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Published: 2014-05-09 02:34:55 +0000 UTC; Views: 1987; Favourites: 179; Downloads: 0
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Cosmic is MY OC, owned by me.Artwork took 2 hours.
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Your style is excellent, the art itself has a good impact. The technique is spot on. I just can't stand the design. I hate saying that, especially since you have such obvious talent.
The colors clash very much. It looks like you mashed a few designs together here. The white and pink look great, and come across as a Celestia-like design. The blue in the mane (which I recommend you get rid of) isn't pretty with the pink. The green tail I like, but it doesn't match her mane colors like it should. It would be like having one half of your hair naturally grow brown and the other half naturally blonde. Odd, and not a wise design choice. Then we have the blue wings. Why are her wings a different color? I see this done a lot and it almost never is done correctly. It looks like you took RD's wings and put them on your pony. Maybe the wings could have colored tips, like Cadence.
If you decide to change the design of your character, I have two ideas. 1. Sticking with the cosmic theme, give your pony a blue and purple mane and tail. Give her wings light blue or violet tips. 2. Keep the white coat, and make both the mane and tail green. Perhaps she could wear a garland of pink flowers and have pink eyes, if you wish to keep the pink. This will make it more of a nature alicorn design, but it will still be very pretty.
Anyway, that's all I really have to say. Take it or leave it. Despite my issues with design, I'm absolutely in awe of your style!
-Epixelle
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Hello there.
I appreciate your honest critique and the efforts you've put into it.
Unfortunately it seems that it has expired due to my temporary hiatus, if you feel like resubmitting Ill be more than happy to accept the critique so that it is viewable to the public.
Thanks again
-CosmicΒ
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Eh, no it's alright. I was just talking about minor design things.Β
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Oh well, alright then 
It wasn't bashing at all, it seemed fair to me.
I appreciate fair critique when I see it.
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Ah, no problem! ^^' it's nice to see someone who can maturely handle critique... I've seen much worse reactions!
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I've had messages from other users about the same thing you talked about in your critique but they were nothing but trolls and I can tell the difference between pony-bashing trolls and actual critique, you're the first and only person I've ever wanted to accept.Β
If its a matter of not remembering what you said I can just copy and paste what you did write and you can just post it again, but its not a big deal whether or not you want to.Β
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If you'd like me too resubmit, please send it to me in a note
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I love your character all except for one thing:
The paintbrush in her cutie mark looks just like Paint Brush's cutie mark but without the red paint trail
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THIS IS NOT HATE!
I absolutely adore your artwork, (much better than mine xD), and I love Cosmic.
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Hello friend, do you have a picture you can show me?
I apologize for any mix up, there are so many Pony OC's out in the world now these days, alot of people end up coming up with the same types of cutie marks sometimes. Cutie marks unite!!!!
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You don't have to apologize! I just realized that they actually don't look anything alike except for the same color paint at the tip. The best online drawing program I have is MS Paint, (Which I always accidently spell "MS Pain") and my drawings in the internet look terrible xD
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I can draw Paint Brush much better in real life, but this is the best I could do with a wireless laptop mouse ;-;
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This looks stunning! The wings looks so gorgeous and the perspective is awesome^^ <333
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This style is gorgeous and so pretty, wonderful work.
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