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Published: 2012-04-13 04:42:25 +0000 UTC; Views: 8782; Favourites: 365; Downloads: 101
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He rode their tandem bike, alone.Related content
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Your wonderful literary work has been chosen to be featured by DailyLitDeviations in a news article that can be found here: dailylitdeviations.deviantart.โฆ Congratulations on your DD!
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Hi there! Just a note to let you know I've featured this piece in my 2012 showcase of literature: [link]
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wow i was really impressed by this piece of art you draw a scene and delivered a whole message and put a lot of meaning in six simple words
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Just read some of the comments on this DD - there is a lot of visual art chosen for a DD but not so much quick and short sayings such as this - small poems and sayings should be represented more
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agreed, especially when they speak so much with little words effectively
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It is difficult to condense ideas in such a way. I congratulate the writer on this
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I wish that I'd written that. (Six words also, but.......).
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I adore it, the pure simplicity is the strength of it. Such a message in so little words. Wonderful work, awesome DD.
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That's sad..I wish I couldn't relate to it as much as I can right now.
ยคsighยค Tandem bikes can be quite..awesome.
Great short poem.
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It's nice, but I can't see how this got a daily deviation.
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Because they need literature deviations and no one likes to read?
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Because it's a quality example of micro fiction. (And I do love to read.)
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Lol, probably true.
Plus, it's a lot more time consuming to shift through the bad poetry and short fiction than it is to sort through the bad pictures and drawings.
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Very good piece- reminds me of the classic "shortest sad story" (For Sale. Baby Shoes. Never Worn). Short, (bitter)sweet, and to the point. Well done.
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Amazing short story. I doubt, as with the work above, wether any greater amount of words could transmit the same message and intensity of feeling.
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So few words, so much angst.
...Oh, look, now you've got me doing it.
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Very appropriate comment, sir.
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What a powerful message for a mere 6 words.
Wow.
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wow!! You're very talented to create such a strong image with 6 words
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I almost want to apologize...
This is so extremely powerful and shaking that it just makes emotions bubble to the surface.
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that whas the most amaysing 6 words iv read in my life
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Gorgeous. 
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The 6 words create a picture, which is a 1000 more words. c: I love this!
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This reminds me of that six-word story Ernest Hemingway wrote; "For sale; baby shoes, never worn." So many meanings in both, so many questions.
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Minimalism when worded correctly can say so much. And this confirmation of loneliness through a change in a relationship proves it.
If means a lot to me because in my own personal life: change was never a positive.
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I love how many possibilities this opens. Definitely wondering why he's alone
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Right through the feels.
Such power in such few words, good job!
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OMG!!! YOUR ICON!!! :catlaplz:
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