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Obsess-Confess β Alternate version of Sacrifice
Published: 2013-07-31 01:01:36 +0000 UTC; Views: 707; Favourites: 12; Downloads: 3
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Originally I was going to have her pinned under his hand. :3Related content
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Wow, this is gorgeous! Is it bad to say I like this version better?
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not at all. 
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I have to tell you from a writer's point of view that the version you posted first is so much more poignant. Β The look on the SW's face and all. Β This version I feel like neither of them survived. Β This is not to say that this isn't a gorgeous piece.
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Nope I agree, and thank you so much!Β
That's he reason I changed it
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