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orangetot — Day Out
Published: 2004-03-03 20:04:57 +0000 UTC; Views: 125; Favourites: 1; Downloads: 15
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Right where you left me, sweetness,Right here in this mess, always,
With the pieces you bring, for comfort,
With the pieces you take, for the memory,
Twisting the hint, sometimes,
Twisting the knife, I think.
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again, your imagery and content are so personal
that the auidence has little choice but to personalize it
and make associations
I am always left wondering about the story
and thinking intently about your choice in words
I love your work, and this piece is no exception
you are inspiring
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Thankyou. I'm glad you can see the way that my life is spelt out here for those who can read it.
you really do flatter me too much though, i pay no attention to device and measure, only what i feel i need to write. i have no credit as a poet, only and emotional mess.
Thankyou for your time taken to comment and thought into my work though, i really do appreciate it.
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