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Published: 2003-12-05 03:47:01 +0000 UTC; Views: 98; Favourites: 2; Downloads: 5
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Description now i have you here,
in my reality,
where what is real,
is only my perception.
now i can rip you,
right down your chest.
and, you see,
to know you
so completely,
is to hover your heart
over my lips,
and squeeze your soul
into my throat.
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Comments: 13

preetylux [2004-02-21 15:34:51 +0000 UTC]

MMm i like it.
I think all good poems come down to sex somehow.
I've wrote a new one called "losing my....."
no prizes for guessing what thats about!

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nxoxtxhxixnxg In reply to preetylux [2004-02-21 18:38:26 +0000 UTC]

naw not sex... just love!

but sex is good! ha lol.

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ashfiregirl [2004-02-14 12:28:58 +0000 UTC]

thats so cool.like your other poems, exept im reading them ages after other people have and they say what i think and im not sure whether you want feedback on old poems?
but i really like them all,including this one.
you definatley have a gift for capturing human emotions.
most people who have had a real relationship can relate to that.
keep it up

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nxoxtxhxixnxg In reply to ashfiregirl [2004-02-14 13:42:52 +0000 UTC]

feedback is feedback. this isnt that incredibly old. plus i do like this one, and i actually think its better than my writing now.

thanks for your words. truly appreciated.
real relationship...yes...

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tragicrabbit [2004-01-22 23:16:15 +0000 UTC]

hmm. beautiful image? er.. er.. i'm a little shaken. but that's okay. i like the 'squeeze your soul into my throat' part. but don't choke on it!!

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nxoxtxhxixnxg In reply to tragicrabbit [2004-01-23 00:14:08 +0000 UTC]

you know me. i write of horrible things (oh yeah this is about you... ) but in reality could never do it.

i ya too much!

take off your away message...lol. just for a little.

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Allegius [2003-12-10 13:32:09 +0000 UTC]

thematically I like it a lot and I understand where you're coming from. Stylistically... *shrug* it's okay. But I do like it. I hope you feel better

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versatil [2003-12-09 07:12:05 +0000 UTC]

hrm.. i don't get where they got zipper from

i see it kinda analagous to that whole 'eyes are gates to the soul' thing. In your mind's eye your heart can see past him all, in the physical sense and directly connect to his heart (a bond unique to you both?). and.. When this occurs in close proximity... my room gets warm! LOL

so emotional.. i like i like! ahhhh inspired again damn it
but i shouldnt be here >_< must work.. on.. finals... gah

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fragilefacade [2003-12-06 15:30:25 +0000 UTC]

I've never read a short poem that brought such a beautiful image into my mind. Instant favorite. It makes me want to write a prose describing this scene in it's full gore. Such a great message. Good job!

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nightmandl [2003-12-06 07:03:08 +0000 UTC]

friggin awesome! excellent imagery and very original keep it up

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undefinability [2003-12-05 22:02:11 +0000 UTC]

Funny, I too liked the "right down to the chest" idea more than anything else in this piece.
Different, yes, and also effective - amazing piece.

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syphix [2003-12-05 12:14:03 +0000 UTC]

very nice indeed. sorry if this comment isnt going to be so enthusiastic; bear with me here for i just woke up lol.

i like the ripping of the chest - also got a zipper feel to it. great job hun


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livingbyair [2003-12-05 04:27:49 +0000 UTC]

AH! that's my favorite from you!!!!

lovely, i see the zipper down the chest action, that was nice - of course rip is a better word for it than zipper but of course, we know what we're talking about

this is nice. yes mam.

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