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Sorry guys no pic yet.----
Okay, I am revising this story...mostly because it needed to be revised so horribly. shudder Anywway, I will place a note at the beginning of every chapter I revise, and I hope those of you who are reading like it. I hope those of you who are re-reading like i tmore.
Thanks!
Rated PG for some themes and violence.
oOo
“Get outta here, kid!” a harsh voice growled, pulling Danny out of his doze and back into the real world. It was a shame, really. The dream had been safe, and warm. More than a little annoyed, he mustered what anger he could and shot the homeless, bearded man that stood before him a glare. It was more than enough to get the man to back off for a few seconds while 15-year-old Danny Fenton stood calmly and brushed himself off.
“Whatever,” he muttered , half to himself, half to the other guy.
Back to aimlessly wondering the streets of New York, Danny thought wryly to himself, and stepped from the relative protection of the alley he'd been in onto the windswept street with a sigh.
As soon as he turned the corner, the look of annoyance fell, depression working across his face. He no longer had the energy to keep any mask up when he knew no one else would even give him a second thought. Everything in the last three months had happened so fast, that he could barely remember...and yet, time had seemed to crawl along at the same time. He looked down at his torn and dirty t-shirt, visible through the jacket in a much similar condition. He couldn't afford a new one, let alone a decent meal or a place to stay. So he could only wander.
He passed a bakery, and tried desperately to ignore the aromas that drifted out, mocking his hunger. He hurried past the welcome sign snorting at it. No one wanted him, and why would they? To those he had been closest to, he was a freak, and to every one else...well, most people seemed to be able to sense something off about him.
For a moment, he found himself tempted to reach through the glass and grab something, but shook the thought from his head almost immediately and hurried on. He hadn't stooped to stealing yet, and he wouldn't. Ever.
The cinnamon and yeast smells followed him down the street, teasing his nose and making his eyes water slightly. They reminded him of home...not that he could call that place his home any more.
How had everything gone so wrong? He wondered to himself for the billionth time. There were times he wondered if Johnny 13 wasn't permanently following him at a distance so his ghost sense couldn't pick him up. Danny had most certainly seemed to pick up his own bad-luck shadow. He shivered. He'd been living out like this for how long? He'd lost track. It seemed like years and yet days at once. He'd long since lost all track of time since his birthday. He'd turned 15 here...away from his friends and family...
He automatically snickered sarcastically at that thought. What friends? What family? He had no one.
As he turned the corner, he shoved his torn, mis-matched gloved hands in his pockets, accidentally finding the card that he hadn't thrown away. His feet stopped like they did every time he touched the thick, now crumpled paper. Slowly his arm withdrew, taking it out as he looked it over, reading it for the thousandth time. He didn't need to, he'd long since memorized the 10 digits on the card. No name was attached, but he knew who the phone call would reach.
After a moment of standing in the wind, biting his lip, he shook his head and shoved the card back in his pocket.
Never! He thought to himself. He would never...would he? Should he? He asked himself these questions every time...but this time was different. Had he finally reached the end of his rope? The end of his endurance? Here he was, barely able to sustain his human form, let alone his ghost form, homeless, jobless and more than a little depressed. He'd come here with such high hopes, but had figured out very early on that no one here wanted to be rescued as he'd once been so naive to think. He remembered when he had been innocent enough to believe that he could make it here...as a super hero.
But it didn't happen. Stupid comic books and childish dreams didn't come to life like he had imagined...or at all, really. People were afraid of him when he helped them, and he hated the looks they gave him. At least in Amity park they seemed to be more tolerant of him as a hero. Well, after the Ghost King incident in any case. Of course, he'd fought ghosts back then. Now, he lived in a city with no porthole, so few ghosts ever came this far. Actually, he hadn't met any. Sometimes, and ironically, he wished that one or two would show up. At least it would give him a way to vent his frustration.
His fingers stroked the card again, and he stopped again. So why did he stay and suffer like this? His family didn't want him, and the world didn't want him...but someone did...or they said they did...
He drew the card again from its sanctuary, and looked at it as if seeing it for the first time. His stomach growled with hunger. He'd definitely have plenty of food there. And a warm place to sleep. With the night coming up so quickly...even the homeless didn't want him hanging around. He scared them, and they didn't even know why...but he did.
For the first time in a long time, Danny slowly changed direction. How long had it been since he'd actually had a destination in mind? Normally he just wondered aimlessly, hoping for some way to come along that would allow him to survive. He felt his stomach growl. When was the last time he'd eaten? He couldn't remember that either. The hunger seemed to come and go, getting worse and worse as he went on without food.
He licked his lips, half in hunger half in nervousness, as he walked up to the gas-station's phone and picked up the receiver. He stood like that for several minutes, hesitating and wondering, before he finally placed the call collect. The one call he thought he would never make. It rang several times before it picked up.
"Vlad Masters speaking."
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Comments: 91
labpizza In reply to ??? [2004-12-04 17:41:32 +0000 UTC]
mabye i should get to read them ones too ^.^ and who knows.. mabye i'll mabye get into reading! ha! that would make my freinds laugh...
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Obi-quiet In reply to labpizza [2004-12-04 17:43:46 +0000 UTC]
LMHO! Well, I think it's a great past time. I appreciate that compliment. Thank you!
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Liaranne [2004-12-03 22:20:53 +0000 UTC]
Oh, you are *evil*. Now I'm dying with curiousity for what you have in store for Danny this time. By the way... wouldn't Vlad have a secretary or answering machine or something for his calls? After all, he is rich, and he probably gets wackos trying to call him... Of course, they couldn't me much more wacky than he is... And it could be a private line thingy, too... Hmmmm.
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Obi-quiet In reply to Liaranne [2004-12-04 07:20:40 +0000 UTC]
Yeah, it's a private line. Private cell phone. My friend and I thought about it. I'm going to put the phone conversation on...probably in this next chapter.
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QueenPsychoFerret In reply to ??? [2004-12-03 18:09:51 +0000 UTC]
why ish he calling teh evilness???? great storie so far!
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QueenPsychoFerret In reply to Obi-quiet [2004-12-03 18:20:06 +0000 UTC]
indeed i did see! tis awesome!!
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Obi-quiet In reply to QueenPsychoFerret [2004-12-03 18:23:52 +0000 UTC]
Thanks! I figured you'd seen, but...I'm a smart Alice. What can I say?
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Ruby-sky18 In reply to ??? [2004-12-03 14:27:38 +0000 UTC]
AAAH! No!! What's happening?? It is a pretty good depressing start (does that even make any sense?)
No need for back story really, we're so interested in what's gonna happen next! Poor Danny!!
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Obi-quiet In reply to Ruby-sky18 [2004-12-03 16:30:40 +0000 UTC]
Ah, but in the time that he flies to where he's going, we're going to get the back chapter.
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Ruby-sky18 In reply to Obi-quiet [2004-12-05 19:54:51 +0000 UTC]
You know what? I had written that comment not realising you had more chapters posted. @><@ Silly mE! Read those and the back-story is still interesting!
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Obi-quiet In reply to Ruby-sky18 [2004-12-05 23:44:48 +0000 UTC]
Tis fine. Thanks for your comments!
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Ruby-sky18 In reply to Obi-quiet [2004-12-08 00:13:01 +0000 UTC]
No worries, gotta watch someone whilst i'm floating round here..
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Obi-quiet In reply to Ruby-sky18 [2004-12-08 02:20:14 +0000 UTC]
Well, I'm glad you chose me!
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Ruby-sky18 In reply to Obi-quiet [2004-12-11 14:54:35 +0000 UTC]
Why not? ur one in a million deviants! Never a dull piece posted.
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Ruby-sky18 In reply to Obi-quiet [2004-12-29 23:11:40 +0000 UTC]
we should all feel loved no matter what!! Merry 2005!
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Ruby-sky18 In reply to Obi-quiet [2004-12-30 00:05:38 +0000 UTC]
Yay! Glad I have caught up on all my messages to you, excuse them if they are random, but my memory is fuzzy on what i've said previously...
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Obi-quiet In reply to Ruby-sky18 [2004-12-31 07:49:27 +0000 UTC]
Hey, I put up with randomness every day.
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Ruby-sky18 In reply to Obi-quiet [2005-01-10 19:12:20 +0000 UTC]
Backstreet Boy lyrics? Girl, you have taste!!!
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Obi-quiet In reply to Ruby-sky18 [2005-01-11 08:25:39 +0000 UTC]
Of course.
Actually, I'm more of an N-sync fan, but I really got it off of my favorite CD: Princess Diaries Soundtrack.
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Ruby-sky18 In reply to Obi-quiet [2005-01-13 20:36:38 +0000 UTC]
Ah, not seen that film yet but i have heard that it is pretty cool. Nsync are still good but not together anymore?
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Obi-quiet In reply to Ruby-sky18 [2005-01-14 19:20:21 +0000 UTC]
Don't know. not that much of a fan.
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Dragonpaws In reply to ??? [2004-12-03 12:47:35 +0000 UTC]
Poor Danny, alone and depressed. I wonder why his home isn't his home anymore.... hm.... And here's my DP-ignorance bursting out: Who's Vlad Masters? Is he that ghost adult who used to work with Danny's dad back in college? Or is he in another episode I haven't seen?
hehe... I see the next five chapters in my inbox, waiting to be read, but I've gotta eat some breakfast and head out the door to school. I'll read and review later tonight, you can count on it!
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Obi-quiet In reply to Dragonpaws [2004-12-03 16:30:02 +0000 UTC]
GASP! You don't know who Vlad Maters is?!?!?! he's the only other halfa in the world, and Danny can't beat him because he's got 20 years of practice and developement over him. Yeah, you've got the right person.
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Shadow-Sin In reply to ??? [2004-12-03 07:08:02 +0000 UTC]
I love it. A fan fic I read Loved and faved ................................ Oh MY GOD!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Obi-quiet In reply to Shadow-Sin [2004-12-03 07:33:15 +0000 UTC]
Why thank you! It will have more btw.
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RosaSpecter In reply to ??? [2004-12-03 06:06:10 +0000 UTC]
Ohhh Poor Danny!!! NOOOOOOOOO!!!!!! Dont go to Vlad!!!!!!!!!!!!! (Rosa tries to stop him) No Danny no!
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HPfreak In reply to ??? [2004-12-03 05:58:46 +0000 UTC]
omg, poor Danny on the streets! i'll take him!
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Obi-quiet In reply to HPfreak [2004-12-03 07:32:25 +0000 UTC]
I would too, hon. But he doesn't know that. *sigh*
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