faeriecrone [2006-07-07 21:40:19 +0000 UTC]

I have walked labyrinths to meditate and it does exactly what the piece says. It is very old magic and very powerful for self revealing and healing.

This is a beautiful piece of poetry. I am confused ... are you the author and the artist? Who is Arte?

thanks!

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crazynloveless [2005-10-08 18:51:01 +0000 UTC]

Hi,

I really quite like this. There was a stanza in particular that 'tickled my fancy'.. It would have to be:

"In the winding path, that mystic old pattern
You’ll reveal what is for you
Look down at your feet
Get rid of those shoes
And feel just where you tread."

It gives a very strong, and positive message - And the portayal of it all is well thought out and delivered excellently. I look forward to reading more from you!

-Chloe

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Time-Lapse [2005-09-13 06:10:57 +0000 UTC]

"Allow yourself to see"

Intresting line its true we dont often do this.

"The only place you can ever unwind:
You’ll find yourself at the center."

I love this...

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fishstyx [2005-08-30 13:47:33 +0000 UTC]

That was actually pretty calming.
I think it's the solitude of a maze that lets us wash away
our problems.
Um, me thinks there's a typo in the last stanza...
Not really sure tho.
Um, this poem was beautiful and soothing.
Nice one

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jaedin [2005-08-22 06:39:03 +0000 UTC]

What a great message this delivers. Positive and power in just a few lines. Really well done. Minor spacing errors, but they are easliy overlooked.

Look down at your feet
Get rid of those shoes
And feel just where you tread.


I love the image the image this produces as you read it. Again, truely a great piece...I think I will keep it!

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