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Published: 2012-05-27 20:36:47 +0000 UTC; Views: 871; Favourites: 28; Downloads: 12
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Omin laid his head on the soft blanket covering Lilith’s body. His neck was stiff; His joints ached. All he wanted was for her to wake up. This would be enough for him to drift to sleep, knowing she was alright and safe.It was morning, or so he thought. He couldn’t tell, what with the windows being covered, so he only had to guess from the pidgey and pidove chirping outside. Oh how loud they were to him. If being tired wasn’t enough, he now had a headache, one that would not go so easily with how much he was thinking. He only had his thoughts to get him through another day and as painful as it was, thinking of last night made it ever so worse.
Before another thought crossed his mind, a blue duck like pokemon came bursting through the door of their little room. His eyes were stern, looking at a clipboard, held with ones of his gloved hands. The other hand was behind his back and he spoke sharply.
“How vis the patient doing?”
Omin starred at him. Doctor Quakk came and waddled up to the bed, checking back and forth between the clipboard and his patient. He scratched his beak then stopped and noticed Omin, who gave a low growl in return.
“You don’t vook too happy to see me lad”, doctor Quakk chuckled lowly, “You should thank me”.
Omin was in no mood to ‘thank’ anyone. Doctor or not, he didn’t want anyone touching Lilith, his Lilith to add. Quakk just ignored him and carried on.
“Since my patient has a father of a dragon type, she ‘as a natural resistance to zhem and I patched ‘er up to the best of my ability, of course. If not for ze resistance though, she would ‘ave been far vorse”. He looked over to Omin, “and now zhere vis just ze question of you lad”.
Omin snorted. He turned his head towards the sleeping Lilith and decided to ignore the doctors next words.
“You cant keep yourself up in zhis room. You'll be more of a help elsevhere zhan here”.
Quakk could tell his sentence hit the little trapinch hard. He knew he cared for his friend more than he was letting off. But as harsh as it was, it was true. Omin couldn't keep doing this to himself, it would be no good to him or Lilith. Besides which, Quakk did not want another patient to add to the list.
Quakk sighed, seeing as the trainch gave no response. He checked his notes one last time to make sure everything was doing ok, then turn towards the door. As he waddled out, Omin finally turned his head back to look. The door shut and once again he was alone with Lilith.
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Mission objectives:
MAIN MISSION
-Find Malt, estimate damages alongside him ()
-Clean the village()
-Assist the construction workers in the fixing and building of structures()
SIDE MISSIONS
1)- Fetch the ranchers from the castle()
-Till the new farmland near the village()
-Help build new farm buildings()
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Comments: 20
PMDE-Miles [2012-05-28 05:30:37 +0000 UTC]
The art is cool. From the writing side though you need to add a spaces between paragraphs. It just makes things look a lot cleaner.
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NERD-that-DRAWS In reply to PMDE-Miles [2012-05-28 08:15:46 +0000 UTC]
Thank u for the tip :3
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lyndsey96 [2012-05-27 22:00:09 +0000 UTC]
I love how the white lines are used, and for some reason the flowers and the card keep the scene fresh while still holding the theme. Very nice!
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NERD-that-DRAWS In reply to lyndsey96 [2012-05-28 00:14:03 +0000 UTC]
thank you very much!! I always appreciate feedback :3
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NERD-that-DRAWS In reply to Luckysweep [2012-05-28 00:14:31 +0000 UTC]
"KILL" "KILL" "KILL" "oooo look flowers" "KILL"
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Luckysweep In reply to NERD-that-DRAWS [2012-05-28 00:20:35 +0000 UTC]
... Kill who? FLOWERS....
Simple guy, Isn't he?
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MissFluffyKitty [2012-05-27 20:53:11 +0000 UTC]
Note: you don't need the writing app if you want to be judged on your art.
Can't wait for the next part!
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NERD-that-DRAWS In reply to MissFluffyKitty [2012-05-27 20:56:10 +0000 UTC]
kk, I just don't want to submit it then get told I need one during judging . and thanks
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NERD-that-DRAWS In reply to SkittyKittyCat [2012-05-27 20:41:39 +0000 UTC]
:3 glad you like it
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