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Published: 2008-01-11 02:23:25 +0000 UTC; Views: 260; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 2
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Description The Agean sun on your eyes and face,
you've found your heaven, it's just a place.
You're still running, you'll never stop.
Call out your song to the mountain tops.

The current embraces you and sings your song,
pulls you forward and pushes you along.
Your soul is the color of the sky at night,
black or blood red, a mariner's delight.

Honey into mead, does it meet your needs?
Falling and spinning, it's dizzy indeed.
Clawing and churning and gnawing at fear;
you've been running for so long, now home is near.

Sleep with your eyes open and glassy,
Now  you're entombed, under the sea.
You've found your peace and now you can rest,
sleeping forever in your Sunday best.
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Comments: 14

snowbunny3 [2008-01-12 19:25:44 +0000 UTC]

grrrr!
i wish i could write like u!
ur writing is always really good.

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omnipotent-lion In reply to snowbunny3 [2008-01-12 19:31:29 +0000 UTC]

D'aw...thanks. I wish I could draw like you.
And thanks for the fav!

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snowbunny3 In reply to omnipotent-lion [2008-01-15 23:38:50 +0000 UTC]

anytime! ur writing roxs ma soxs! ;D

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snowbunny3 [2008-01-12 19:24:38 +0000 UTC]

i get the same thing!
im almost all the time smilling and happy but for some reason i like dark stuff. its weird.
i liked how this one flowed really well. and i dont think i was 'that' dark.

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omnipotent-lion In reply to snowbunny3 [2008-01-12 19:31:08 +0000 UTC]

Haha, thanks XD
Weird, isn't it?

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Nojo-on-the-rojo [2008-01-11 02:35:31 +0000 UTC]

Ooh, very cool. It has a very " warm" feeling to it.

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omnipotent-lion In reply to Nojo-on-the-rojo [2008-01-11 02:41:08 +0000 UTC]

Thanks! And thanks for the

(It reminded me a little of your poem "Sea Wind", but I think that's only because they both involved sucide-by-drowning. The resemblance was not intentional, however.)

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Nojo-on-the-rojo In reply to omnipotent-lion [2008-01-11 02:45:17 +0000 UTC]

...Now that I think about it, there are some similarities between the two poems. XD Funky.

You're welcome for the fave.

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omnipotent-lion In reply to Nojo-on-the-rojo [2008-01-11 03:37:19 +0000 UTC]

I swear that was not intentional. Besides. Yours is much better XD

The ends are sort of similar, methinks. The last stanza has the same tone.

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Nojo-on-the-rojo In reply to omnipotent-lion [2008-01-11 21:59:53 +0000 UTC]

I know, chill. I'd be glad to have someone be inspired by me. You're poem's lovely, mine's... blah.

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omnipotent-lion In reply to Nojo-on-the-rojo [2008-01-12 02:10:23 +0000 UTC]

I like yours better XD

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Nojo-on-the-rojo In reply to omnipotent-lion [2008-01-12 02:51:07 +0000 UTC]

XD Well, we're both admiring of each other's work, we'll rest it at that.

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omnipotent-lion In reply to Nojo-on-the-rojo [2008-01-12 06:32:25 +0000 UTC]

Works for me.

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Nojo-on-the-rojo In reply to omnipotent-lion [2008-01-12 15:32:45 +0000 UTC]

^_^ cool.

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