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FINALLY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! NYA~ON!!!
lostsa decription and awesomeness, it's FINALLY DONE!!!!

[Alright then, let's see what you've got!]

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Chapter 16 - The Witch and the Huntress

it was scary and cold outside. Nothing could be heard but the breathing of Reicheru, Yuki and Minna. not even birds fluttered like fishes in the ocean through the sky of everlashting darkness and the stars.

[Here's a hint, "show us rather than "tell" us. How was it scary outside? Quiet isn't enough to be scary.]

They were looking for Luka who was known for her beautiful singing voice and magic spells that were vasted over people and goodness did she have big boobs! Other people thought that maybe she was the child of the goddess of Aphroditee.

[It's "goddess Aphrodite". Putting "of" between those words suggest that the character is a child of Aphrodite's underlings rather than the goddess herself.

Others thought she was a vampire seductress hidden away in the forest because her looks could destroy a person from the inside out.

"I heard that she could be a vampire seductress hidden away int he forest because her looks could destroy a person from the inside out." Reicheru said, her eyes gazed amongst the stars in the moonlight.

[No need to repeat the phrase. Really.]

"heh if that were true Rei-kami, you'd be stuck in the forset with her." Minna laughed and giggles. She sounded like a sweet little chirping bird in flight on a warm summers day, in the sunlight feeling the light on its wings as it went over the world like a soft airplaine.

"Minna-chan you are so flattering!" Reicheru blushed and her face became the color of a rose in bloom. "Don't say such things I dont deserve them!"

"Of course you do Rei-kami." Yuki said. "out of all the people in this world you are the only one who sticks with her friends like you do. you are beautiful inside out! Any guy is more than lucky to have you."

"Come on, we need to get Minna-chans memory back!" Reicheru said and they continued on into the creepy forest.

[Exactly what is so creepy about it? Are the trees dead? Do they have some kind of deformity that resembles a face? Do the branches look like the hands of corpses? Right now, the scene looks like a blank sheet of grey paper with the characters walking on it.]

"So Minna-chan how long have you been watching pokemon?" Yuki said.

"Uhum I dont' even remember that. But I'm sure its been a while. I only remember the lights flashing and pikachu screaming!!!" Minna put her hands on her head and closed her eyes "I wish it would stop!!"

[If anyone is at least moderately traumatized by a screaming pokemon and flashing lights, they might need to see a psychologist.]

"Calm down Minna-chan" Yuki shook her "you're all right now no ones going to hert you! Pokemon isnt real. only if you make it real." Yuki's words reached out and touched Minna-chan like no other.

"your right Yuki. I need to stay strong." Minna's eyes glowed.

[EGAD! SHE'S POSSESSED! Haha, joking!]

"Hey Yuki are we almost there?" Reicheru looked behind her to see the two following her.

"Yes she should just be a tiny bit further I can see her house!' Yuki smiled bright and beautiful. "we need to be careful when we walk in. we don't want her getting scared and casting a spell on us."

"Can she really do that?" Reicheru looked at Yuki with slight doubt like a lost boy.

"YES!" Yuki was very cautioned. "she can do almost anything she wants too! I wouldn't go questioning her unless you want to leave this forrest looking like a oger." Minna and Reicheru looked at each other and sweated.
"Well here's her house." Yuki said as they all looked at the great structure that went up into the sky.

As they walked in they could hear a soft beautiful voice say, "hello I see you are looking for something." there she shat on a grand luxorious chair was Luka Megurine.

[Are you making typos on purpose to make it look like people are constantly shitting?]

Her hair was about as long as the floor and was pink with soft pink highlights. She wore a tall witches black hat that has gold trim around the edges of the brim. She wore a long dark grey dress that was in two pieces.
Her top was dark grey with gold trim around her collar and edges. She wore a gold broatch like thing on her neck that was on her shirt. She had a headset that was brown with gold trim and a gold zig zag pattern on it. The part that went on her ears was blue with gold trim.
On her arm was a brown armband with creases and gold trim on the edges.She had a brown arm wangers with gold trim and gold writing with a blue rectange that lights up when she sings.
Her skirt was a dark grey with gold trim around the edges. On her waist was brown rectangles of brown with a gold zig zag pattern. She wore brown socks with gold trim that went up to her thigh and the inside of her skirt was a lighter brown.
her shoes went up to her knees and were gold they had brown shoelaches and brown heels. Areound her neck was a blue collar and her nails were blue. She looked very beautiful.

[Too much description. Reminds me of "My Immortal". I just skimmed it, sorry.]

"What do you want, children?" Luka closed her blue glowing ocean eyes. you could feel how powerful she was and mysterious just by looking at her.

Reicheru stood up and bravely said "we're heare to bring back the memory of our friend Minna-chan." She looked at Minna and Minna stepped forward.

"Luka Megurine I want my memory back. Please." Minna-chan bowed and got on the floor in front of her.

[I want my dignity back.]

"Hmmmm. Why should I do this for you? I am very powerful and very beautiful. If you wantme to help you you'll have to get someone just like me. How about you." Luka pointed at Reicheru.
"if you want me to restore your friends memory you'll have to be more than beautiful. You'll have to beat me at a singing contest. But I warn you, no one has beaten me before. I am a master of music."

["You have magic, but it's not going to work because you're not pretty enough. But we're not going to have a beauty contest, we'll just sing instead! Hohoho!" Was what I got from that.]

"Rei-kami you can do it!" Yuki cheered "you beat everyone at the school contest you can for sure beat her here!" I'll use my angelic powers to help her Yuki whispered to Minna.

"no Yuki!" Minna shouted "only demons can control music! you'll have to leave this to Rei-kami!" she held onto Yuki "we can only pray. you're an angel you can prey."

[Yes, become prey to the carnivorous wildlife and then get eaten by buzzards. Sounds good to me!]

"Your right I can." Yuki put her hands in front of her and prayed. "daughter of Reicheru. Holy god help your daughter. She needs you right now. I am your dicipel, listen to me. Come to your mother's aid mother of god, and help your mother."

"Preyig wont help you now! Come Reicheru Ketsuekineko-Oni come and sing with me! Ahhhhhhhhh!" Luka began to sing Just Be Friends. Her voice flew throughout the wind like the beautiful sound of death.

[I imagine the sound of death to sound like something between John Lennon moaning and America snoring.]

"Don't underestimate me!" Reicheru opened her lungs and started to sing My Sancutary from Kingdom Hearts. Her voice sounded like a flood of despair and beauty. It nearly drowned Luka's voice out!

[You mean you weren't breathing? Not to mention the both of them will wake up the birds.]

Both of them started to sing louder and louder. Luka sang "Just be friends all we gotta do just be friends. It's time to say goodbye just be friends. all we gotta do Just be friends" and Reicheru sang, "and you and I there's a new land. Angles that fly! My sanctuary my sanctuary yeah."
the sounds fought each other like the fire and water tribes. At the final moment Reicheru's music rang out into the heavens! her demonic powers took control and her eyes turned red. In her cat demon form she sang so loud and so beautiful it shattered Lukas eardrums!

"ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh!!!!!!!!!!" Luka cried and fell to the floor. her ears and eyes were bleeding like a flood of pain and agony and her voice stopped. "FINE FINE!! I WILL GIVE YOU YOUR FRIENDS MEMORY BACK!"
she raised her hand but before she could cast the spell she was ripped into pieces!

[It was the hairless purple wolf! Run away!]

"AH!" Minna screamed and hugged Yuki!

"What the fuck was that?!!?!" Reicheru yelled!

"You both are pathetic bitches." she came out of the dark. It was Lucy. her hair was a short pinkish red and she was wearing a white long gownd with no shoes. Her bare feet were on the floor and her eyes were the same color as her hair. On the top of her head there were two white horns.

"YOU ASSHOLE!!!" Reicheru screamed. "I'm gonna FUCK YOU UP! You destroyed the chance of Minna-chan getting her memory back!!!!!"

"I've always wanted to fight you. you think your life is hard? you dont' know MY life!"

[Lucy does raise a good point, I know more about Rei than her at this point. Let's see the other side to this story.]

"I know your life." Reicheru said coldly like the ice cold night "but you don't know mine. DO YOU KNOW WHAT I"VE HAD TO GO THROUGH TO BE HERE???" she slammed her fisht into the wall and made a 10 ft hole. Lucy stumbled back a bit.

"I've always wanted to fight you." Lucy took out her hands. "I'm going to blood bend you in half, Reicheru."

"NOT BEFORE I DO!" Reicheru whipped out her hand and they began to blood bend each other. They struggled and stuggled. both their arms shaking with the power. "A demons power to blood bend is a lot more stronger than yours."

[In the end, the grumpy vultures, ravens, and other scavengers will have a tasty meal, forgive and forget that you woke them up with a vocaloid song.]

"Don't talk so mighty. Just watch. I'll win." Lucy looked at her in anger.

"What makes you say that?" Reicheru looked deep into her blood red eyes.

"I'm not alone."

[Because I'm in the tree, watching all this and waiting for dinner!]

Chapter 17 - Rain of Heartbreak

"What are you talking about?" Reicherus eyes burned like the fire of the sun. "who's with you Lucy?" her eyes widened with surprise and she nearly cried tears of anguish. Standing next to Lucy was her father!
"Daddy?!?! What are yo udoing?!!" he was cloaked with his face hidden as usual.

"I have a surprise for you Reicheru. At first I wansnt going to invite you but since you are my daughter i thought you should know come and see me get married to your new mother." he grinned an evil grin of hate and darnkess.

[Holy shit! He's marrying Rei's worst enemy? No, that's not the scariest part, it's the age gap and the fact that he's marrying someone his daughter's age.]

Everyone gasped. "No! This isn't what I fucken think it is!" Reicheru cried!

"Thats right." Lucy said coldly "me and your daddy are getting married! There's nothing you can do about it. Nothing!" Lucy laughed a cruel and sadistic laugh. Her eyes were blood red with pleasure.

Reicheru's father leaned in on Lucy for a kiss. Their lips and tounges met at it was like a bomb went off in Reicheru's heart exploding it and sending blood everywhere.

"That's fucken disguesting! I'll never go to your wedding!" Reicheru threw up in her fucking hands. "YOU NASTY DISK!"

[Yeah, keep that disk away from my computer, who knows what kind of bugs it has!]

He threw his head back and laughed. "No no my dear. You will come. I've formally invited you to my wedding." he handed Reicheru a pretty wedding invatation card. "At least consider it. Wont you, dear? Its going to be really beautiful."

she took the invitation, "shut your mouth. you'll be lucky if I take another loo at it." the invitation burned in her hands like placing your hand on a hot stove. tears of blood started from her eyes and she felt like she was going to cry. Why would he hurt her like this?

[Yes, how dare he marry your worst enemy instead of killing you on the spot like he could've 16 chapters ago!]

"Me and Lucy both have something in commen. And she is my type of girl in bed." her father smiled. "I hope to see you tomorrow, Rei-chan. Bring your little brat too if you want."

[I'm guessing his type of woman is a girl. He even said so himself. This guy's a creeper!]

"SUCK IT DADDY!" Reicheru screamed as her father and Lucy flew away into the air. "Damn it" Reicheru cried "I can't believe this! That bitch and my father. This is all too strange!!!! Like death has crawled into my mouth and is poisoning all of my organs...I feel like I'm dieing fromthe inside out!"

Yuki put her hands on Reicheru's shoulders. "don't worry Rei-kami. Everything can still work out."

"How?!" tears of blood came down her cheeks. [Just so you know, tears don't have to be bloody all the time to make a point. We get it already, you're upset your dad is a homicidal maniac turned ephebo for your worst enemy.]

"You know what will really get to your father? is if you killed him and Lucy that day. In front of everyone. He'd be so embarrassed!" her eyes shone brightley as she smiled.

[You could always just refuse to go and let your sick bastard of a father have fun with his trophy wife. He seems way too into her to focus on killing you.]

"Yuki!" Reicheru gasped. "That's perfect! no that's better than perfect! Those two will pay!" she was so excited! "Minna, I am so sorry about your memory. That is one thing I wish we could fix."
Suddenly a strange feeling overcame Reicheru...a lusty feeling. She felt like she needed to drink blood. Her eyes became blood red like the sun and her veins popped out of her head. She could feel the hunger in her.
"R-Rei-kami. Your giving us that look..." Minna said scared.

["Braaaaaiiiiinssss," she demanded.]

Reicheru went over to luka's body and began sipping up what was left of her. It tasted so wonderful the blood of a witch. The blood dripped all over her mouth and body. she started smearing it all over her, rubbing her arms and legs and back.
She wanted to live in it. She wanted it in her! She bit off part of Luka's arm and chewed it down like a fleshy Twizzler of satisfaction and blood.

[It IS blood. Second, sounds like a freaky fetish going on. Right in front of the father!]

"Reicheru!" Yuki grabbed her "Stop it your scaring us! Stop it please!" Reicheru just looked at her and growled. When she was done there was nothing left of Luka but her clothes.

Then suddenly a light shone from above them and Elaine appeared! She flaw down to them and her long green hair floated around her like as if she were swimming. She was naked again like she was at birth.

"Oka-san." Elaine spoke "you have shown great bravery comming here and defeating the terrible witch Luka Megarine. in return for your bravery and heart as a true friend and warrior, I will give Minna-chan's hearing back to her."
Elaine raised her hands into the air and a light shone around Minna's head. she could feel the essance of life running through her like rushing river water to the south!

[She was deaf? I thought it was the witch who had her eardrums blown out. Why not restore Minna's memory? That's why the group came to the "scary" forest!]

"T-thank you." Minna=chan cried tears of joy and happiness. "T-thank you so much! This means everything to me!"

"Your welcome Minna-chan. Take care of Oka-san for me will you? You too Yuki."

"we will!" Yuki and Minna said.

"By Tenshikuzu." Reicheru waved. "Aishiteru you."

"Aishiteru you too, Oka-san." Elaine blue her a kiss and disappeared.

"We'll need to do some fuckin shopping for this wedding." Reicheru smirked and looked at Minna and Yuki. "NYA~ON!"

[I'm done for now, stay tuned for the next installment when we look at the highly inappropriate chapter. Until then, I'm hugging my rifle.]

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Hello to all the readers out there. You know the drill, just have an ice-pack ready. Aaaaannnd, GO!

FINALLY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! NYA~ON!!!
lostsa decription and awesomeness, it's FINALLY DONE!!!!

[Alright then, let's see what you've got!]

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Chapter 16 - The Witch and the Huntress

it was scary and cold outside. Nothing could be heard but the breathing of Reicheru, Yuki and Minna. not even birds fluttered like fishes in the ocean through the sky of everlashting darkness and the stars.

[Here's a hint, "show us rather than "tell" us. How was it scary outside? Quiet isn't enough to be scary.]

They were looking for Luka who was known for her beautiful singing voice and magic spells that were vasted over people and goodness did she have big boobs! Other people thought that maybe she was the child of the goddess of Aphroditee.

[It's "goddess Aphrodite". Putting "of" between those words suggest that the character is a child of Aphrodite's underlings rather than the goddess herself.

Others thought she was a vampire seductress hidden away in the forest because her looks could destroy a person from the inside out.

"I heard that she could be a vampire seductress hidden away int he forest because her looks could destroy a person from the inside out." Reicheru said, her eyes gazed amongst the stars in the moonlight.

[No need to repeat the phrase. Really.]

"heh if that were true Rei-kami, you'd be stuck in the forset with her." Minna laughed and giggles. She sounded like a sweet little chirping bird in flight on a warm summers day, in the sunlight feeling the light on its wings as it went over the world like a soft airplaine.

"Minna-chan you are so flattering!" Reicheru blushed and her face became the color of a rose in bloom. "Don't say such things I dont deserve them!"

"Of course you do Rei-kami." Yuki said. "out of all the people in this world you are the only one who sticks with her friends like you do. you are beautiful inside out! Any guy is more than lucky to have you."

"Come on, we need to get Minna-chans memory back!" Reicheru said and they continued on into the creepy forest.

[Exactly what is so creepy about it? Are the trees dead? Do they have some kind of deformity that resembles a face? Do the branches look like the hands of corpses? Right now, the scene looks like a blank sheet of grey paper with the characters walking on it.]

"So Minna-chan how long have you been watching pokemon?" Yuki said.

"Uhum I dont' even remember that. But I'm sure its been a while. I only remember the lights flashing and pikachu screaming!!!" Minna put her hands on her head and closed her eyes "I wish it would stop!!"

[If anyone is at least moderately traumatized by a screaming pokemon and flashing lights, they might need to see a psychologist.]

"Calm down Minna-chan" Yuki shook her "you're all right now no ones going to hert you! Pokemon isnt real. only if you make it real." Yuki's words reached out and touched Minna-chan like no other.

"your right Yuki. I need to stay strong." Minna's eyes glowed.

[EGAD! SHE'S POSSESSED! Haha, joking!]

"Hey Yuki are we almost there?" Reicheru looked behind her to see the two following her.

"Yes she should just be a tiny bit further I can see her house!' Yuki smiled bright and beautiful. "we need to be careful when we walk in. we don't want her getting scared and casting a spell on us."

"Can she really do that?" Reicheru looked at Yuki with slight doubt like a lost boy.

"YES!" Yuki was very cautioned. "she can do almost anything she wants too! I wouldn't go questioning her unless you want to leave this forrest looking like a oger." Minna and Reicheru looked at each other and sweated.
"Well here's her house." Yuki said as they all looked at the great structure that went up into the sky.

As they walked in they could hear a soft beautiful voice say, "hello I see you are looking for something." there she shat on a grand luxorious chair was Luka Megurine.

[Are you making typos on purpose to make it look like people are constantly shitting?]

Her hair was about as long as the floor and was pink with soft pink highlights. She wore a tall witches black hat that has gold trim around the edges of the brim. She wore a long dark grey dress that was in two pieces.
Her top was dark grey with gold trim around her collar and edges. She wore a gold broatch like thing on her neck that was on her shirt. She had a headset that was brown with gold trim and a gold zig zag pattern on it. The part that went on her ears was blue with gold trim.
On her arm was a brown armband with creases and gold trim on the edges.She had a brown arm wangers with gold trim and gold writing with a blue rectange that lights up when she sings.
Her skirt was a dark grey with gold trim around the edges. On her waist was brown rectangles of brown with a gold zig zag pattern. She wore brown socks with gold trim that went up to her thigh and the inside of her skirt was a lighter brown.
her shoes went up to her knees and were gold they had brown shoelaches and brown heels. Areound her neck was a blue collar and her nails were blue. She looked very beautiful.

[Too much description. Reminds me of "My Immortal". I just skimmed it, sorry.]

"What do you want, children?" Luka closed her blue glowing ocean eyes. you could feel how powerful she was and mysterious just by looking at her.

Reicheru stood up and bravely said "we're heare to bring back the memory of our friend Minna-chan." She looked at Minna and Minna stepped forward.

"Luka Megurine I want my memory back. Please." Minna-chan bowed and got on the floor in front of her.

[I want my dignity back.]

"Hmmmm. Why should I do this for you? I am very powerful and very beautiful. If you wantme to help you you'll have to get someone just like me. How about you." Luka pointed at Reicheru.
"if you want me to restore your friends memory you'll have to be more than beautiful. You'll have to beat me at a singing contest. But I warn you, no one has beaten me before. I am a master of music."

["You have magic, but it's not going to work because you're not pretty enough. But we're not going to have a beauty contest, we'll just sing instead! Hohoho!" Was what I got from that.]

"Rei-kami you can do it!" Yuki cheered "you beat everyone at the school contest you can for sure beat her here!" I'll use my angelic powers to help her Yuki whispered to Minna.

"no Yuki!" Minna shouted "only demons can control music! you'll have to leave this to Rei-kami!" she held onto Yuki "we can only pray. you're an angel you can prey."

[Yes, become prey to the carnivorous wildlife and then get eaten by buzzards. Sounds good to me!]

"Your right I can." Yuki put her hands in front of her and prayed. "daughter of Reicheru. Holy god help your daughter. She needs you right now. I am your dicipel, listen to me. Come to your mother's aid mother of god, and help your mother."

"Preyig wont help you now! Come Reicheru Ketsuekineko-Oni come and sing with me! Ahhhhhhhhh!" Luka began to sing Just Be Friends. Her voice flew throughout the wind like the beautiful sound of death.

[I imagine the sound of death to sound like something between John Lennon moaning and America snoring.]

"Don't underestimate me!" Reicheru opened her lungs and started to sing My Sancutary from Kingdom Hearts. Her voice sounded like a flood of despair and beauty. It nearly drowned Luka's voice out!

[You mean you weren't breathing? Not to mention the both of them will wake up the birds.]

Both of them started to sing louder and louder. Luka sang "Just be friends all we gotta do just be friends. It's time to say goodbye just be friends. all we gotta do Just be friends" and Reicheru sang, "and you and I there's a new land. Angles that fly! My sanctuary my sanctuary yeah."
the sounds fought each other like the fire and water tribes. At the final moment Reicheru's music rang out into the heavens! her demonic powers took control and her eyes turned red. In her cat demon form she sang so loud and so beautiful it shattered Lukas eardrums!

"ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh!!!!!!!!!!" Luka cried and fell to the floor. her ears and eyes were bleeding like a flood of pain and agony and her voice stopped. "FINE FINE!! I WILL GIVE YOU YOUR FRIENDS MEMORY BACK!"
she raised her hand but before she could cast the spell she was ripped into pieces!

[It was the hairless purple wolf! Run away!]

"AH!" Minna screamed and hugged Yuki!

"What the fuck was that?!!?!" Reicheru yelled!

"You both are pathetic bitches." she came out of the dark. It was Lucy. her hair was a short pinkish red and she was wearing a white long gownd with no shoes. Her bare feet were on the floor and her eyes were the same color as her hair. On the top of her head there were two white horns.

"YOU ASSHOLE!!!" Reicheru screamed. "I'm gonna FUCK YOU UP! You destroyed the chance of Minna-chan getting her memory back!!!!!"

"I've always wanted to fight you. you think your life is hard? you dont' know MY life!"

[Lucy does raise a good point, I know more about Rei than her at this point. Let's see the other side to this story.]

"I know your life." Reicheru said coldly like the ice cold night "but you don't know mine. DO YOU KNOW WHAT I"VE HAD TO GO THROUGH TO BE HERE???" she slammed her fisht into the wall and made a 10 ft hole. Lucy stumbled back a bit.

"I've always wanted to fight you." Lucy took out her hands. "I'm going to blood bend you in half, Reicheru."

"NOT BEFORE I DO!" Reicheru whipped out her hand and they began to blood bend each other. They struggled and stuggled. both their arms shaking with the power. "A demons power to blood bend is a lot more stronger than yours."

[In the end, the grumpy vultures, ravens, and other scavengers will have a tasty meal, forgive and forget that you woke them up with a vocaloid song.]

"Don't talk so mighty. Just watch. I'll win." Lucy looked at her in anger.

"What makes you say that?" Reicheru looked deep into her blood red eyes.

"I'm not alone."

[Because I'm in the tree, watching all this and waiting for dinner!]

Chapter 17 - Rain of Heartbreak

"What are you talking about?" Reicherus eyes burned like the fire of the sun. "who's with you Lucy?" her eyes widened with surprise and she nearly cried tears of anguish. Standing next to Lucy was her father!
"Daddy?!?! What are yo udoing?!!" he was cloaked with his face hidden as usual.

"I have a surprise for you Reicheru. At first I wansnt going to invite you but since you are my daughter i thought you should know come and see me get married to your new mother." he grinned an evil grin of hate and darnkess.

[Holy shit! He's marrying Rei's worst enemy? No, that's not the scariest part, it's the age gap and the fact that he's marrying someone his daughter's age.]

Everyone gasped. "No! This isn't what I fucken think it is!" Reicheru cried!

"Thats right." Lucy said coldly "me and your daddy are getting married! There's nothing you can do about it. Nothing!" Lucy laughed a cruel and sadistic laugh. Her eyes were blood red with pleasure.

Reicheru's father leaned in on Lucy for a kiss. Their lips and tounges met at it was like a bomb went off in Reicheru's heart exploding it and sending blood everywhere.

"That's fucken disguesting! I'll never go to your wedding!" Reicheru threw up in her fucking hands. "YOU NASTY DISK!"

[Yeah, keep that disk away from my computer, who knows what kind of bugs it has!]

He threw his head back and laughed. "No no my dear. You will come. I've formally invited you to my wedding." he handed Reicheru a pretty wedding invatation card. "At least consider it. Wont you, dear? Its going to be really beautiful."

she took the invitation, "shut your mouth. you'll be lucky if I take another loo at it." the invitation burned in her hands like placing your hand on a hot stove. tears of blood started from her eyes and she felt like she was going to cry. Why would he hurt her like this?

[Yes, how dare he marry your worst enemy instead of killing you on the spot like he could've 16 chapters ago!]

"Me and Lucy both have something in commen. And she is my type of girl in bed." her father smiled. "I hope to see you tomorrow, Rei-chan. Bring your little brat too if you want."

[I'm guessing his type of woman is a girl. He even said so himself. This guy's a creeper!]

"SUCK IT DADDY!" Reicheru screamed as her father and Lucy flew away into the air. "Damn it" Reicheru cried "I can't believe this! That bitch and my father. This is all too strange!!!! Like death has crawled into my mouth and is poisoning all of my organs...I feel like I'm dieing fromthe inside out!"

Yuki put her hands on Reicheru's shoulders. "don't worry Rei-kami. Everything can still work out."

"How?!" tears of blood came down her cheeks. [Just so you know, tears don't have to be bloody all the time to make a point. We get it already, you're upset your dad is a homicidal maniac turned ephebo for your worst enemy.]

"You know what will really get to your father? is if you killed him and Lucy that day. In front of everyone. He'd be so embarrassed!" her eyes shone brightley as she smiled.

[You could always just refuse to go and let your sick bastard of a father have fun with his trophy wife. He seems way too into her to focus on killing you.]

"Yuki!" Reicheru gasped. "That's perfect! no that's better than perfect! Those two will pay!" she was so excited! "Minna, I am so sorry about your memory. That is one thing I wish we could fix."
Suddenly a strange feeling overcame Reicheru...a lusty feeling. She felt like she needed to drink blood. Her eyes became blood red like the sun and her veins popped out of her head. She could feel the hunger in her.
"R-Rei-kami. Your giving us that look..." Minna said scared.

["Braaaaaiiiiinssss," she demanded.]

Reicheru went over to luka's body and began sipping up what was left of her. It tasted so wonderful the blood of a witch. The blood dripped all over her mouth and body. she started smearing it all over her, rubbing her arms and legs and back.
She wanted to live in it. She wanted it in her! She bit off part of Luka's arm and chewed it down like a fleshy Twizzler of satisfaction and blood.

[It IS blood. Second, sounds like a freaky fetish going on. Right in front of the father!]

"Reicheru!" Yuki grabbed her "Stop it your scaring us! Stop it please!" Reicheru just looked at her and growled. When she was done there was nothing left of Luka but her clothes.

Then suddenly a light shone from above them and Elaine appeared! She flaw down to them and her long green hair floated around her like as if she were swimming. She was naked again like she was at birth.

"Oka-san." Elaine spoke "you have shown great bravery comming here and defeating the terrible witch Luka Megarine. in return for your bravery and heart as a true friend and warrior, I will give Minna-chan's hearing back to her."
Elaine raised her hands into the air and a light shone around Minna's head. she could feel the essance of life running through her like rushing river water to the south!

[She was deaf? I thought it was the witch who had her eardrums blown out. Why not restore Minna's memory? That's why the group came to the "scary" forest!]

"T-thank you." Minna=chan cried tears of joy and happiness. "T-thank you so much! This means everything to me!"

"Your welcome Minna-chan. Take care of Oka-san for me will you? You too Yuki."

"we will!" Yuki and Minna said.

"By Tenshikuzu." Reicheru waved. "Aishiteru you."

"Aishiteru you too, Oka-san." Elaine blue her a kiss and disappeared.

"We'll need to do some fuckin shopping for this wedding." Reicheru smirked and looked at Minna and Yuki. "NYA~ON!"

[I'm done for now, stay tuned for the next installment when we look at the highly inappropriate chapter. Until then, I'm hugging my rifle.]