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Published: 2005-06-17 08:50:40 +0000 UTC; Views: 546; Favourites: 1; Downloads: 23
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Description
Bewildered eyes, they never rest,expressing only questions.
The light they used to radiate
is growing dim as all the memories
leak into an all consuming void.
A voice, a scent, a touch,
oozing familiarity,
might stir them still.
But soon enough that spark will die.
Those eyes that for a while
recognized his daughter
drown in shadows again -
slowly growing darker.
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Comments: 11
anarchypress [2005-09-28 14:05:17 +0000 UTC]
I like this one as well, Ella.
Nits: "eyes, they" "oozing familiarity" and "stir" Also, I recommend you change "are leaking" to simply "leak."
~M
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OracleGlass In reply to anarchypress [2005-09-28 20:23:59 +0000 UTC]
I'm very glad to see that you found yet another piece in my gallery that you like..but
for the typos...mhh I will sell it as part of my unique charm? Hehe I fixed it. Thank you so much
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NameImplied [2005-09-12 11:31:14 +0000 UTC]
.. closer to God.
A lovely accompaniment to my photo, thankyou.
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OracleGlass In reply to NameImplied [2005-09-12 16:00:15 +0000 UTC]
I have to thank YOU for the photo..saw and knew it was perfect. I'm very happy that you think the same
xElla
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CaptainOzz [2005-09-05 18:32:15 +0000 UTC]
My grandmother (who recently died) had alzhimers and this is descriptive of how she was. But everything does get through just not processed... its a sad sad thing indeed
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OracleGlass In reply to CaptainOzz [2005-09-05 20:29:09 +0000 UTC]
I'm really sorry to hear that...of course its even harder when your own family is involved.
I once saw a movie abt a place where the souls would go to decide which memory they would like to spend eternity with...Memories are precious, they are the records of our life and its a really scary thing to imagine loosing them.
Thank u so much for stopping by and reading this. Its means a lot as it is personal for me too.
xElla
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fishstyx [2005-06-17 15:59:15 +0000 UTC]
Sweet bitterness...
That must be a hell of a way to go...
Losing your mind
without knowing it...
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