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nightviper16 — Apprenticeship Lesson 1.3
Published: 2008-08-31 22:42:23 +0000 UTC; Views: 4691; Favourites: 48; Downloads: 22
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Sorry for tardiness! I just did not want to redraw that locker.
So I played Spiderman 3 instead |D
My brother was featured in our newspaper this morning. That was cool.
Also come next page I'll have to change pinks, seeing as I'm having some colour problems. Would you rather black and white?
Also talk about a chapter three, eh? I'm sooo looking forward to drawing that!
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I love the adorable faces in here. x3
Hey! You drew my locker! ...No wait, nevermind. Sorry, I always get Paulina and mine mixed up.
~Dash
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I love it when you show how obsessed she is by showing the part of her room that is covered in danny phantom stuff. LOVE IT!!!
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Another awesome page! XDD Star's expression in the third panel keeps making me crack a smile. And I've got to go with everyone else when I say I love the revamp of Paulina's locker, particularily the circular head shot of Danny, the rose, and the Florida article. 
Uh, other than that, the perspective in panel 2 bothers me a lot. Paulina-and-the-bed and Star don't seem to ... match, visually. I keep expecting the bed to be "flatter" or something. :/
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Gosh I don't know! I think it is safe to assume that this plotline has no Phantom Planet though, considering no one knows Danny is Danny and this is their senior year, but honestly how could I NOT use one of those articles? You know Paulina would jump those newspapers for them (wasn't there an underwear article? She would have that one under her pillow!)
OH MAN YES I KNOW. Thats one reason this page took so long! The original paneling was just horrid and I didn't have a lot of space for improvement, so I decided to post this one just to get it out of the way. I think fretting over each panel was my downfall last time so I just gotta keep moving this time around!
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Yeah, that article is so great, I wouldn't be able to resist it either! Maybe some other event caused him to drop trou. Though now I'm curious as to where Apprenticeship is in the timeline, because season 3 could be considered their senior year and that was pretty much the "Sam" season, with 1 and 2 being the "Paulina" and "Valerie" seasons respectively. (There were actually three articles with Danny in his underwear: one with the birthmark, and the other two saying that he wore boxers and briefs. Totally agree with you on Paulina's actions, btw.
I find I have that problem about being too perfectionist when I'm doing anything creative as well. I think it's a good you've adopted that policy to just keep going, since they say that everything an artist does will be second best in their eyes, anyway.
And I just totally noticed the other article where Danny's flinching from the camera. So Cute!
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BIRTHMARK SHAPED LIKE FLORIDA!!! xD
I loving the re-do of this~! Fantastic!
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IT WAS FLORIDA RIGHT? I just took a guess!
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I don't remember xD LAWL
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XDDD I had to laugh at the 'birthmark shaped like Florida' thing... 
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XD XD XD I'm looking forward to when Danny answers the front door!! XD XD XD Keep drawing, and please do more soon!!!
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EEEE ME TOOOO
(In fact I already did a preview doodle of it if you would like to see? Mostly trying to work out Danny's hair 
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OMG XD I'd be absoulutly SIKED to see it!!
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[link] This is pretty much how I start drawing the comics, more or less. I'll probably change this thumbnail design very little in the actual comic page.
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OMG *drool* XD That's so awsome!!! Im actually pretty impressed you can do comics at all. All my comic are worthy of is being dumped in the trash can >.<; so yea. Really can't wait till you post more! X3
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Aww thanks! I really would like to be more comfortable with comics, hence Apprenticeship. I thought I was really bad at it, ha ha. I will try!
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^~^ ^~^ I was thinking of doing a Gender Confusion comic! But I have problems WRITING it, how could I do an entire COMIC?? ~.~
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Well, some people I'm sure would find it easier to just draw than worry about what words to use, but with writing you don't have to worry about little details like perspective and backgrounds and such. Since I don't have to write the plot or dialogue for Apprenticeship, it is kind of simple to draw. You just gotta try!
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I wana try ^~^ I started doing a GC comic (two pages). Think I should post it....?
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I think you shouldn't worry about what other people want you to do and do whatever the hell you want. (: Way back in the beginning I would worry a lot about what my DP-watchers wanted to see and that's pretty much the only reason why I have any Sam in my gallery. I actually do not like her character too much but I drew her anyway! Now it's much more relaxing to draw her (and any other character) since I'm not fretting so much on what will get me favs or comments. SO if you really want to show someone, then post it, ya know?
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Ya, that's a really good idea. XD I think I'll post it once I ink it. ^~^ One of the reasons I think I started it anyways was to use my ink
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Oh man, I can't believe I missed these! I like the sketchiness...the pink will take some getting used to, but I also think it strangely fits paulina. LOL.
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Ah the newer ones are much cleaner. Blegh at this page. BLEGH!
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I like the sketchy feel.
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now that it's the weekend, and I have something akin to free time, I can finally get around to commenting on your awesome work. XD 
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Ha It's cool. I only have time to draw these pages out, anyway. I was unsure about the pink. I think I'll just do every chapter a nice pastel-ish colour. Chapter 2 (looking forward to drawing it) will be green or blue.
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XD blue'd probably be best, since both Maddie and Danny are in that chapter. ^^ Oh, and I should probably warn you right now not to use '
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The Fentons are a very blue family. Ah, primera meaning 'first' and prima meaning '[female] cousin'. Right?
SPEAKING OF DIEGO, I'm not sure how you imagined him. In all honesty I imagined him an older "Go Diego Go!" kind of Diego. With shaggy brown hair and eyes and what not.
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XD Ah, right, I never did explain his character much... well, I always pictured him as a tall, skinny guy, with long, unkept hair, stylishy smart-looking glasses and a general disreguard for his appearance. A bit of a geek, but kinda in a hot way.
...That explination doesn't help at all, does it.
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Ah ha, only a little. How long are we talking? Pony tail long? Ooooor shaggy long which is medium, I guess. Any facial hair? Black or brown hair? Eyes? And his fashion sense would be...?
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mmm, long for a guy, but still a little short for a ponytail. Shaggy-long, I guess... No, no facial hair. Black hair, dark green eyes. And he likes loose and comfortable clothes. Kinda looks like your average College Boy, I guess...
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YAY! your continueing the comic. this looks good
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Thank you. I'm excited, too.
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Star has a point with the casual dating thing
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paulina invisobill hahaha
lol heyyy thats my locker..(grabs all dp stuff and runs off) MINE!!!!
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Ah ha, and the greatest part is that is all canon. I just had to draw what I saw from a screen cap ;D
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you dont happen to have that screencap do you?
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I'm afraid not. I had found it on AmityPark.net, but recently I can't access that site. :/
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that sites been down for awhile
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Nyah~! Your art is getting prettier and prettier! :3 I'm so glad you updated this comic. >3< For I while I thought it died.
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For a while, it was dead. But people liked it, and I felt bad for not even updating it to where the original writer, Wingsofmorphius, left off. SO I DOING IT AGAIN HURRAH. Also, I'm super excited to get to chapter 2. SO BADLY. I think it'll be way fun to draw the Fenton house. -bounce bounce-
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XD I think I'm just as excited! Can't wait! ^3^
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Aww, thanks. But it's really quite lazy. :/ I decided since I hate shading, not to bother with it anywhere else. Ah ha.
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Star really is adorable here. Especially in the fourth panel....
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Thank you! I have so much hate for her in the third panel, though. I inked it so oddly. Which is saying something since the overall inking process didn't have much effort. At all. I figured if I loosen up at all the nit-pickety perfection, I'll update faster, and it might just come more naturally so it'll be faster AND more aesthetic.
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No, problem.
You're fantastic at what you do. Besides, if you ever decide that you still don't like what you've posted you could just resubmit...no one will kill you.
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You draw Paulina extremely well. She's so pretty!
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Thank you! I find her very hard to draw, it's that hair. >:C mostly the clips.
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