13:11 +0000 UTC]

No, but thank you.

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gobbygabby1997 In reply to NativeEmo87 [2011-12-10 17:57:48 +0000 UTC]

Yes I think so ^.^ and your welcome :3

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