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Published: 2004-10-07 00:37:22 +0000 UTC; Views: 151; Favourites: 1; Downloads: 9
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Description Beauty has its many forms
Hers was wretched, twisted, blue
She told me great secrets
She told me of death in alleys
Death in hallways
Death on the dance floor
And death in bathroom stalls
She showed me her hidden places
Her face veiled in ebon lace
There was something sweetly lovely
About her savage, toothy smile
As she cut herself in those hidden places
And let her life bleed all over me
I would worship her again
If her body was not so cold
I love her any way
I have no choice but to
For all that she has taught me
For how her whip has ravaged me
For how she has given me her most precious gift
I can do no more
Than die for her

07-18-04
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Comments: 7

darthmarlan [2004-10-11 04:32:26 +0000 UTC]

Interesting, nice imagery, in a descriptive and well written tone. and incubus is probably more like it.

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neserit In reply to darthmarlan [2004-10-11 16:14:40 +0000 UTC]

You think so? Hmm.
I'm glad that people seem to like this one. Thank you!

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darthmarlan In reply to neserit [2004-10-11 16:23:43 +0000 UTC]

And you're very welcome.

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jaspenelle [2004-10-07 17:09:34 +0000 UTC]

Wow... that is very powerful. To me it seems to be about a succubus but that could be open to interpretation. I love it.

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neserit In reply to jaspenelle [2004-10-07 19:06:19 +0000 UTC]

It could be...but it even confuses me because, for one, I wrote it in a masculine tone...and I really don't remember what I was thinking.

Thank you though.

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johnnyi13 [2004-10-07 11:33:55 +0000 UTC]

again another fantastic piece .......... your choice of subject matter is always perfect

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neserit In reply to johnnyi13 [2004-10-07 19:08:02 +0000 UTC]

Perfect? I won't argue since I've been told by my friends here (who will probably see this) that if I down any of my work one more time, they'll visit me and strangle me.

Thank you. I just hope that I can create more works that you will enjoy.

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