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Nomisluck — WBJurodanRound1_3
Published: 2007-12-03 05:49:29 +0000 UTC; Views: 221; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 6
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damn I always rush the endings... FALCON!!Previous [link]
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Seth
Mika
Kazeielan
KingofWinterBrawl
CellphoneGirl (its like he was there) but not really, ahaha
's WinterBRAWL!
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Falcon Punch! Yay, I'm glad you got the entry in. I was a little worried there for a sec. Good luck!
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thxs, I wish you your best in the upcoming fight, im taking it a little hard right now, but ill rekindle my spirits so I can cheer you on
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Oh yeah, I just saw the results. Don't worry about it man, you dun good! I mean, your character's a dragon with guns! It doesn't get any crazier than that. There's always next time.
And you don't have to cheer for me or anything! I'm happy just knowing that you're even considering cheering
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ya I plan to be in foxnedes tournament if I can get in, but thxs fer teh compliment ^^ Ill try and touch up my comic so you can tell whats going on, also expect a spectator entry maybe if I dont die with school and all X3, appreciate et man ^^
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"It doesn't get any crazier than that."
... you obviously didn't read her opponent's (my) entry.
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very good you need to work on not rushing it so much
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...its a contest rawr! ill fix it up later
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what worked against you here: Doesnt look like you had much of a chance to clean up before submitting. Some of the sketchiness and smudges were very distracting Also some scene transitions were very confusing.
What worked for you: your over all style is unique and you sometimes used backgrounds to great effect I reccomend using them more. Thank you for the entry Nomisluck I appreciate it!
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thanks ^^ and yeah time is an issue for me, I worked really hard this weekend to finish this. I didn't have part two or three done untill the last few days which is improvement in speed for me, I hope in the future to clean up and finish coloring everything ive done in this tourney so I can atleast show it off without embarishment. thank you for the review!
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... wha? How did that thing fall on Mika? I don't get it.
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I was rushed, but I would have had Seth hold you down while Sarah grabbed a chunk of concrete from the rooftop and place it on you to hold you in place, srry about that
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