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Published: 2008-10-28 07:59:44 +0000 UTC; Views: 1105; Favourites: 25; Downloads: 5
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Description Finlly I did it ^^

it is Prolog for my Transformers Legends, page one

I'm sorry for every mestakes
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Comments: 34

BeeLovesCade [2009-11-13 20:11:32 +0000 UTC]

Really interessting!
*__*

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Nortstar In reply to BeeLovesCade [2009-11-13 20:23:37 +0000 UTC]

Thank you hun

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BeeLovesCade In reply to Nortstar [2009-11-13 20:27:24 +0000 UTC]

Welcome ^^

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Nortstar In reply to BeeLovesCade [2009-11-13 20:29:02 +0000 UTC]

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BeeLovesCade In reply to Nortstar [2009-11-13 20:39:05 +0000 UTC]

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ShadowDemon101 [2008-11-01 15:46:19 +0000 UTC]

Ooooooo sounds interesting...

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Nortstar In reply to ShadowDemon101 [2008-11-01 22:11:06 +0000 UTC]

Thank you so much

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ShadowDemon101 In reply to Nortstar [2008-11-05 23:15:03 +0000 UTC]

Welcome!

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Nortstar In reply to ShadowDemon101 [2008-11-06 08:59:35 +0000 UTC]

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Eri-chan89 [2008-10-30 16:54:42 +0000 UTC]

Weee! I finally get to read it!
Wonderfull! I it! XD

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Nortstar In reply to Eri-chan89 [2008-10-31 11:45:05 +0000 UTC]

Thank you so much

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Eri-chan89 In reply to Nortstar [2008-10-31 19:57:58 +0000 UTC]

You are welcome!

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Nortstar In reply to Eri-chan89 [2008-10-31 20:05:31 +0000 UTC]

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Armadria [2008-10-28 21:24:43 +0000 UTC]

I LOVE the last panel! It's so cute!!

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Nortstar In reply to Armadria [2008-10-29 12:35:34 +0000 UTC]

Thank you so much

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Klika-lio [2008-10-28 20:22:22 +0000 UTC]

Awww i felt very strange when i read it X3

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Nortstar In reply to Klika-lio [2008-10-28 20:28:19 +0000 UTC]

he he

my story are strange...sorry

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Klika-lio In reply to Nortstar [2008-10-28 20:33:20 +0000 UTC]

oh lol!Does Polishs must to use this '''' face all times? I haven't said anything strange XD However i felt very lovely it is a strange and good story.

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Nortstar In reply to Klika-lio [2008-10-28 20:35:29 +0000 UTC]

XD

thank you so much then ^^

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CherryBlossomDexia [2008-10-28 18:37:45 +0000 UTC]

Very good start! ^^ You really reel your audience in!

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Nortstar In reply to CherryBlossomDexia [2008-10-28 19:16:13 +0000 UTC]

Thank you so much

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NewArtist19 [2008-10-28 18:18:42 +0000 UTC]

It's great, good job ^^

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Nortstar In reply to NewArtist19 [2008-10-28 19:16:02 +0000 UTC]

Thank you so much

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KarToon12 [2008-10-28 15:59:45 +0000 UTC]

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Nortstar In reply to KarToon12 [2008-10-28 19:15:50 +0000 UTC]

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xXxAimeexXx [2008-10-28 15:18:42 +0000 UTC]

This is great so far!
on to page 2!!

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Nortstar In reply to xXxAimeexXx [2008-10-28 19:15:44 +0000 UTC]

thank you so much

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xXxAimeexXx In reply to Nortstar [2008-10-28 19:40:56 +0000 UTC]

welcomes!

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Nortstar In reply to xXxAimeexXx [2008-10-28 19:41:33 +0000 UTC]

^^

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yumekaczorek [2008-10-28 08:18:31 +0000 UTC]


Wreszcie skończyłaś, Złotko Tak sie cieszę

Prolog, strona 1 wygląda bardzo zachęcająco
No i oczywiście Blood jako narrator wymiata

Historyjka zaczyna się interesująco. Zwłaszcza, że Stardefenderzy mają czerwone oczy

Mistrzostwo pierwsza klasa

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Nortstar In reply to yumekaczorek [2008-10-28 09:27:34 +0000 UTC]

dziękuje ^^
też się cieszę, że to skończyłam, bo miałam wrażenie,że nigdy tego nie skończę ale w końcu mi się udało

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yumekaczorek In reply to Nortstar [2008-10-28 09:32:31 +0000 UTC]

proszę ^^

a ja wierzyłam, że kiedyś skończysz

(zgodnie z obietnicą skomentował kazdy
miłego czytania :evilllaugh

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Nortstar In reply to yumekaczorek [2008-10-28 09:36:32 +0000 UTC]

( dziekuje ^^ )

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yumekaczorek In reply to Nortstar [2008-10-28 09:42:37 +0000 UTC]

(proszę ^^ )

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