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omnipotent-lion β€” Crush
Published: 2007-01-15 18:46:19 +0000 UTC; Views: 10787; Favourites: 377; Downloads: 43
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Description Whenever our eyes meet,
My heart beats
Just a little faster.

Whenever I see you staring at me,
My head spins
Just a little quicker.

Whenever I talk to you,
My world gets
Just a little brighter.

When you laugh at something I say,
My grin gets
Just a little wider.

I try not to let on,
but I still blush
when I see you.

And that’s alright by me.
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Comments: 141

inspiredsinner [2009-04-10 11:34:27 +0000 UTC]

You just described me when I'm with my crush.


I adore this.
Simple and true.

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Crushed-oranges [2009-04-09 14:19:32 +0000 UTC]

I love this...so simple yet so true and relatable!
Those exact things make life fun

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omnipotent-lion In reply to Crushed-oranges [2009-04-10 03:46:55 +0000 UTC]

Don't they? Thanks! Glad you liked it.

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Shimmer990 [2009-03-09 00:33:55 +0000 UTC]

lol, that's got my current situation written ALL over it

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Orange-Lily [2009-02-01 16:03:32 +0000 UTC]

I was smiling through this...
I do these exact things....

Great poem.

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omnipotent-lion In reply to Orange-Lily [2009-02-01 19:27:48 +0000 UTC]

Thanks! I think we all do at some point XD

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Orange-Lily In reply to omnipotent-lion [2009-02-01 19:57:54 +0000 UTC]

[:
Yes, yes we do.

And you're welcome.

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shikafangirl14 [2009-01-22 22:23:58 +0000 UTC]

That is ME right now!!!

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omnipotent-lion In reply to shikafangirl14 [2009-01-22 23:53:05 +0000 UTC]

XD Best of luck, then!

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shikafangirl14 In reply to omnipotent-lion [2009-01-23 01:38:38 +0000 UTC]

Thanks!! ^^

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tombzz [2008-12-01 06:42:05 +0000 UTC]

quite touching, hehe, really enjoyed it

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Chiyoyeko [2008-11-07 04:03:24 +0000 UTC]

ah! ya! thats what its like...he definately brightens my day...gd job!

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NHNTKISTGMSSKH [2008-10-18 03:12:00 +0000 UTC]

exactly my feelings now.....
Just notice me already, dammit! sorry

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Miss-you [2008-10-17 20:55:57 +0000 UTC]

thats really touching, i actually feel all that when my crush is looking at me

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eep-chic [2008-10-07 00:27:40 +0000 UTC]

i don't have anything constructive to say....but i do love it very much. don't you love it when random people comment your stuff?!?!?!

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julietcaesar [2008-09-04 08:05:20 +0000 UTC]

Great work on this poem. Probably why it's so popular is because it's short, simple and still brings out the feelings.

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eky91 [2008-07-15 04:25:56 +0000 UTC]

aww...that made me smile!

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omnipotent-lion In reply to eky91 [2008-07-15 21:22:35 +0000 UTC]

Thanks! Glad you liked it.

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alicecullenroxx [2008-06-13 20:34:46 +0000 UTC]

wow i can relate to that-great job!

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omnipotent-lion In reply to alicecullenroxx [2008-06-14 02:01:52 +0000 UTC]

Thanks XD

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phyre24 [2008-06-03 03:40:43 +0000 UTC]

"When you laugh at something I say,
My grin gets
Just a little wider."

i totaly dispise poetry, but i came across this on a random deviation thing (yes, i do that) and i love it.
this line is totaly amazing. its cool how a person can just write soething without putting too much thought or backround mening onto it, yet it still means so much. You are amazing!

-J.R.

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omnipotent-lion In reply to phyre24 [2008-06-03 20:32:26 +0000 UTC]

Thanks! It's funny how this poem is so popular...I guess people like the simplicity of it, but I really didn't think that much of it at all when I wrote it. Strange, how that works Glad you like it!

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a-star-in-the-shadow [2008-05-29 02:02:12 +0000 UTC]

oh
my god...
;_;
its really beautiful <3
makes me feel warm and fuzzyy

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omnipotent-lion In reply to a-star-in-the-shadow [2008-05-29 02:33:58 +0000 UTC]

Thanks ^^ And thanks for the !

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a-star-in-the-shadow In reply to omnipotent-lion [2008-05-29 18:44:26 +0000 UTC]

<333

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AshleeBloom [2008-03-02 21:24:16 +0000 UTC]

Very nice. I love it!

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omnipotent-lion In reply to AshleeBloom [2008-03-02 22:29:37 +0000 UTC]

Thanks! And thanks for the

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rgroup [2008-02-17 05:29:07 +0000 UTC]

I feel the same way about a girl rite now

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omnipotent-lion In reply to rgroup [2008-02-17 22:43:13 +0000 UTC]

Good luck to you!

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rgroup In reply to omnipotent-lion [2008-02-18 02:48:09 +0000 UTC]

thanks

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xxxrockxxonxxx [2008-01-13 02:34:26 +0000 UTC]

that's so sweet! that's exactly how i feel right now!

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omnipotent-lion In reply to xxxrockxxonxxx [2008-01-13 04:15:09 +0000 UTC]

Thanks XD

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xxxrockxxonxxx In reply to omnipotent-lion [2008-01-13 17:00:28 +0000 UTC]

hey, no problem...I can't help but click fave when I see something this well written!

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SmandyDandy [2008-01-12 07:05:54 +0000 UTC]

Aww ^_^ I thought that was really good! I feel the exact way about someone

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omnipotent-lion In reply to SmandyDandy [2008-01-12 18:40:05 +0000 UTC]

Thanks XD Glad you can relate.

And, thanks for the fav!

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SmandyDandy In reply to omnipotent-lion [2008-01-12 19:32:02 +0000 UTC]

No problem! ^_^

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poeticsoul117 In reply to ??? [2008-01-11 05:17:18 +0000 UTC]

omg I LOVE this!!!!! I describes how I feel about my crush! ^-^

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omnipotent-lion In reply to poeticsoul117 [2008-01-12 02:09:36 +0000 UTC]

Thanks XD

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Tar1988 [2007-11-11 19:45:11 +0000 UTC]

The word 'amazing' does not quite cover it. As soon as I've found a more appropriate word, I'll get right back at you

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omnipotent-lion In reply to Tar1988 [2007-11-11 20:09:43 +0000 UTC]

Wow, haha, thanks. Coming from such a great writer like you, that means a lot!

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orangebat [2007-10-23 23:14:33 +0000 UTC]

This made my day.
Thank you.

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omnipotent-lion In reply to orangebat [2007-10-23 23:37:27 +0000 UTC]

Haha, glad to hear it!

Thank YOU!

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Shelly126 [2007-10-18 03:40:28 +0000 UTC]

OHEMGEE. I FEEL THE SAME WAY. It's embarrassing, whenever I get around him, my face turns red (I think...!)

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omnipotent-lion In reply to Shelly126 [2007-10-18 21:19:38 +0000 UTC]

Aw...that's cute ^^

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Lbblb In reply to ??? [2007-10-11 19:13:37 +0000 UTC]

very nice.

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omnipotent-lion In reply to Lbblb [2007-10-11 20:47:12 +0000 UTC]

Thanks!

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ishtar-jachi In reply to ??? [2007-09-24 21:13:19 +0000 UTC]

I absolutley love this. It reminds me of school and David.

Yeah... his name is David. Don't tell anyone, ya hear?

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omnipotent-lion In reply to ishtar-jachi [2007-09-24 21:26:28 +0000 UTC]

Aw, thanks! Hehe....my lips are sealed ^^ Good luck with that!

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CassandraLeigh [2007-09-21 03:55:44 +0000 UTC]

I love this poem.. It describes how i feel right now for someone and they don't even know it.

I wish I was able to write a poem like this and not ones about being alone. Because I love this sort of poem.

You seem to have all the right words.. it's truely amazing!

Love it!

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omnipotent-lion In reply to CassandraLeigh [2007-09-21 21:33:17 +0000 UTC]

Thanks so much ^^

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