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Published: 2018-01-11 19:47:53 +0000 UTC; Views: 3985; Favourites: 88; Downloads: 0
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And I am back with a new page! The holidays ended up distracting me for a good while but I hope you guys like it.
So, we are back with these two mysterious people and it seems like some time has passed since our friend was trapped in the temple.
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I bet the ittri needs to get to some sort of power source or else he weakens over the time
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Super happy to hear that, thank you!
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You're welcome <3
Now I finished it and can't wait for new pages, such a great work <33
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Yay! New page! Some of the wording could be tweaked for better language, but it isn't important. Focus on the plot and characters!
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Hey thanks! I'm glad you have been enjoying the story so far ^^
And I agree with you. Since English isn't my first language it can be a bit tough to come up with good sounding lines. If you'd be up for it I'd love to hear some correction suggestions through a note
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I can help you out perhaps when you finish the chapter to tweak the wording. In the meantime I think you should just focus on your story and characters. Corrections can be done later otherwise they might distract you from the important parts in the comic.
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Love the background!! Also the story keeps catching my attention!!
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That's great to hear, thank you so much!
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Two years? I thought it might be longer than that. XD
also, Haiem, english please. It's 'dumb luck'. (joking. I actually don't mind that grammatical error, I just thought it sounds funny when I first read it)
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Oh no please, if you see typos feel free to tell about them to me. English isn't my first language so I might miss some things. ^^
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Well, alright then. :3
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I find Haiem to be... suspicious >.> but I do love his design <3
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Isn't everyone in this story suspicious so far? xD
We basically know nothing about any of the characters.
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So what are you waiting for ? xD
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I can't believe Ive been watching this update for so long and haven't bothered reading it :'D
It's got some really cool concpts! I'd love to do some fanart one day
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I hope you caught up to the story now xD
And oh wowie, that would be a dream come true!
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What? I can't hear you with my magnanimous popped collar cape covering my ears!
TWO YEARS????? TRAPPED IN THE TEMPLE?????? FOR TWO YEARS??????My mortal mind cannot even.
Lovely page!
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Haha yup. That happened.
Thanks!
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Pft, you need to have some PATIENCE when dealing with celestial beings of great power. Glad to see this comic again!
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I'm glad to finally have this page done, it's been mocking me half colored for the past three weeks... :'D
Better late than never!
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Oh I know that feeling. Hate it when WIPs get sassy. Least it is done though! ^^
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I think that's what he is.
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So we're still trying to find out his name?
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