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[Chapter 19 of Blood Raining Night by Reicheru-Ketsueki. Eris is coming along for the ride this time.
Eris: The other chapters were... I don't know what to even say.]
wheeeeeeeew!!!! thank god it's finally chapter 19~!
AREN"T WE EXCITED!!!! I AM!!!!!!
sorry lol, little hyper because my new episode is taking tons of images to make.

[You mean you're using a camera for this? Excessive imagery means nothing in a story that doesn't have plot consistency or decent characters.]

i'm very tired -.-
It's usually only around 60 but this is super detailed so yeahhh~
a few people complain about my Japanese
FINE i will include more into my story
I could translate this all into Japanese if I had to :/

[Oh, I bet that would result in some hilarious mistranslations. Your poor grasp of English alone is splitting my sides!
Eris: Does she even know her fanfic is being torn up by us freaks?
Me: No, doesn't seem so, my lady.]
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Chapter 19 - Rain on Your Parade

[Warning, may contain unsuitable content. So it's time to break out those umbrellas, folks!]

"Comon lets go. We should be getting to the bride's shop as soon as possible. I know what I want to wear and I think i'll look super cute in it." Reicheru smiled her haid and closed her eyes.
"There might be stuff you guys will like too Yuki-chan and Minna-chan." Reicheru took their hands in a soft weeping motion, like a bird flying lowly, and they began to walk out of the dark forest.

[Eris: Oh no! The birds are crying!
Me: They've been upset since that awful singing contest in the woods with some witch.]

"I'm so happy your memory is back Minna-chan. we were really worried about you!" Yuki smiled at her.

"T-Thank you for all you did for me. Especially you Rei-kami. I don't know where I'd be right now if you hadn't b-been for Reicheru and willing to fight Luka Megurine. It's a pity she had to die, she sounded so beautiful." Minna said.

[I misread that name as "Loogie Margerine". Damn, why can't my head ever be screwed on right?]

"Of course not as beautiful as your voice Reicheru. I didn't know you had it in you. but deep down I did." Yuki said. A noise sounded quietly. Like a rusting through the bushes.

[Me: DAT POOR ENGLISH. Seriously. What grades did your English teachers give you?
Eris: She probably didn't pay attention. I wouldn't be surprised if she can't name any famous writers other than the Japanese ones.]

"Ohkami...oh god..." Reicheru whispered and dry leafy whisper like as if her throat was crusty and covered in hard dirt. "I know this sensation. I KNOW who this is."

[Surprise! It's your sick, inconsiderate father!]

He stepped out of the bushes, his red coat long and torn in many places like as if he were to have been in a battle with hungry dogs. His smiled was twisted like the mean dick he was. His long tounge slipped through his vampire teeth like as if to say konnichiwa.
It was fucking Alucard again (his Japanese name is Arukado).

[How many crossovers intersected so far? I lost count!]

He laughed like a mad man! He took off his googles to look at the three young girls in front of him. "Well, well, well. Yuki it's nice to see you again." He smiled.

"I wish I could say the same." Yuki looked at him coldy back with the essance of an iceblue.
[Adjectives just got turned to a noun. Mind = blown.]

"Hmh. Ahhh cousin Reicheru Ketsuekineko-Oni, how are we today? I see you've been drowning your post partum depression in blood and fear. How's being a mother? How's being knocked up at the age of 17 feel?"

[Do you know anybody who has depression in real life? I mean someone who has it rather than someone just trying to look cool?]

"At least I've been with a woman" Reicheru hissed.

[Eris: And the earth still spins while you use your sexual orientation to insult somebody.]

"I've gotten laid more than you shunshine." Alucard whiped his long black hair out of his deep crimson eyes. "I'm still one of Sesshomaru's henchmen and he wants you dead. To be honest, I might actually miss you when your gone but I rally have no choice."
He pulled out his gun and aimed it between her lusty golden eyes, "night night."
[BANG!]

Suddenly a car burst through the trees and flattened Arukado like a steamroller. It was the same familiar white car they had seen parked at their school every day. The window rolled down and he peaked his head out, smiling at them and removing his sunglashes.
"Top of the evening girls. I saw three young girls deep in the forest looking lost so I thought I should stop by and if I could do anything to help them and it turned out to be you three! Haha! What are you guys doing?"

They all bowed "K-Konnichiwa Sensei Hanayubi." Minna spoke softly like the fur of a baby rabbit. "We had just finished some business here and now we were going to go to David's buraidaru (David's bridal) to get some maid's dresses."

[Protip: It works well to use description that has similar sensory to the thing you're describing. A voice like rabbit fur? That's a bit awkward. Just my opinion.]

"Oh? Who's getting married and who's the lucky man?" Sesnei Hanayubi said and continued to drive the car.

[Oh hell no, not this perv again!]

"Reicheru's father." Yuki said.

"And that bitch Lucy!" Reicheru chimed in.

Sensei Hanayubi looked surprised "Oh you mean that quiet girl in the black of my class? I never thought she was all that bad. She's had a tough life you know."

[Can there be some further details explained sometime now or later?]

"Getting with someone's father is LOW I KNOW she's doing it just to annoy me." Reicheru said and crossed her arms leaning back on the seat.

[So, step-parents are bad people? If someone had kids and one parent died or something, it's fair game they marry again.]

"There's nothing wrong between the older man and a younger lady such as yourself. All love is pure and there should be no boundries."

[That's the excuse people use to justify bestiality and pedophilia.
Eris: At least it's part of the teacher's creepy character.]

"Easy for you to say Sensei." Reicheru sighed.

"Hey Reicheru" Minna-chan said, "He's kind of cute."

"You shouldn't say that about your teacher." Sensei hanayubi said and laughed.

"NO I was talking about Reicheru's cousin."

"Please dont' say that about him." Reicheru said.

[Ha. Those awkward moments.]

They all got hungry so they decided to stop at the local Ke Efu Shi to get some friend chicken and hopefully a soda. They made their order: a bucket of special ke efu shi crispy chicken, mashed potatoes, baked beans and pepsies.
They drove up to the counter and he was their in a red apron and a little hat.

[Eris: Who's he? The Colonel himself? He's dead, you know.
Me: It's a chicken!]

Yuki-chan rolled down her window, "Kouta-san?" she said "What are you doing working here? Have you been doing this for a while?"

[The background characters are horribly written in and easily forgotten. I don't know who Kouta is.]

"Uhh..." he said, "yeah for a while. Did you order the crispy chicken basket with the mashed potatoes and and basked beans and three pepsies?"

"Yes we did." She smiled.

"Hey Lucy told me that her and your dad are getting married, Reicheru. Is it true?"

Reicheru's eyes wattered with blood red tears "It's true. That stupid bitch. I dont know what to do to stop her."

[Stick some tampons in those eyesockets and STFU.
Eris: That was harsh. Not cool man.]

"Yeah she can be pretty rough. It's because she's retarded and has brain damage and nobody likes her." Kouta said.

[So, it's perfectly fine to hate someone who has brain damage because nobody likes them. That's like saying it's okay to hate and be a dick to somebody who's different because they're not popular. Sheep mentality much?]

"Hey, I gave you a special gift inside of your Ke Efu Shi meal." He handed them the bag of food.

[Eris: It better be some brain cells.]

"Thank you." Reicheru sighed. She took the bag and they drove off. "Hey what's this?" Reicheru put her hand in the bag and pulled out a music box. "What do I use this for?"

[To play some music, doi!]

"I-I don't know!" Minna chan looked at it and thought. "Hey S-Sensei. We want to go to David's buraidaru if that's okay with you? Right?"

"Sure thing I'll drop you guys off there."

"Thank you." All three of the girls said at once.

[Eris: I'm actually creeped out by groups of people acting like robots. It just seems... gah!
Me: I think I know what you mean, but eh.]

They were at the bride shop, they saw lots of beautiful dresses. Some were green some were pink and some were ugly. Reicheru stumbled upon a pinkish dress with light pink ruffle trim on it. It had no sleeves (the dress she wears at the end of my videos).

[She has a video? If it's on YouTube, I bet it has a lot of dislikes.]

"Hey, this is beautiful! I need to go try this on in the changing rooms." Reicheru looked at the dress in beauty.

"See you in a bit Reiche!"

In the stall Reicheru came into her dress easily. She easily got it over her curvy thighs and small waist. Suddenly she heard a faint crying on the other side of the stall. It was a cry of pain and agony.

[It's the sound of my retinas dying.]

"Hey who's in there?" Reicher leaned up against the stall wall.

"None of you fucken business!" it was Lucy's voice (her name is Rushi in Japanese). "Ever since I was born i've been hurt over and over again. My parents left me and some boys beat my puppy to death and my friend got shot."

[That's pretty harsh.]

"You don't understand." Reicheru hissed through her teeth like the angriest snake, "I killed my mother. My father want's me dead. I have a demon that lives inside me. Many people want me dead. Do you know how it feels to be me? Do you have ANY idea what it feels to be be?"

[Both are pretty traumatic, so you can't say your suffering is any worse --even if the situations are different. In the end, it's all a form of pain. Lucy probably understands your suffering more than some person who has never experienced any trauma. As far as I know, both of you have an entire beachful of sand in your vaginas.]

"It's going down at the wedding. You both are going to pay for being the heartless cruel people you guys are. Hmh. I look good in this dress. Probably better than you."

"Shut up."
Reicheru sat up and was walking out the door when Lucy said, "see you in hell, bitch."

Reicheru turned around and opened her golden eyes, her lips rosy red and she said, "I'm already in it."

[Eris: It's sad that Rei has the power to change a lot of things for the better, but picks a catfight instead.
Me: And that sums up chapter 19. Sorry for the lack of lulz, but I was running out of ideas.]

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[Chapter 19 of Blood Raining Night by Reicheru-Ketsueki. Eris is coming along for the ride this time.
Eris: The other chapters were... I don't know what to even say.]
wheeeeeeeew!!!! thank god it's finally chapter 19~!
AREN"T WE EXCITED!!!! I AM!!!!!!
sorry lol, little hyper because my new episode is taking tons of images to make.

[You mean you're using a camera for this? Excessive imagery means nothing in a story that doesn't have plot consistency or decent characters.]

i'm very tired -.-
It's usually only around 60 but this is super detailed so yeahhh~
a few people complain about my Japanese
FINE i will include more into my story
I could translate this all into Japanese if I had to :/

[Oh, I bet that would result in some hilarious mistranslations. Your poor grasp of English alone is splitting my sides!
Eris: Does she even know her fanfic is being torn up by us freaks?
Me: No, doesn't seem so, my lady.]
-----------------

Chapter 19 - Rain on Your Parade

[Warning, may contain unsuitable content. So it's time to break out those umbrellas, folks!]

"Comon lets go. We should be getting to the bride's shop as soon as possible. I know what I want to wear and I think i'll look super cute in it." Reicheru smiled her haid and closed her eyes.
"There might be stuff you guys will like too Yuki-chan and Minna-chan." Reicheru took their hands in a soft weeping motion, like a bird flying lowly, and they began to walk out of the dark forest.

[Eris: Oh no! The birds are crying!
Me: They've been upset since that awful singing contest in the woods with some witch.]

"I'm so happy your memory is back Minna-chan. we were really worried about you!" Yuki smiled at her.

"T-Thank you for all you did for me. Especially you Rei-kami. I don't know where I'd be right now if you hadn't b-been for Reicheru and willing to fight Luka Megurine. It's a pity she had to die, she sounded so beautiful." Minna said.

[I misread that name as "Loogie Margerine". Damn, why can't my head ever be screwed on right?]

"Of course not as beautiful as your voice Reicheru. I didn't know you had it in you. but deep down I did." Yuki said. A noise sounded quietly. Like a rusting through the bushes.

[Me: DAT POOR ENGLISH. Seriously. What grades did your English teachers give you?
Eris: She probably didn't pay attention. I wouldn't be surprised if she can't name any famous writers other than the Japanese ones.]

"Ohkami...oh god..." Reicheru whispered and dry leafy whisper like as if her throat was crusty and covered in hard dirt. "I know this sensation. I KNOW who this is."

[Surprise! It's your sick, inconsiderate father!]

He stepped out of the bushes, his red coat long and torn in many places like as if he were to have been in a battle with hungry dogs. His smiled was twisted like the mean dick he was. His long tounge slipped through his vampire teeth like as if to say konnichiwa.
It was fucking Alucard again (his Japanese name is Arukado).

[How many crossovers intersected so far? I lost count!]

He laughed like a mad man! He took off his googles to look at the three young girls in front of him. "Well, well, well. Yuki it's nice to see you again." He smiled.

"I wish I could say the same." Yuki looked at him coldy back with the essance of an iceblue.
[Adjectives just got turned to a noun. Mind = blown.]

"Hmh. Ahhh cousin Reicheru Ketsuekineko-Oni, how are we today? I see you've been drowning your post partum depression in blood and fear. How's being a mother? How's being knocked up at the age of 17 feel?"

[Do you know anybody who has depression in real life? I mean someone who has it rather than someone just trying to look cool?]

"At least I've been with a woman" Reicheru hissed.

[Eris: And the earth still spins while you use your sexual orientation to insult somebody.]

"I've gotten laid more than you shunshine." Alucard whiped his long black hair out of his deep crimson eyes. "I'm still one of Sesshomaru's henchmen and he wants you dead. To be honest, I might actually miss you when your gone but I rally have no choice."
He pulled out his gun and aimed it between her lusty golden eyes, "night night."
[BANG!]

Suddenly a car burst through the trees and flattened Arukado like a steamroller. It was the same familiar white car they had seen parked at their school every day. The window rolled down and he peaked his head out, smiling at them and removing his sunglashes.
"Top of the evening girls. I saw three young girls deep in the forest looking lost so I thought I should stop by and if I could do anything to help them and it turned out to be you three! Haha! What are you guys doing?"

They all bowed "K-Konnichiwa Sensei Hanayubi." Minna spoke softly like the fur of a baby rabbit. "We had just finished some business here and now we were going to go to David's buraidaru (David's bridal) to get some maid's dresses."

[Protip: It works well to use description that has similar sensory to the thing you're describing. A voice like rabbit fur? That's a bit awkward. Just my opinion.]

"Oh? Who's getting married and who's the lucky man?" Sesnei Hanayubi said and continued to drive the car.

[Oh hell no, not this perv again!]

"Reicheru's father." Yuki said.

"And that bitch Lucy!" Reicheru chimed in.

Sensei Hanayubi looked surprised "Oh you mean that quiet girl in the black of my class? I never thought she was all that bad. She's had a tough life you know."

[Can there be some further details explained sometime now or later?]

"Getting with someone's father is LOW I KNOW she's doing it just to annoy me." Reicheru said and crossed her arms leaning back on the seat.

[So, step-parents are bad people? If someone had kids and one parent died or something, it's fair game they marry again.]

"There's nothing wrong between the older man and a younger lady such as yourself. All love is pure and there should be no boundries."

[That's the excuse people use to justify bestiality and pedophilia.
Eris: At least it's part of the teacher's creepy character.]

"Easy for you to say Sensei." Reicheru sighed.

"Hey Reicheru" Minna-chan said, "He's kind of cute."

"You shouldn't say that about your teacher." Sensei hanayubi said and laughed.

"NO I was talking about Reicheru's cousin."

"Please dont' say that about him." Reicheru said.

[Ha. Those awkward moments.]

They all got hungry so they decided to stop at the local Ke Efu Shi to get some friend chicken and hopefully a soda. They made their order: a bucket of special ke efu shi crispy chicken, mashed potatoes, baked beans and pepsies.
They drove up to the counter and he was their in a red apron and a little hat.

[Eris: Who's he? The Colonel himself? He's dead, you know.
Me: It's a chicken!]

Yuki-chan rolled down her window, "Kouta-san?" she said "What are you doing working here? Have you been doing this for a while?"

[The background characters are horribly written in and easily forgotten. I don't know who Kouta is.]

"Uhh..." he said, "yeah for a while. Did you order the crispy chicken basket with the mashed potatoes and and basked beans and three pepsies?"

"Yes we did." She smiled.

"Hey Lucy told me that her and your dad are getting married, Reicheru. Is it true?"

Reicheru's eyes wattered with blood red tears "It's true. That stupid bitch. I dont know what to do to stop her."

[Stick some tampons in those eyesockets and STFU.
Eris: That was harsh. Not cool man.]

"Yeah she can be pretty rough. It's because she's retarded and has brain damage and nobody likes her." Kouta said.

[So, it's perfectly fine to hate someone who has brain damage because nobody likes them. That's like saying it's okay to hate and be a dick to somebody who's different because they're not popular. Sheep mentality much?]

"Hey, I gave you a special gift inside of your Ke Efu Shi meal." He handed them the bag of food.

[Eris: It better be some brain cells.]

"Thank you." Reicheru sighed. She took the bag and they drove off. "Hey what's this?" Reicheru put her hand in the bag and pulled out a music box. "What do I use this for?"

[To play some music, doi!]

"I-I don't know!" Minna chan looked at it and thought. "Hey S-Sensei. We want to go to David's buraidaru if that's okay with you? Right?"

"Sure thing I'll drop you guys off there."

"Thank you." All three of the girls said at once.

[Eris: I'm actually creeped out by groups of people acting like robots. It just seems... gah!
Me: I think I know what you mean, but eh.]

They were at the bride shop, they saw lots of beautiful dresses. Some were green some were pink and some were ugly. Reicheru stumbled upon a pinkish dress with light pink ruffle trim on it. It had no sleeves (the dress she wears at the end of my videos).

[She has a video? If it's on YouTube, I bet it has a lot of dislikes.]

"Hey, this is beautiful! I need to go try this on in the changing rooms." Reicheru looked at the dress in beauty.

"See you in a bit Reiche!"

In the stall Reicheru came into her dress easily. She easily got it over her curvy thighs and small waist. Suddenly she heard a faint crying on the other side of the stall. It was a cry of pain and agony.

[It's the sound of my retinas dying.]

"Hey who's in there?" Reicher leaned up against the stall wall.

"None of you fucken business!" it was Lucy's voice (her name is Rushi in Japanese). "Ever since I was born i've been hurt over and over again. My parents left me and some boys beat my puppy to death and my friend got shot."

[That's pretty harsh.]

"You don't understand." Reicheru hissed through her teeth like the angriest snake, "I killed my mother. My father want's me dead. I have a demon that lives inside me. Many people want me dead. Do you know how it feels to be me? Do you have ANY idea what it feels to be be?"

[Both are pretty traumatic, so you can't say your suffering is any worse --even if the situations are different. In the end, it's all a form of pain. Lucy probably understands your suffering more than some person who has never experienced any trauma. As far as I know, both of you have an entire beachful of sand in your vaginas.]

"It's going down at the wedding. You both are going to pay for being the heartless cruel people you guys are. Hmh. I look good in this dress. Probably better than you."

"Shut up."
Reicheru sat up and was walking out the door when Lucy said, "see you in hell, bitch."

Reicheru turned around and opened her golden eyes, her lips rosy red and she said, "I'm already in it."

[Eris: It's sad that Rei has the power to change a lot of things for the better, but picks a catfight instead.
Me: And that sums up chapter 19. Sorry for the lack of lulz, but I was running out of ideas.]