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Description The other day, Linus noticed all the horses out in the paddock seemed to be restless, whinnying shrilly and avoiding the far end of the paddock, shuffling nervously. Expecting a predator of some sort, Linus enlisted Jason's help and both nervously headed over to see what was wrong.

There, at the end of the field, they saw the back of a small white foal, the legs tucked in around it. It was not all that unusual for strange foals to turn up out of nowhere at SPaVES - with the unruly stallions often covering mares off schedule, every now and again there would be a little result of an unplanned pregnancy. From a first glance, the creature seemed to be one of Rev's doomed normal foals, and the two men sighed slightly, expecting they would have to bury the poor thing.

However, to their surprise, the little thing seemed to be moving slightly, and Linus went over to check it out excitedly. However, to his horror, he found the foal's front end was soaked in blood and bite marks, all of which were obviously caused by the foal itself. As the two men watched, the foal's bloody, marred flesh started to grow back, and within minutes, the colt was a pristine white, his coat unmarred.

The foal has been transferred to Lockdown, and though nobody likes to admit it, everyone is rather terrified of the little colt and his loathing stare.

Full Name: (Unchosen)
Barn Name: Atol
Gender: Male ♂
Breed: Unknown, but he seems to have amazing conformation.
Age: Colt
Height: We haven't had the chance to measure him.
Colour: Pure white, with crack and stitch markings.
Discipline: Unknown.
Sire: Unknown. May be one of the SPaVES stallies, but we're not sure. He bears resemblance to Revenir, and yet also shares some traits with Maverick. So who knows?
Dam: Unknown.

Personality: He is absolutely filled with hate. He hates everyone and everything - we've never seen such anger and animosity before - not even Happy was this unsettling. Despite his young age, he has ancient eyes, and he can chill your heart with a single look.

Other:
He is completely crippled - he can't move his limbs, except for a very weak lifting of his head and a bit of twitching of his legs. He looks like a broken doll.
He literally eats himself. He will take bites out of his legs and shoulder with his sharp teeth, and later on he will grow it all back. We've never seen him eat anything else.
He has regenerative abilities.
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Comments: 156

orengel In reply to ??? [2012-03-30 11:58:42 +0000 UTC]

Awesome! That's the reaction I hoped for <3

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Squirrel-X-Squad In reply to orengel [2012-03-30 17:13:40 +0000 UTC]

his eyes draw you in!

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Kagome963 [2011-07-09 03:03:23 +0000 UTC]

I have a mare in mind that Im going to make. But anyway, she might be the right match for this colt.

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Kagome963 In reply to Kagome963 [2011-07-13 22:16:32 +0000 UTC]

Here is the mare I was talking about.
[link]

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DivineVeritasCenter [2011-07-02 10:07:33 +0000 UTC]

Is this little guy up for lease?

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orengel In reply to DivineVeritasCenter [2011-07-03 17:04:38 +0000 UTC]

Probably not

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DivineVeritasCenter In reply to orengel [2011-07-03 20:20:35 +0000 UTC]

Aww. Ok. He looks a little of a handful to. xD

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orengel In reply to DivineVeritasCenter [2011-07-04 04:19:58 +0000 UTC]

He is xD

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DivineVeritasCenter In reply to orengel [2011-07-04 04:37:20 +0000 UTC]

Do you have any donkeys or mini's or small horses for lease?

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orengel In reply to DivineVeritasCenter [2011-07-04 04:40:06 +0000 UTC]

ERM. No, I don't believe so - not really my thing i'm afraid xD;

I have a very fluffy footed stally, but he's definitely not a mini

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DivineVeritasCenter In reply to orengel [2011-07-04 08:21:54 +0000 UTC]

Aww. I love fluffy horses. Who is it?

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orengel In reply to DivineVeritasCenter [2011-07-04 09:19:55 +0000 UTC]

I was talking about this guy [link]

However after digging, it seems these two have fluffy feet too xD; [link] [link]

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DivineVeritasCenter In reply to orengel [2011-07-04 21:22:37 +0000 UTC]

I love Nodin, but I can't find a breed sheet for the breed.

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orengel In reply to DivineVeritasCenter [2011-07-04 23:22:54 +0000 UTC]

There is no official breedsheet - all the info is on the first set of adoptables I did.

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DivineVeritasCenter In reply to orengel [2011-07-05 22:41:30 +0000 UTC]

I looked. It looks epic. If I lease him, and he gets attached to one of my stable hands, is that fine?

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orengel In reply to DivineVeritasCenter [2011-07-06 02:42:04 +0000 UTC]

I don't think Nodin is likely to get attached to a stablehand - he's always seemed to show more interest in horses, so we think he'll gravitate towards a magically powerful horse of some sort But by all means you can breed your own Impono out of him if you wish.

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DivineVeritasCenter In reply to orengel [2011-07-06 04:52:32 +0000 UTC]

Ok. Will it kill them if the do get attached to one of our horses, and then has to go back to SPaVES?

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orengel In reply to DivineVeritasCenter [2011-07-06 15:02:08 +0000 UTC]

If an Impono bonds, it will do everything it can to stay with it's master. It is possible to stay away, but the Impono will do everything in it's power to make it's way back.

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DivineVeritasCenter In reply to orengel [2011-07-06 18:43:07 +0000 UTC]

Ok. Can I lease him if that is possible?

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orengel In reply to DivineVeritasCenter [2011-07-06 18:52:28 +0000 UTC]

You can

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DivineVeritasCenter In reply to orengel [2011-07-11 03:22:26 +0000 UTC]

Awesome! Sorry for the late reply. I was busy. I shall draw him soon.

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Navare [2010-11-28 23:45:26 +0000 UTC]

Has he got a name yet? Or it is still up in the air?

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Zarness [2010-11-27 14:46:15 +0000 UTC]

D'aww! He looks like he needs a hug!

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orengel In reply to Zarness [2010-11-28 16:39:28 +0000 UTC]

Maybe he does D:

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Zarness In reply to orengel [2010-11-28 16:48:15 +0000 UTC]

-walks towards the colt with open arms- Come here lil babe, I just wanna hugz you!

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NewAgeStables [2010-11-06 04:41:16 +0000 UTC]

I WANT TO SEE MOAR OF HEEM. YES, YES I DO.
With a name.

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orengel In reply to NewAgeStables [2010-11-06 04:42:20 +0000 UTC]

Oh gosh, I need to figure out how to draw him again XD; I suppose he can't remain disabled as a stally...

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NewAgeStables In reply to orengel [2010-11-06 04:51:55 +0000 UTC]

Maybe he's got cast iron splints holding him up.

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orengel In reply to NewAgeStables [2010-11-06 05:03:51 +0000 UTC]

Oh gosh, maybe indeed - though I dunno how he'd walk XDDD;

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NewAgeStables In reply to orengel [2010-11-06 05:15:26 +0000 UTC]

He already has regenerative powers...mehbeh he got the super strength too.

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orengel In reply to NewAgeStables [2010-11-06 05:19:13 +0000 UTC]

Oh my, yes o.o Or Telekinesis, in which he can lift himself up with MINDPOWAZ!1!!1!!

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NewAgeStables In reply to orengel [2010-11-06 05:25:15 +0000 UTC]

FFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFF
A HOVERQUINE WITH LEGS AND FREAK POWERS?!
And speaking of hoverquines...I've got SOOO many sets of lines laying around my sketch books right now. XD It's much too fun to draw legless horses. Gives me a break from dealing with the awkward crap.

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orengel In reply to NewAgeStables [2010-11-06 05:36:51 +0000 UTC]

Haha, I trust you'll be making a Hoverhorsie soon?

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NewAgeStables In reply to orengel [2010-11-06 05:49:12 +0000 UTC]

PFTHELLYES! As well as waiting for that design you offered.
Thankfully I've myself plenty of lines available.

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orengel In reply to NewAgeStables [2010-11-06 06:01:15 +0000 UTC]

OH! I forgot XD; What base colour and gender did you want again? Or was it anything goes?

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NewAgeStables In reply to orengel [2010-11-06 06:02:20 +0000 UTC]

It was one of those 'surprise me' moments.
Though a stally (sterile, of course) would be preferred. Because I like having haut horses that no one else can touch.

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orengel In reply to NewAgeStables [2010-11-06 06:15:15 +0000 UTC]

Will do! Would you like actual unnatural markings on the stally, or just natural colouring with sparkles and rainbow fart? XD

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NewAgeStables In reply to orengel [2010-11-06 06:17:47 +0000 UTC]

NO RAINBOW FART! -flails about madly-
UMMMM....mostly natural, but with a 'flair', I guess. MAKE 'im SPARKLE!

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orengel In reply to NewAgeStables [2010-11-06 06:36:50 +0000 UTC]

Haha, alrighty he shall be natural with SPARKULZ

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MissAsami [2010-10-16 15:12:42 +0000 UTC]

Oh the poor dear. =[

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orengel In reply to MissAsami [2010-10-16 15:24:22 +0000 UTC]

Yeah :<

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samuRAI-same [2010-10-13 02:45:14 +0000 UTC]

ah this little guy :3

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orengel In reply to samuRAI-same [2010-10-13 02:53:24 +0000 UTC]

Yeah ^^ I didn't realise I hadn't uploaded him into the SPaVES group XD;

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samuRAI-same In reply to orengel [2010-10-13 02:54:03 +0000 UTC]

lol bad bad orengle XD thats not good XP

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Pestdoktor [2010-09-19 17:46:28 +0000 UTC]

Wow, he's creepy, isn't he? But I still like him, he seems to be very mysterious :3 Hopefully he gets better

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orengel In reply to Pestdoktor [2010-09-20 01:11:23 +0000 UTC]

He is And yeah, hopefully *~*

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saphiraly [2010-09-18 06:08:36 +0000 UTC]

Wow, what a scray foal...

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orengel In reply to saphiraly [2010-09-18 06:13:12 +0000 UTC]

Just a tad

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saphiraly In reply to orengel [2010-09-18 06:14:31 +0000 UTC]

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NewAgeStables [2010-08-20 00:02:18 +0000 UTC]

I've been thinking about it for a while, but Atol, when changed to the word 'atoll', means a coral island of sorts built up around an eroding volcano (or so my crappy research says). With this I've been randomly putting names together as to what you could make his full name (I hope you don't mind ).

Erosione dei tuoi Occhi (Erosion of your Eyes - Italian)
Ripercussioni Acide (Acidic Repercussions - Italian)
Husk Det (Remember This - Danish)

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