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Published: 2007-01-15 18:46:19 +0000 UTC; Views: 10787; Favourites: 377; Downloads: 43
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Whenever our eyes meet,My heart beats
Just a little faster.
Whenever I see you staring at me,
My head spins
Just a little quicker.
Whenever I talk to you,
My world gets
Just a little brighter.
When you laugh at something I say,
My grin gets
Just a little wider.
I try not to let on,
but I still blush
when I see you.
And thatβs alright by me.
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Comments: 141
This is so true!! And I'm glad its not a hopeless crush poem.
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I really like this, it describes me at this time, also
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Goodness this described my feelings, the bad thing is its my best friend for life brother, I love him and I think he likes me Back by the way he's been acting 
β₯S/J forever β₯
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I know pretty much everyone here has said this, but yeah i really like this poem and it basically completely describes how i feel right now. You must be a mind reader O_O 
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This is amazing... I think you nailed it
If you find it hard to write romantic pieces, what you need is inspiration, my romantic pieces aren't all that great, but when I have inspiration, I just go nuts... Read from 'I. Blessed Rosacaea' to 'V. Anne' on my profile, they are a collection of romantic poems I wrote for someone and basically, it's like a story!
IT's the greatest I have ever done and I wouldn't have been able to do it without insipration 
But really, just so you know, this is exactly how I feel when I blush
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this is exactly how i feel with this guy named Alec.....
everything on here is true!
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omg this just like me and my crush. If a go home without talking to him once my whole day gets sadder.
I love this.
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It makes u feel all warm and fuzzy on the inside!
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LOL its epicness. THAT'S why it's your best.
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haha it's so simple yet complex light and heavy.... beautifal it describes the feelings so well great poem~
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Yes you can this is lovely!!! best crush poem i've seen on here so far! i might be being biased though I have a crush on someone right now d i feel the exact way about him that you desribe you feel in your poem!!!
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really, i'm not a great friend of poems or something like that.
but this one here just speaks out the truth and ahhhhh, it's so beautiful
helps me realzing my own crush now.....^///^
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I really like this! Great job, especially with the laughing one (i love that)
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This freaking describes all of my freaking feelings.
You are magic. O.O
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i like it... it describes how i have been feeling. good job
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thats really pretty 
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this is so cute!! and its crazy how perfectly this fits into my situation!
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I love this, so easy to relate to.
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it sounds good i wanted to keep reading but there was no more lolz
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This poem is...adorable seems like an immature word, but God Dammit, that's the only way to classify it. The stanza's are specifically placed in a nice order, and the short story it tells is cute.
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Thanks! Glad you liked it.
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I love the fourth stanza. That's exactly how I feel when I make my crush laugh.
Great job.
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It's actually really nice - short, sweet and simple...
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beautiful piece of writing i can understand y it got so popular
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I love this. Any person can relate, anyone like me who feels they may be falling in love with their crush haha.
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Hahaha, thanks, and good luck
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I absolutely love this poem
definite fav
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Thanks!
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this is beautiful
this perfectly resembles how i feel.
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You just described me when I'm with my crush.
I adore this.
Simple and true.
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Oops. I commented twice. haha.
That's how much I like this simple poem.
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